Date: 04/12/2012 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Nice. I like the secret Initiative "chipped vampires as weapons" plan. Actually better than what the show did with that (I agree with your cost -- and I'd add trouble/time/resources -- reason).
Date: 01/17/2006 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Nice reaction from Spike to her preseence, very nicely done. and I always wonfered what the initiiative was going to do with the vampires, and hey, didn't Angel's series tlak about that also?
Date: 11/25/2005 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter Seven
I love how it seems you always intend on wrtiting a little-to-no-plot smutfest, and all of these amazingly complex storyies develop. I also think the idea of making vampires weapons is logical, after all it is what the nazis were trying to do on the Angel episode "Why We Fight." Makes sense the idea would resurface within some military somewhere. Very glad she saved him and the Riley has grown enough balls to threaten the initiative. Fabulous chapter.
Date: 09/27/2004 - 08:23 am Title: Chapter Seven
Just read Chs 1-7. Smut with an emotiional arc - always good! And nice job on the characterisations.
Date: 09/26/2004 - 11:02 am Title: Chapter Seven
brilliant chapter. more!
Date: 09/26/2004 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter Seven
You've done a wonderful job so far with this story. The new angle on the chip is smart--I really like it :) And thanks for making Riley somewhat redeemed. It gets kind of boring always having him as a complete ass. Please update soon!
Date: 09/25/2004 - 09:04 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I love the Spuffy lovin' I think Spike feared to kill Buffy when he drank form her ... I hope your Writers Block is over :)) Cordykitten
Date: 09/25/2004 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Well, I'm glad you got over your writer's block because I'm lovin' the updates. The story is great and can't wait to read more Spuffy.
Date: 09/25/2004 - 10:51 am Title: Chapter Seven
glad you decided to have a plot. I like your theory about the chip and I like what you did with Spike's rescue. Please update soon- I'd like to know what happens when Spike wakes up!!!
Date: 09/25/2004 - 08:45 am Title: Chapter Seven
Great Chapter, Great Story. PLease continue to update. Though I would of loved to see Riley eaten!!
Date: 09/25/2004 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter Seven
chapter 7 was good. i love what you did with the chip and the fact that spike would not hurt her even though he was starving.