Date: 07/20/2005 - 01:56 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
Oh puhhlease! Get over yourself! I cannot believe the comment about how you should watch the show and the aggravation of the writing and dangling plot threads would inspire you!!! I've seen various comments like this throughout this story and the first one and really cannot believe the gall. HMMMMMMM, if they are such bad writers, why do we all love the show??
Date: 05/09/2005 - 07:30 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
The tension was high during Angelus' stalking, and everyone converging on Buffy's room was well detailed. The choreography of the scene for Tara's spell and its aftermath was also well realized. I liked the line "Spike was too tired to argue, which for him had to be a first." That could hold true for Buffy, too, they're both so stubborn!
Date: 05/09/2005 - 05:16 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
liked this part very much. if you're going to do a fight between spike and angel, please for the love of god don't let spike loose. if you looke at the history of them both, then it's very obvious whos stronger. I always felt that in the shows they made spike weaker than angel because he had his own show therefore making him more importent. come dude, two slayers, warrior against warrior, that's his style. keep up the good work
Date: 05/09/2005 - 02:04 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
i thought this was a great chapterit will be interesting to see how you pull together willow and angelus. i especially liked teh tidbit about how the huntsmen typicailly waits for the final betryal before taking the traitor.... :) keep up the fantastic work. i hope your shoulder feels better!!!!
Date: 05/08/2005 - 04:31 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
I thought this chapter was good. I'm not really sure what parts you weren't sure about, it all fit together nicely. I wish Spike would just suck it up (no pun intended) and just drink from Buffy, but it is good of him to refuse. Shows that he cares and all.
Date: 05/08/2005 - 02:55 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
Oooh that was so creepy with Angel lurking around the outside of the house! And go Tara! She's so awesome. Loved this chapter. =)
Date: 05/08/2005 - 12:22 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
Loved the Spike/Angel standoff. Love love love Tara. I'm looking forward to Giles and Spike discussing the removal of the chip. Keep 'em coming, I've loved the story so far.
Date: 05/08/2005 - 05:26 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
The tension in the Angelus part was excellent!
Date: 05/07/2005 - 02:03 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
First I have always loved the song by Phil Collins. It has one of the best drum beats. Now for the story. Well you have added some more the herbs and the pot is really brewing now. HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!! Angelous being out there. Go Tara with her spells. I would of been nuts like buffy too, feeling he was out there. *shivers ewwwwwww*. Awesome spell with the sunlight. Poor Spike over doing it. But damn you can't keep a good man down. I hope that he takes the blood and gets healed. EXCELLENT chapter Nia. loved the line" do you wanna be the kettle or the pot" *laughs hysterically* i am egerly awaiting the potion to be ready.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 01:40 pm Title: Coming in the air tonight
Excellent as always. Hurrah for the ball of sunshine trick. Glad someone was able to get it right. lilpuff
Date: 05/07/2005 - 11:21 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
Hmmmm, I think Spike would be more healed now then he is......other then that I think you've done a great job......
Date: 05/07/2005 - 10:28 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
Loved it. Most excellent. Can't wait for more. I was surprised that Buffy didn't insist that Spike drink from her. Guress I'll just have to wait and see what happens next.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 08:43 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
I would like to see Rileys reaction to B/S. I was really pissed off by Buffys treatment of Spike in 'As you were' and Riley left Buffy feeling ashamed and humiliated. I'd like him to come back with Sam this time he can bring the doctor.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 08:30 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
It's difficult to think of suggestions with this being so bloody good. I dd think it would be a fittng punishment if one of the 'enemies' called to kill Spike ended up killing Willow. I'm sill not sure if Willow was responsible for Angels fall from grace. Everyone assumes it was love for his son, but I don't think he's that sensitive. It always needed sex or a spell or happy pills in the show. If Angel turned Willow she could lose all her powers and be taken by the huntsman. A turned Willow would think she was invincible, it'd be fun to see her as a minnion. Whatever you do I'm it'll be great.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 06:50 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
Hi hun, I'm no expert, but I don't know why you aren't sure about this one. I love your story. How Spike stood up and defended Connor against Angel. Dear Tara throwing sun balls. . Yes, Spike has to get the chip out. It's the only solution. If they want to have children of their own, he must be able to defend his family against humans.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 06:23 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
chapter was great. I einjoyed it. Please continue to update soon and often
Date: 05/07/2005 - 04:37 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
I liked the chapter and didn't find anything wrong with it...just the right amount of info and mystery...I also liked Tara's power coming out so strongly...she's one powerful witch...she just needs to get more confident in her skill...overall great chapter with the right amount of info. Can't wait for the next one!!!
Date: 05/07/2005 - 03:58 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
Can't wait till spike get's better and has the chip remove than he would be on even ground with angleus.He will be in the shock of his life win he find's out that spike can his behind.Loved buffy trying to get spike to drink from her so he can get better fast but his being to stubborn about it.That's spike for you always puting buffy first than himself and she was right about giles not being a problem at all since his the one looking for a doctor for him now xander is another story all togather.You don't have to worry nia cause the whole chapter was great just as the story is
Date: 05/07/2005 - 03:07 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
great job but then again that's no surprise. keep up the great work.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 02:57 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
I was kinda freaked out about angelus being outside the home like a creepy stalker guy...*shudder* Good chapter!
Date: 05/07/2005 - 02:25 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
another fantastic chapter. Angel tormenting them was classic. I wish Spike would just get better already - he's a stubborn brat isn't he? Sounds like the group is gelling. I really like that. :)
Date: 05/07/2005 - 02:08 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
Not to worry. This story is coming along fine. Well written and good flow.
Date: 05/07/2005 - 02:03 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
oh this chapter is great, and you know it *grin* You're not capable of writing something bad. The ball 'o sun ruled! I loved Buffy and spike debating about the chip and what if it was their child. great job
Date: 05/07/2005 - 01:49 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
I thought it was amazing :)
Date: 05/07/2005 - 01:49 am Title: Coming in the air tonight
rana has always had this great way of expressing everything that going on in a chapter far better than i so........what she said....LOL
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