I read this one in one go and can't tell you how surprised I was when I saw your note about this being your first Spuffy fic. Very impressive! Please do keep on writing! A sequel would be great, but I bet anything Spuffy you can come up with will be eaqually pleasant to read.

I was pleasantly surprised at the lack of "forced drama" in this story. Maybe it's just me, but the usual "angst" in far to many stories kind of just buggs me. I always want to throw stuff at my screen when that happens. People assuming things and not talking to each other as a plot device to separate them is just so damn tiring. (Stupid people, stupid author making them do that stupid stuff... Grrr!)
Right, pet peeve here, moving on!

So yeah, good writing style, great story, sequel would be nice and I will so put you on my "watch out for" list!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it. I get what you are saying about forced drama. It bugs me, too.