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Reviewer: Jade2099 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 01:54 am Title: Unending lightning

YAY! Spike knows! You should be nervous! This was another magnificent chapter! :) I always look forward to seeing your updates because you write with such passion. You can feel the emotion, you can feel the angst, you can feel the happiness...it's rare that I shed a tear for a story, but you can reduce me to mush in an instant. :) Wonderful update as always and I look forward to the next!

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 01:40 am Title: Unending lightning

I think this was an incredible chapter!!! Loved the last line

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 12:47 am Title: Unending lightning

dont be nervous. it was perfect. i loved it and cant wait for more on both of your stories.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 12:47 am Title: Unending lightning

Almost bawled my eyes out. I'm so happy for the two of them. Well written.

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 12:25 am Title: Unending lightning

OH MY GODS that was just beautiful. I got tears reading that, whole scene. You did a wonderful job with how she told him. You captured their emotions so passionately. Gods that was just so amazing. Thank you for the birthday wishes for the soon to be 2 miracle princess, she will one day read this excellent fan fic and know that it was her auntie who wrote it all. *HUGS*

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2005 - 12:16 am Title: Unending lightning

Beautiful!

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 11:58 pm Title: Unending lightning

Sigh. I was so worried that Willow would do something BEFORE Buffy could tell Spike. Still worrying about her tinkering with her "spell" and what that is going to mean for the others. Wonderful, as usual, Nia!

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 11:48 pm Title: Unending lightning

oh wow.....i loved how buffy told him. that was the best!!!!! the emotion in their love making was so intense and i am so very happy for them. spike deserves this...........cordilia.....gods i just ache for her. glad gunn and fred are coming...they'll be needed and oh my gods....willow...i am sooo scared of what shes going to do. thanx for the update nia. i was sooo excited to see it...made my day. fabulous chapter hun!!!!

Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 11:12 pm Title: Unending lightning

Just caught back up with this after my holiday. Wow... what a pace Casa Summers is moving at. I'm loving the roles you've created for all of the characters. Tara and Oz' platonic love suits them perfectly, and I know that their frustration and concern for Willow will prove powerful at some point soon in the tale. Willow's foolhardy, but well-intentioned actions will I'm sure cause havoc, but you've shown she's more than capable of clearing her mind and focussing on things when it's needed. The Dawn, Spike, Buffy and Connor bonding is solid and feels right. The hospital scenes provide a change of tension and pace. I'm wondering how you can reintroduce a Cordy who is both severely traumatised, yet able to become a useful part of the White Hat team when it's needed... I'm less sure about things at Angel's lair. He's too Angel(ic) and too little Angel(us) for my liking, and Dru's too passive and not mad enough. Love the arrival on scene of Lawson though. Maybe now, with Buffy's pregnancy known, Willow playing with magic again, a show down must soon be on the cards?

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 10:55 pm Title: Unending lightning

Oh wow, that was a gorgeous chapter!! I laughed, I cried, I fell in love with them all over again. Thank you so much for making this so beautiful.

Reviewer: Pin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Unending lightning

Really sweet! Of course Willow's like the shadow of doom. You've really got me anxious about what will happen between Willow's spell and Angelus' summoning of all the relatives. Great story, thanks!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 10:35 pm Title: Unending lightning

Buffy's method for telling Spike about the pregnancy was perfect, and his reaction was heart felt and lovely to read. The rest of the chapter also drove the story forward - Angel's gathering the clan, Willow's screwing up another spell, Anya and Xander are sniping, and Fred and Gunn are on their way, Christmas should be a roller coaster!

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 10:19 pm Title: Unending lightning

Ooh-- Willow's spell is going screw things up completely isn't it?? Loved this update, anxious for more!

Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 10:08 pm Title: Unending lightning

oh very good...loved how she told him..very good.. very nervous about the other vamps rolling into town..*hides eyes*

Reviewer: babyduck Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 10:05 pm Title: Unending lightning

MY GOD WOMAN, KEEP WRITING!!! Please...pretty please....with chocolate on top....(whimpers soflty). I love this story and wait with anticipation for the next chapter. Thank you so much for the wonderful world you have created and are letting us all have a peek into.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 09:50 pm Title: Unending lightning

No need to be nervous. Wonderfully done. Thanks.

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: Unending lightning

Wow. what a breathtaking chapter. I loved how Buffy told Spike she was pregnant. It is not looking too good for our group with Willow up to no good. She is doing such a good job of alienating herself for good. Great work. Can't for more. This is one story that I just wait patiently for, I can't seem to get enough.

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: Unending lightning

Aww! I actually think I got a little teary there. Such a beautiful scene between the two of them. Love the note... As for the rest of the chapter, Willow is up to no freaking good I can tell, and Xander and Anya aren't going to make it to another Christmas...

Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 09:20 pm Title: Unending lightning

that was one of the sweetest moments i have ever read. I about cried.....more more more soon

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 09:20 pm Title: Unending lightning

Gahhhhh!!! That was soooo freakin wonderful!

Reviewer: Franchesca Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 09:17 pm Title: Unending lightning

It was beautiful and well worth the wait (plot wise... not time in updating..but that too:) Anyway,it's hard to believe where this story has jounreyed in its time so far. I still don't entirely get the Willow thing. What does she hope to accomplish?

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 08:56 pm Title: Unending lightning

Anya's right Xander never does want to hear the truth. And what is Willow going to screw up now? Interesting way to break the news to him. Dawnie's gonna be a big sister / aunt.

Reviewer: kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2005 - 08:54 pm Title: Unending lightning

you made tears come to my eyes this was so sweet and then the lost....Their Child.....oh that was awesome........

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