Date: 08/11/2006 - 05:11 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
A lake monster, well that would explain a few things. And I must say, corrupting William was pretty easy. Great chapter.
Date: 09/20/2005 - 04:06 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Naughty, naughty Buffy lol. Can't blame her though. Fun chapter. You writer a great William. Sorry it took me so long to review. But you know how much my life sucks right now, so I hope you forgive me.
Date: 07/13/2005 - 06:45 pm Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Go for it Bold Buffy! Poor William - bit of a culture shock? Looks like he might enjoy this new age. GREAT UPDATE. LOVE WILLIAM (got his crust all stiff and upper!). MORE PLEASE.
Date: 07/11/2005 - 09:29 pm Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Great update!!
Date: 07/11/2005 - 08:16 pm Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
First: Thanks for the update! Second: the bottom of the lake where something in the mud and slime began to stir. Huh? Cliffhanger again? What will come for them now? I'm not sure, but I don't thing that Spike will remember how to fight. But I hope he does! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 07/11/2005 - 03:35 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Oh! I love how you wrote William- that was perfect! And Buffy being his first time technically was a nice, sweet detail!:)
Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:56 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Nice recovery William. See.. even as William he's a demon in the sack.
Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:50 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Oh crap! If it's another one of those Tazksha demons, please let him wait until they're done! LOL! Can't wait to see William's reaction to what he thinks is his first time. If he was spazzing over bare arms and limbs, Lord help him! Update soon, please!
Date: 07/11/2005 - 01:08 am Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Just started reading this story and I love it. I hope you explain a little more whats happened to Spike but for now I understand the jist. Hope you update soon!
Date: 07/10/2005 - 10:43 pm Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
Good grief, did Spike come back at the end there? Look forward to the next.
Date: 07/10/2005 - 10:26 pm Title: Chp 9 Down the Rabbit Hole
great update i loved it
Author's Response: Glad you’re still enjoying the story. Thanks for the review.