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Date: 11/30/2005 - 01:24 pm Title: Persistence of memory

Yes this chapter is "freaking good"! Finally, confirmation on who Kirsten is and Faith being helpful. Can't wait for the gang to realize who cast the spell. What will that mean for Willow? I can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 12:58 pm Title: Persistence of memory

YES! It's great!! Really. So now they have at least three kids - Dawn, Kirsten and Robbie. I wonder if we will see him sometime. Maybe as a flashback? Since he is a boy, is he more like Spike? Or William, technically, unless he's into punk/goth, too. It would be interesting, but you probably have "back-up" chapters done.
Still, great work. I really love this series.

Reviewer: Mira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 12:54 pm Title: Persistence of memory

that was a great update and I was climbing the walls here wanting to know more about kirsten.....
can't wait for this spell to be lifted I want so bad to see willow beaten up it's scary! I want more tara and oz!! :D

hope u feel better soon and give us more! :D

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 11:47 am Title: Persistence of memory

So Robbie is Connor? Only ecplanation I have, since she says that's her older brother, and Buffy is pregnant with Kirsten now. Unless she's having twins! And Robbie came out first.
Had a vision....could be Cordy, though just as likely to be someone else by that time.
Using the reveal spell is going to show very quickly that Willow is behind this. She shouldn't even be in the house. Buffy and Spike are so going to want her dead for what she's done to Dawn.
Surprised Lawson is being helpful, since he was so incredibly pissed off at Angel in Season 5. I wouldn't think Angel being soulless would matter, since he's still the entity that made Lawson, and the guy can't fully enjoy being a vampire. Penn seemed to be the only fully functional childe Angel ever made.

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 10:45 am Title: Persistence of memory

I knew that was coming but... phew bloomin' hewww... is little bitty bit gonna get an ear bashing from her Daddy. I'm glad you ended the chapter there so that Spike could rant away at her without me eavsdropping in on them. Tellings off really get me jittery, and that one sounds like it could be a doozy. I hope Buffy can calm him down.

I wonder whether the penny will drop with Tara before Faith goes into her trance and gets to see what's occurred? Poor Willow. I'm actually feeling pretty sorry for her right now.

Great update pet.

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 10:23 am Title: Persistence of memory

so Kirsten is also Dawn's sister. Craziness abounds. What repercussions will be wrought by her coming back and saving Dawn? How will life in the future change? Lots of questions, and looking forward to reading more chapters for answers.

Reviewer: Lyns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 10:10 am Title: Persistence of memory

it is FREAKING good. rest up, hope your arm's getting better and i'll be looking forward to the next installment whenever you have a chance.

Reviewer: sammywol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 10:00 am Title: Persistence of memory

'... is it any freaking good?' YES! most certainly. This fic updating is a highlight and something to look forward to. I love what you do with the canon material and how you explore the characters, especially Dawn (who i am usually pretty indifferent to).

Kirsten is interesting too, though as with all mysteries, she is more fun when you don't know what is going on but are left to make up your own ideas. Still the way you are resolving her is pretty much exactly how my imagination had it and thanks for not giving us all the exposition in one big lump. The line in the last chapter where she sees Spike looking at her and thinks 'so busted' was delicious!

As usual, please write more and soon! Yeah, that's right, your fans don't care that you ahve a life they just want more drug please now - sorry about that.

Reviewer: Elenor Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 09:26 am Title: Persistence of memory

It was good.
I love this story.

Reviewer: MAGGIE Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 08:31 am Title: Persistence of memory

BLOODY FANTASTIC,LOVED IT MORE SOON PLEASE GREAT READ MORE SOON PLEASE THANK YOU MAGGIE

Reviewer: MG Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 08:16 am Title: Persistence of memory

Good chapter. Loads of exposition on Kirsten's situation, but I'm curious how she managed to be there at this point. Can't wait for the next chapter, thanks for updating so often.

Reviewer: riam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 07:04 am Title: Persistence of memory

good chapter altough since Kristen is going to be born now, where the hell is robbie. Unless his parents aren't spike or buffy. oh no conner is robbie,haha. Call me a genius,... or not.
seeya

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 06:36 am Title: Persistence of memory

Fantastic chapter don't know why you were worried it's brilliant.

Reviewer: Evansmomp Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 06:00 am Title: Persistence of memory

I feel like you are keeping me on the edge of my seat! The basis for this story is very plausible and a great idea. Your Spike is especially on point and Buffy is understandably a bit subdued. I've been following this story for a while and I feel like an ass that this is the first feedback I've left. I just love how EVERY character you've included is completely the way they would be if this were the way canon had been written.

Reviewer: spikes_niblet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 05:50 am Title: Persistence of memory

I did not see that coming at all : / and I loved Spikes reaction to it all I cant wait to see what will be happening next

Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 05:09 am Title: Persistence of memory

I thought Spike's reaction was classic! :) I love how the team is still working together to figure out what's going on. I hope Faith can discover that Willow is behind all the spell mumbo jumbo so the Scoobies can break it! Of course...I can't wait to see how Tara reacts to this one. Something tells me she's not going to be stuttering once she does. I really like Kirsten in this story and that Spike & Buffy have finally figured it out. Great update! :)

Reviewer: Dark Eyed Seer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 05:06 am Title: Persistence of memory

Mwah ha ha haaaa! I KNEW it! I knew she was there's! I'm loving this by the way... I'm sorry you hurt... please don't stop writing, though... I'm terribly selfish.

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 05:00 am Title: Persistence of memory

Wow, great twist. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: RandiGiles Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 04:42 am Title: Persistence of memory

Oh MY GOSH!!!! YOU STOPED THERE!!! Is it any freakin good??? Your kidding me right. That was bleedin fantastic. Oh, hot damn, excited, edge of my seat, irritated cause it ended, good.. (look now you've made me sound like a yougurt comercial) (I blame you) I love Spike as a pissed off dad yelling a bitty that shouldn't be present yet...poor lil' bitty-bit

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Date: 11/30/2005 - 04:12 am Title: Persistence of memory

its very good. keep it coming, i am dying to know what happens.

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 04:09 am Title: Persistence of memory

BRAVO!! Bravo!! C'est manifique!!...Lemme guess, you finally got tired of my whining and begging?!? **grins** 'M a very happy girl tonight!

Now that the truth is out there- kinda makes you wish there was the feature where you could just suck those words right back in before they reached parentals' ears- I can only imagine the impending battle between Spike abd Angelus...**rubs hands together in greedy anticipation**...oh, yeah..this is gonna be good!

Reviewer: javelina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 03:28 am Title: Persistence of memory

Great chapter, Niamh! A good read (you write really well, as I hope you know!) and great movement in the plot - great to see the chess pieces shifting around so that our Heroes can get out from under that spell.

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 03:16 am Title: Persistence of memory

I just have to say that you are an awesome writer! This story is amazing! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 02:33 am Title: Persistence of memory

OMG! I'd love to borrow some of Spike's holy f'n hells, but I'm trying not to scandalize the Tag. Nia this chapter is fantastic--very powerful, a continuation of the strong emotions we've been seeing all along. Can't wait for Faith's trance and for what else you have in store for us! Ohhhh I so knew Kirsten was theirs! Gah!

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 - 02:26 am Title: Persistence of memory

Well Spike is one protective daddy......pissed that one daughter may have been saved but at the risk he could've lost another.......and I wonder what is so important she had to come back and save Dawn, and who is Robbe.....her boyfrend, brother, cousin, or the offspring of yet another couple.......more please

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