Date: 07/20/2011 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter 15: A Time to Cry
Powerful chapter, and so well written. This is just so good.
Author's Response: Oh wow. 'Powerful" makes me giggle with glee! I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. I was ambivalent about this chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing it. :-)
Date: 07/19/2011 - 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 15: A Time to Cry
Wow Queenie is really special - a car and a good slayer weapon. *gg*
(BTW Does Longstock mean something special?)
*bg* Angel showed how good it can be to take some steps back like Spike did.
Funny chapter in parts and yet not - so many lost their life.
Good chapter.
Author's Response: Really? Did I make a funny in there somewhere? Neat. Yeah, I'm starting to love Queenie. Longstock just came out because of the character Pippi Longstocking. The first time I heard the name Pipa, I thought of that character, so I figured Spike would have thought of her too - knowing so much about popular culture from any number of decades.
Date: 07/19/2011 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 15: A Time to Cry
What a mess! Hope Buffy will be ok! Xander and Dawn seemed like they came out of thin air! More please!
Author's Response: Yeah, I'll explain their sudden appearance in the next chapter. I alluded to it in the previous chapters but no one got the hint...
Date: 07/19/2011 - 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 15: A Time to Cry
thrilling fight scene. I felt like I was there. really interested in the next chapter.
Author's Response: You really felt Ike you were there? So cool. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/19/2011 - 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 15: A Time to Cry
Big fight.. lots of girls lost.. too bad.
But Dawn and Xander ... coming to the rescue. enjoying.
Author's Response: Thanks. :-)