Don't berate your talents. This is a good chapter. It contains plenty of details, and it moves the story along at a decent pace. You have so many things going on with various people. It is going to take a lot to push the flow. I think you are doing a fine job. I look forward to the next update.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the support. Somedays a positive word is all it takes for me. Thanks. *hugs*