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Reviewer: eliza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2012 - 08:18 am Title: Twenty-One

Oh, how I love your fics Dawnofme! Sheer brilliance, this one is. I loved every bit of it. The surfer slang, how Spike's personality after shanshu-ing was a combination of Spike, William and his new persona- John. You are a very talented writer and I hope you write more in the future. Happy writing! E x

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Eliza. I'm so happy that you enjoyed the story and my type of writing. *hugs*

Reviewer: Shay Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2011 - 07:43 pm Title: Twenty-One

I really liked reading this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you took the time to leave a review. You really made my day. :)

Reviewer: SpikesGirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/02/2010 - 05:54 am Title: Twenty-One

Loved this story. Sooo gooood....

Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/09/2010 - 05:26 am Title: Twenty-One

Love that she got her happy ending. And I can imagine some ideas for a sequel, cause that girl is not going to have a completely peaceful retirement. One day the opportunity to go and save the world another time will call to her. Love to see what happens in their future. Thanks for this one. Amnesia is a fun thing to read. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)

Reviewer: velvet cat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/08/2010 - 08:08 am Title: Twenty-One

Is this really (gulp) the end? Seriously, I've really been enjoying this, please do a sequel!!

Author's Response: :) Thank you. Yes, it's the end. I have ideas for a sequel, but I don't know if it will ever get written.

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2010 - 11:23 pm Title: Twenty-One

This is so sweet I am so glad that they made their peace and got back together. I just hope nothing happens down the road they deserve to be happy.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you like the way I ended it.

Reviewer: blusnake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2010 - 06:27 am Title: Twenty-One

wonderful story!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2010 - 01:49 am Title: Twenty

Glad she finally forced him so see reason. A mistake is still a mistake, but not worth throwing away their fantastic love affair. Glad they are working together, even if it is to keep Dawn from getting laid. And I just loved Buffy's approach to showing Spike that she really knows him. Pretty hot. :)

Author's Response: :) Thank you.

Reviewer: Vette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2010 - 01:36 am Title: Twenty

Good Story, William turned Spike is so cute worrying about him being so different that Buffy will lose interest in him when he is fretting over Dawn's welfare. He thinks that he has changed that drastically? Not likely! Look forward to more.

Author's Response: LOL! Thank you very much.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/06/2010 - 05:30 am Title: Nineteen

Sometimes a healthy dose of reality is the best thing one can do for a person. Not that I believe for a moment that Misty will learn any kind of lesson from Spike's speech. And I do think that time will lead those two back to each other. Though I think that Buffy has Spikes grasp of patience :) Loving the story and the nightly updates. Truly awesome. So ready for the next.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: Madeline Black Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2010 - 08:33 pm Title: Eighteen

Those were two really great chapters! Cant wait to see more of John trying to act like Spike! x

Author's Response: :) Thank you.

Reviewer: SMac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2010 - 06:26 am Title: Eighteen

First, I totally love this story. Seriously. Second, I am totlaly impressed by your research on Redondo Beach, a place I've lived my entire life until last year. There are a couple of nits, but mostly you have it pretty right. The Strand is actually, for those who live there a long time, no further south than Hermosa Beach. It would end at the Redondo Marina and pier. The cement walk and bike path that picks up on Torrance Beach (which is where Buffy and Spike are hanging out technially, that beach isn't actually called Redondo Beach even though that is where it is and Torrance doesn't reach the water), was never called The Strand by us who lived there. But recently newcomers and real estate agents etc have for their own reason appropriated the name for that part of the path so it makes perfect sense for Buffy and Spike to refer to it that way since neither are native to the area and would just say what they are told. So I'm fine with that, it makes it kinda realistic in a weird way. Anyway, you make me homesick. I'm all Oregon mountains now and miss the sand and dolphins and stuff. As for the story, what a wonderful love story. I wait anxiously for every update. Thanks for shairng it with us.

Author's Response: Cool! Thanks for the kind words and on the story itself and on my research. While I spent much of my time at Huntington, Newport and Doheny, I can only remember being in Redondo a few times. So much research was done on the area. And even though the stretch of beach in that area is very thin, I couldn't help imagining it like Huntington. LOL! And you might get a kick out this. I mention that Dirk works at Stranded, a nightclub that I made up. And that it was owned by a radio DJ. I was imagining The Poor Man from KROQ owning it. LOL! I know he hung out in that area alot. And now I've totally dated myself. And how I long for the lazy summer days, hanging out with my friends (when I actually looked hot in a bikini), drooling over the surfers, including my now husband, who rarely has time for surfing anymore. And if you really want to nitpick, :) you could point out that I situated their apartment building one over from where it really it and got rid of a shorter building that is by the stairs. I wanted their apartment building to be right at the top of the stairs where Buffy could see him entering the building. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2010 - 05:49 am Title: Eighteen

And Spike is not ready to hear Buffy's side yet. Find it interesting that he keeps going to Angel. Thinking that the pull of blood is still relevant, even though he's human now. Love to see Buffy going crazy on Vi, definitely the actions of a girl in love. Love the emotion. Please, update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2010 - 04:54 am Title: Seventeen

Love him out witting a vampire and then needing to go and bleach his hair. Figures that that one event would trigger the next. And it's very Spike to not really want to hear what Buffy has to say after such a betrayal. Hope he gives her a chance to explain. After so much sadness, how can he totally blame her for wanting to spare him some of those memories.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that. I had to have Spike be total Spike with the hair and the duster and encountering vampires. Even if he isn't one himself anymore. :)

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2010 - 03:45 am Title: Eighteen

I could see this happening and I understand why it is happening it doesn't make it any better to read it happening the angst between Buffy and Spike it hurts. As much as they both must understand the reasons for each other's feelings and they whys it still hurts to see two people who should be together not and you never know when something might happen like death to make the anger seem so stupid. But at the same time it is good to see Buffy having to do a little chasing for a change.

Author's Response: Yep. But you are right, it's good to have Buffy doing the chasing. That is what I wanted for this fic. Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2010 - 02:22 am Title: Sixteen

Poor little girl. So glad that John has some friends that are willing to accept his knowledge without asking too many questions. Hope he does come back to talk with Buffy. He knows he loves her and that hes loved her in the past. Can't throw it away now. Please update soon. Gotta see what he does.

Author's Response: :) Thanks. And yeah, his agent just wants to keep him happy and keep him writing more books to sell. He gets 15% cut. LOL

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2010 - 02:09 am Title: Fifteen

Gotta love her spirit. Our Buffy is always a fighter. And at least she knows what happened. Makes it just a tiny bit more bearable. Hope she finds him. Love the idea of her running after him.

Author's Response: Thank you! I really wanted to have Buffy running after him, so I'm glad you like that part.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2010 - 01:59 am Title: Fourteen

I hope Angel uses some tact this time. And I hope Buffy can salvage some of their relationship. Last thing in the world worth doing is letting Misty thinking she was proven right.

Author's Response: Yep. Misty is a brat and there's no way Buffy will let her have the last word.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/04/2010 - 01:48 am Title: Thirteen

Well that would be a bit of a problem for out little Buffy. You would have thought that she would have given her sister a heads up about Spike not knowing he was Spike. Wonder how she's going to handle that. Love the drama.

Author's Response: Yeah, she just didn't want anyone to know she'd found him yet. Just Angel and Giles knew. Of course, she couldn't think that the secret would be kept for long.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2010 - 11:47 pm Title: Sixteen

two more great chapters and the story is moving along at a great pace but not rushed.. Lovin the unfolding of his life but he still can't remember

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Madeline Black Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2010 - 06:54 pm Title: Sixteen

Absolutely adoring this story right now! It has a great original plot, introduction of new yet intriguing characters and fantastic personalization of the Buffy character! I really really really cannot wait for more chapters. Good luck. x

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Especially the kind words about Buffy's characterization. I try, but I often times think I miss the mark with her.

Reviewer: velvet cat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/03/2010 - 06:13 pm Title: Sixteen

This is so good, keeping it coming!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)

Reviewer: BlueEyes Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2010 - 12:19 am Title: Fourteen

I knew something would happen and he would eventually get his memories and become upset with Buffy for not telling him I just hope he gives her the chance to explain her reasons. Dawn I love her I do but there are moments I just want to ring her neck like now.

Author's Response: I feel the same way about Dawn. Even if we do share the same name. LOL! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2010 - 11:45 pm Title: Fourteen

lovin this story and its my favourite right now. Glad you moved it along some more before the lovey dovey stuff got tiresome. More please

Author's Response: thank you.

Reviewer: scaryscouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2010 - 11:44 pm Title: Fourteen

lovin this story and its my favourite right now. Glad you moved it along some more before the lovey dovey stuff got tiresome. More please

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the story that much! And yes, I let the lovey dovey go on a bit, just so that the crash would have that much more impact. But couldn't do it too long, as a story has to have conflict and movement to stay interesting. More on the way.

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