I can't figure out how to make it not all centered . Well that's something I can help with:
On TSR you use html-tags to do that. Pari posted here what you can use on the site. For the how to, go to this LJ entry under "Centering text". You need use the tags without the "*" .
Like it's done here but this entry didn't have the "center" you need. Though it has some basics at the begin. Good luck :)

Author's Response: I had asked my friend shortly after I received the first comment from you. I am proud to say I have figured it out. :) I also want to thank you, I wouldn't have figured it out if u haven't commented on it in the first place. You have improved my future stories. Thank you for that. :D

i don't get it, i think more should be explained about what was going on, or when this took place. i thought it was all human at first, and i would really suggest getting a beta reader, there were too many mistakes.

Author's Response: this whole fic was written around the lyrics to the song Sometime Around Midnight by the air born toxic event. I took the lyrics (bold text) and then kinda reenacted them with spike and buffy.