Reviews For Holiday on Helarth
Reviewer: kudagirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2010 - 01:31 am Title: 1. Under the Moonbow
Date: 05/27/2010 - 01:31 am Title: 1. Under the Moonbow
Oh, I love this. Neither of them knows where they are and are not up to full strength. It's an adventure where you can take them through all kinds of situations. The last line is a bit like Alice going down the rabbit hole.
Author's Response: Thanks. :) I hope to have fun with this one.
Reviewer: behind blue eyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2010 - 12:33 am Title: 1. Under the Moonbow
Date: 05/27/2010 - 12:33 am Title: 1. Under the Moonbow
Interested where you're going to lead us Dorothy! (Wizard of Oz-didn't want you to think I don't know your name lol!)Can't wait till the next chap!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you. I hope you like where I do take our couple.
Reviewer: napoleon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2010 - 08:55 pm Title: 1. Under the Moonbow
Date: 05/26/2010 - 08:55 pm Title: 1. Under the Moonbow
Interesting. Please continue
Author's Response: Thank you. :) A new chapter is now up.