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Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2011 - 11:54 am Title: XIII

Loved how you depicted William slowly tumbling into addiction and maddness. Well, from the outside this is what someone would see. Even for William, he can't seem to distiguish between reality and fantasy. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. :D

Reviewer: Lou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2011 - 11:07 am Title: XIII

Poor William, he's going the right way for an early demise with all the laudanum and damp nights out., I really feel for him. You've such a good grasp of life bellow stairs.

Author's Response: Poor boy is on a very self-destructive path, isn't he? Still, where there's life, there's hope. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2011 - 02:49 am Title: XIII

I must wonder Buffy's game. What has she been hoping to accomplish with our poor sick William? To appear with riddles and promises and then to leave him waiting for his end with the promise of visits not delivered. He may be failing in health, but I do not see her helping much. I wonder if she's trying to save him or simply getting her Spike fill in whatever form she can manage, not realizing she's killing him faster. I am impressed by his poor breakdown, but I have to wonder what is the point? Please update soon.

Author's Response: She had a very specific reason for doing what she did, but that's all I can say without giving everything away. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: The Enemy of Reality Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2011 - 02:55 pm Title: XIII

Another amazing chapter!! I really liked the way you let us see William through the eyes of someone else. He's so miserable and it makes my heart ache for him. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I was a little nervous about this chapter being entirely in the perspective of original characters, so it's wonderful to know you enjoyed it so much. Thank you for taking the time to review! :D

Reviewer: no_promises Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2011 - 01:35 am Title: XIII

My heart is breaking right along with Williams. How could Buffy leave him?
I am grateful that Mrs. Hastings is there to watch over and help him (I really do like her)

Author's Response: Buffy's reasons, both for visiting in the first place and leaving him now, will eventually be revealed...I just have to keep you guys in suspense for a little bit longer. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Cloud Nine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 07:32 pm Title: XIII

I admire this story but it is heart-wrenching. And the severely drug-addicted William is so painful, almost unbearable, to watch. Not to mention, extremely disturbing as well. Please have a heart and ease his misery (and his addiction). As with any addiction, it seems there is no end in sight, and no hope. I don't know if you've ever watched a loved one struggle with an addiction, but if you haven't you sure have a good imagination. So please help him, soon!

Author's Response: I left a longer response to your review on livejournal, but I just want to say that I do have some experience with substance abuse in my immediate family, and I do take it very seriously. I certainly don't mean to offend anyone with this story, and I hope I haven't offended you. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review. I appreciate your feedback. :)

Reviewer: Minx DeLovely Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 07:16 pm Title: XIII

The part about the girl abandoning him after he'd served his purpose was chilling. Enjoying this story very much.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it so far. :D

Reviewer: sanityfair Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2011 - 07:12 pm Title: XIII

I'm grateful for another upsdate so soon. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank for reading and taking the time to review. I really appreciate it. :)

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