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Reviewer: Passion4Spike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/30/2010 - 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 4

wooo - hoooo! Could I get a glass of ice water . . . or a cold shower . . . or William???!!

Author's Response: *giggles* I'm glad you're enjoying! William's so damn yummy :P

Thank you for the review, sweetie! *hugggles*

Reviewer: Stephanie Renee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2009 - 04:25 am Title: Chapter 4

OMFG that was possibly the HOTEST sex scene along with chapter 5 that I have EVER read once again OMFG you have got to right more like this!!!! I have already read the story to the end but came back because you earned some praise for these two chapters lol OMFG, I liked it so much I wish they had a HELL YES option on the "do you recommend this story?" thing!!!!!

Author's Response: Wow thank you, Stephanie Renee! I love your enthusiasm, and you gave me a great big smile with your review - See: =D

Author's Response: Hmm, I wrote more but it got cut off somehow. Here's the rest of what I wanted to say:

I do try to make the smut as hot as possible :P It's great to hear that I succeeded heehee I've written over 20 other NC-17 fics like this one, you can check out my Author page to peruse the titles. You may find one or two that tickle your fancy ;)

Thanks for your awesome review! I can't tell you how flattering it is for me to get such wonderful feedback *Hugs & Smoochies*

Reviewer: spikeluv84 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 4

thank GOD!!!! the man is happy for once!!!! and that was incredibely hot! so glad u updated!!!

*flies to next chapter!*

Author's Response: hehehe Thanks, hon! Oh yes, William's quite happy at the moment, but he can always get happier :D

Reviewer: Spikes_slayer08 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow I love this story so hot more please.

Author's Response: More comin' right up :P

Reviewer: xoChantelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 06:25 am Title: Chapter 4

WOOOOT! YAY! They are getting wild. I feel bad for William though, Cecily making him so insecure. I'm glad that you are having Buffy make him more confident. He definitely deserves a woman to make him feel desired and sexy, because he sooooo is. Lol if he only knew how many woman wanted him (us wonderful ladies of the Spike/William loving variety) lol.

I hope this fic doesn't end too soon, I love this fic! Great chapter! More soooooooon PLEASE!

*hugs and smoochiessss*

Author's Response: Thanks, Chan! :D The games have begun lol Buffy considers it her duty to build William up, to at least attempt to undo some of the damage Cecily's done to him. Buffy's doin a great job so far ;)

lol Oh yeah, there are many, many of us women who wouldn't mind being in Buffy's position (or upcoming positions) heehee William's a fabulous babe who doesn't know it, and he needs to have a hotblooded gal prove it to him :P

I've got 8 chapters planned in all, I think you will enjoy :D Thanks for the great review, hon! *Smoooochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, Chan! :D The games have begun lol Buffy considers it her duty to build William up, to at least attempt to undo some of the damage Cecily's done to him. Buffy's doin a great job so far ;)

lol Oh yeah, there are many, many of us women who wouldn't mind being in Buffy's position (or upcoming positions) heehee William's a fabulous babe who doesn't know it, and he needs to have a hotblooded gal prove it to him :P

I've got 8 chapters planned in all, I think you will enjoy :D Thanks for the great review, hon! *Smoooochies*

Reviewer: lori Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter 4

ACK! First post got eaten.

Can I just summarize and say, GUH?! This chapter was so hot that it got me all tingly and flushed. You gave William and Buffy the opportunity needed to throw convention, anxiety and fidelity out the window to give-in to their well-deserved passionate natures. It was wonderful to see the very staid William break down his walls to exhibit Spike tendencies. Go, Buffy, for finally just diving-in and taking what she wants—this time because she’s acting out her love-based lust.

There will be consequences for William breaking his fidelity to Cecily, but at least it’s not now. Bad-boy William needs to come out and play dirty with Buffy, first. Brava!



Author's Response: Thanks for persevering and getting the review through, Lori :D And I'm happy that the chapter had the desired effect on you heehee

It's fun to have prim & proper William show some Spike :P This is the first time he's felt so naughty and fiery. Luckily he has Buffy as his guide into the world of passionate love, she can show him how it's supposed to be :)

Yep, there are going to be consequences a chapter or two down the line, but they're just living in the moment for now :)

Thank you for another lovely review, sweetie! *huggggs*

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 03:44 am Title: Chapter 4

So glad she convinced him to go for it. They are a lovely pair. Hopefully she'll help him grow on, too! Get him to leave that no good wife. Come on Buffy, make it dirtier!

Author's Response: lol Buffy was a woman on a mission. The 1st objective (getting horizontal with the object of her affection) is underway. She'll be working on Objective #2 (convincing him to get rid of Cecily) once the 1st reaches completion :P Oh yeah, things are gonna get dirtier lol

Thanks for reading & reviewing, hon! *huggles*

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2009 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter 4

Amazingly hot! More soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks, PhotographyNut! Ch. 5 will be up early Wednesday. I hope you find it as steamy as the first half :D *Hugs*

Reviewer: CallMeKitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 4

Can I say SMOKIN! WOOHOO Gonna get some, Buffy! *cues cheesy porn music*

Love this fic, and cant wait for part 2 of the smutfest!

Author's Response: *bow chicka bow-bow* hehehe Thanks, Buttercup! As you know, I got ye olde writer's block during the smut scene - your feedback helped a lot to get the juices flowin again :P

I don't know what I'd do without ya, sweetie! *Hugs & kisses*

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yay for a new update :)
Guh.. so very hot. I'm glad that Buffy took the initiative (William never would have). And what a pity to miss the hotness.
And now to get of Cecily for good. *is searching for the number of a divorce lawyer for William* :D (Well just kidding for now but hopefully it will come to that too.

Author's Response: lol Glad the hotness was effective for you, ck :D They probably would've both been old and gray if the first move were up to William lol Buffy had to take matters into her own hands :P

Let's hope that (after some more smutty fun) William grabs the Yellow Pages and lets his fingers do the walking for a divorce lawyer heehee

Thanks for being such a wonderful, loyal reader and reviewer, hon! *Smoochies*

Author's Response: lol Glad the hotness was effective for you, ck :D They probably would've both been old and gray if the first move were up to William lol Buffy had to take matters into her own hands :P

Let's hope that (after some more smutty fun) William grabs the Yellow Pages and lets his fingers do the walking for a divorce lawyer heehee

Thanks for being such a wonderful, loyal reader and reviewer, hon! *Smoochies*

Author's Response: lol Glad the hotness was effective for you, ck :D They probably would've both been old and gray if the first move were up to William lol Buffy had to take matters into her own hands :P

Let's hope that (after some more smutty fun) William grabs the Yellow Pages and lets his fingers do the walking for a divorce lawyer heehee

Thanks for being such a wonderful, loyal reader and reviewer, hon! *Smoochies*

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 4

That was hot *fans self* I loved it. I feel bad for William that he has so many insecurities hopefully Buffy will make that better :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, Jenn! heehee I know, poor William hasn't had a woman make him feel good about himself in... well, ever. But Buffy's doing her best to correct that ;)

The next chapter is a' comin soon :D Thanks for reviewing, hon! *hugs*

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ooh! Hot! Loved it! More! Now! *lol*

Author's Response: lol Glad you approved, Pet! More coming soon! ;) I'll be updating tomorrow. Thanks for reading & reviewing! *huggles*

Reviewer: claire Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow, this was really hot! William playing the piano turns me on, too! Accomplished men are so sexy.

Author's Response: Thanks, claire :D Oh yeah, the piano thing does somethin to me too lol My fic 'Piano Lessons' was started just cos I thought how incredibly hot Spike/William being an accomplished pianist would be lol

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, claire :D Oh yeah, the piano thing does somethin to me too lol My fic 'Piano Lessons' was started just cos I thought how incredibly hot Spike/William being an accomplished pianist would be lol

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, claire :D Oh yeah, the piano thing does somethin to me too lol My fic 'Piano Lessons' was started just cos I thought how incredibly hot Spike/William being an accomplished pianist would be lol

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Author's Response: Thanks, claire :D Oh yeah, the piano thing does somethin to me too lol My fic 'Piano Lessons' was started just cos I thought how incredibly hot Spike/William being an accomplished pianist would be lol

Thanks for reviewing, hon! *smoochies*

Reviewer: xaphania Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 4

Hee the smutathon begins... loved Buffy's theory on why Cecily wouldn't want William :D

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, the smutathon is finally off to a vigorous start heehee There's much more to come :P

Buffy thought Cecily might be crazy before she got a look at what William was packin' - so the gay or insane theories are the frontrunners lol

Thanks for reviewing, Xaph! :D *Smoochies*

Reviewer: AMI Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

Mmmm, Yummmy PB smut. LOVE IT!! This chap was so sexy and hot and sweet, Good for Buffy, just jumped right in and took what she wanted, and our sweet William is turning into a sex god. There was never any doubt. Hehehe.
---> he had an anaconda in his pants.
---> the bitch had some major mental problems. Or Cecily was a closeted lesbian.
---> her ex, Riley who had a tiny pecker.
OMG LOL . Loved it!

Amazing , hot chappie. PB. Can't wait for the smut-a-thon to continue. ;P *squishes*

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked, AMI! The lines you mentioned were some of my personal faves too lol Mmhmm William's not having much trouble getting into the spirit of the occasion ;)

The smut-a-thon (heehee) will pick right up where it left off in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing, hon! *big smoochies*

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 4

Cecily.. gay ... maybe.

It was worth the wait.. hopefully continued in Chapter 5..

Enjoyed..

Author's Response: Cecily being gay (or insane) is Buffy's current theory lol The groiny activities are continued in ch. 5, I hope you enjoy that too :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Pam! *Hugggs*

Reviewer: gilby2388 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2009 - 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 4

OMG it's about time those two got together. I was going a little crazy waiting for Buffy to jump him the past three chapters. Fabulous chapter and I absolutely cannot wait for the next one!

Author's Response: lol Thank you for being patient for the smut! I felt bad making my wonderful readers wait lol But I'm glad that you seem to think it was worth the wait :D There's another 10 pages of smutty goodness coming in ch. 5, which I will be posting tomorrow *grin*

Thank you so much for the sweet review! *smooches*

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