Date: 08/09/2011 - 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 28
wwoooowww....I didn't see that coming at all. I don't even know what to say, just wow. I'm kind of upset, it was good but just so upsetting. I don't know where this is going now, I think I might be in shock.
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I had this fluffy ending all planned out and it took me so long to finish because that ending didn't really fit.
Date: 07/19/2011 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 27
Wow ... *bats eyelashes* I want some more...
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 07/19/2011 - 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
"his bones were breaking but still Angel's hair did not move" *titter*
Author's Response: Angel's stupid hair, always good for a laugh!
Date: 07/19/2011 - 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow! Surprising, was so not expecting that. Loved the last line x
Author's Response: That line was the first idea I had for this story, everything took shape around it. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 07/19/2011 - 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ooooh, intriguing - am already hooked ... Your descriptive language is very engaging and I'm enjoying the edginess - looking forward to seeing where this is heading x
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I got a bit sidetracked on this story, trying to come up with an ending. When I finish my current project, "The Secret of the Boy You Never Kissed," I'm planning to end this tale. Thanks for the comment and the compliment.
Date: 06/29/2011 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter 27
This is a wonderful story. Hope you finish it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have the chapter half written and I don't know what my problem is. I will finish it for you, though! I promise.
Date: 06/28/2011 - 06:23 am Title: Chapter 10
This is a great story, stop doubting yourself. Love Odin's ravens.
Author's Response: Odin's ravens were a lucky find on the internet. Thanks so much for the comments and for reading the story.
Date: 06/28/2011 - 06:16 am Title: Chapter 9
I didn't see it coming...I thought he would join Toy's fight, being a boxer. Good move.
Author's Response: This was my attempt to write a thriller glad the twists are genuinely twisty! Thanks so much for commenting!
Date: 06/28/2011 - 05:59 am Title: Chapter 7
Cool twist. I never saw it coming. You're a very good writer, MDL...
Author's Response: Thanks so much, evelyn! Glad you didn't see the twist coming.
Date: 05/31/2011 - 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 27
This story totally rocks. The supernatural scenarios are really creative and interesting; the characterizations are so intense and realistic; and the spuffy love/sex is amaaazing. Hope you will have time to continue it soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's really only one chapter left, and I've been so preoccupied with "The Secret of the Boy You Never Kissed," that I haven't found time to finish it up. Thank you for the compliments, especially, oddly enough, about the sex. I always worry it's corny.
Date: 04/01/2011 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 16
I thought this was brilliant. I don't want to read the reviews on this chapter because I'm afraid my heart will break if people gave you crap about it. You captured the core of what drove them, both drove them together and drove them apart. The Angel bit was very well done. I'm in awe ! :)
Author's Response: No one gave me crap about anything, I think I have the kindest commentators of anyone. Thanks so much for reading and for the review!
Date: 04/01/2011 - 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 10
I picked up this story late, Minx, and I'm sorry for that. I actually became interested in it because you were as enthusiastic about Kitty Karnivore as I was :D Anyway, I'm up to chapter 10 right now and so impressed with your writing ability and your story-telling. Very cool stuff. You were rightfully nominated for that award girl! Look forward to reading more :)
Author's Response: That's incredibly sweet of you, and how awesome was Kitty Karnivore's story? Thank you for commenting and for reading.
Date: 03/26/2011 - 12:38 am Title: Chapter 27
Oooh, I wonder what plans Oz has up his sleeve! And how does Spike fit into it.
Btw, LOL to your end notes. :D How do you know there are no werewolves in the Schenley Park? You can never be too sure. ;) Also, pleeeease give us more!
Author's Response: You're right, I shouldn't have implied the park was werewolf free. Thanks for the comment!
Date: 03/26/2011 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 26
What a nice touch with the Randy and Joan. :) I love Tabula Rasa!! Amazing way to describe their differencies and how Buffy was finally able to understand Spike's needs. I can't believe there's only one more chapter before I'll have to wait for an update. Darn it! I love this story. :)
Author's Response: You're so sweet, thank you.
Date: 03/24/2011 - 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 27
Absolutely LOVE this chapter! Who knew I'd love a chapter without any Spike or Buffy. Happy to see Oz in the story. I'm sooo curious as to what his plans are, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad it was interesting to you without the main characters.
Date: 03/24/2011 - 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 26
I'm late! But I loved this chapter! Great discribtion of their feelings! I LOL-ed when everyone gaped at them in the tatoo parlor :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/23/2011 - 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 27
Loved how you weaved new/ yet old characters into this story. I can totally picture Veruca being a tattoo artist. Her body was littered with them. As for Oz, I think his concern with who the vamp and human--but not so human that were in the shop is a lot more than he's letting on to Veruca. Looking forward to more
Author's Response: I actually got the idea from a story by Verity Watson. Thanks for the comment!
Date: 03/22/2011 - 07:02 am Title: Chapter 27
Love to see another world of things going on in Pittsburgh. I do wonder what he intends to do with the vampire. Allies are a good thing, and Spike and Oz could so be friends. Not sure things are going to end well with Veruca. Update soon.
Author's Response: I can't see things going well with Veruca, either. Glad you liked a glimpse into Oz's world. Thank you so much for commenting, and then commenting again when the internet ate your first comment.
Date: 03/22/2011 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter 26
I'm pretty sure I reviewed this before, but I don't know what happened to it. :) I love the poetry of her understanding why he likes the power she has over him. I also love them being so naughty after the tattoo. Pretty cool. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you, that's a huge compliment that her moment of understanding struck you as poetic.Glad you liked the tattoo parlor part, too. I was trying to make the love scene a little different. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 03/22/2011 - 03:16 am Title: Chapter 27
Love the way you intergrated Oz and Veruca into the story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/22/2011 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter 27
Good job on writing an interesting, twisty, and fun story! I love the latest twist with Oz and Nina.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad the twist are fun and not annoying.
Date: 03/22/2011 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter 27
An interesting turn...I'm intrigued! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I keep promising a wrap up, and it is wrapping up, but much more slowly than I thought it would.
Date: 03/21/2011 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter 26
Awesome chapter! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! You are the one who is awesome!
Date: 03/19/2011 - 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 26
Since my first review is somewhere in cyberspace, I felt it was important to leave another. As always, really enjoyed this chapter. I love how Buffy and Spike have hit a level of intimacy that few know.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing twice! I just thought the idea was sexy and would introduce interesting problems because the characters would assume they'd just know. Even though they're impossibly close, they still needed to talk it out.
Date: 03/19/2011 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter 25
Such a tension filled chapter. And I really love your descritptions, they always make the image play like a movie in my mind. Loved the chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you!