Ack! Another William-gets-seduced fic! I worship at your muse’s feet. This time it’s more of an innocent Buffy that gets her groove on…but rightfully so! The way that you’ve painted this Cecily-William marriage is believable in the context of what we saw about class and that heart-breaker’s few scenes with the poetic William in FFL. The only enticement William could have possibly offered Cecily was money or position—which is why Cecily won’t let him go.

Your flashbacks showing Buffy’s attraction to William and wishes for him to have a life outside of Cecily makes her impending role of “the other woman” almost justified. I’m so glad that your stories are fiction and I don’t have to make these judgments about people and relationships of those I know. The kicker in this fic is that we’re finally given what should’ve been explored more in the show—a solid friendship first and foremost. Don’t get me wrong—the fireworks were spectacular, as will be when Will and Buffy get-it-on, but I wished the Spike/Buffy friendship had a chance to get flushed out first. Your chapters always end with me wanting more. You’re so gifted it’s evil!


Author's Response: heehee Aww Lori, you're such a sweetiepie! Thanks for the compliments, they do my ego good :D

You're completely right about the Cecily only being attracted to money or position. I wondered what would've happened if William had been a little richer or his family were more prominent. And you're right about the Spuffy friendship thing - you totally get everything I was trying to say! lol

Thank you so much for the wonderful review! :D *Hugs and smoochies*

Cant wait to see where they go with this. Hopefully William won't resist too hard. Cant imagine Him being able to resist Buffy. Amazing start. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks, BuffRat! :D I think you'll enjoy what I have planned ;) More soon!

Thank you for reviewing, hon! *hugs*

I sense great smutness to be had. Wonderful start! Looking very forward to more.

Author's Response: hehehe Thank you, mellissa! Yes, there will be smutness to be had in the near future, I'm hoping it will be great :P Things don't heat up until ch. 4, but when they do, I think it'll be worth the wait :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing! *smoochies*

Wow...good start... I hope you update soon, I want to know if William is up to it... :P

Author's Response: heehee Thanks, Mel! Let's hope William will be very up to it :P

Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *big smooches*

You've certainly piqued my interest! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks, sanityfair! I'm glad you're digging it so far. Ch.2 is with my beta right now, so shouldn't be too long a wait :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing, hon! *hugs*

Argh... the way Cecily is treating William is impossible. She really isn't worth him. Hope Buffy manage to do something about it very soon. If he only knew what Cecily thinks of him....
Such a bitch.

Author's Response: I know, Cecily's a big ol' meanie. I imagined what might've happened if sensitive poet William had gotten together with Cecily because he had more money and power to attract her. I thought it would go a little something like that lol Buffy's going to try using some very persuasive methods to help him see the light ;)

Thank you muchly for reviewing! *smoochies*

Woo hoo, another PaganBaby story! Love the beginning, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks! It feels great to know that folks look forward to more of my smutty tales :D I'm happy you're having fun with it so far :D I'll have more for ya soon! *hugs*

YAY!! Another PB story. I'm so excited,cause ya know I luv your lovely,smutty tales.*whispers* even tho I'm waiting for the sequel to LIR, I'll take anything you put out there.. OK I LOVE this,Cecily is a BITCH and William sounds really sweet, if a bit wussy. cause he lets that slut walk all over him. I bet there's a good reason for that, as I'm sure you'll explain. I can't wait for Buffy to make her move. I'm sure William is really into her too.---> If someone was going to steal William,it should be her, dammit. Love that GO Buffy and get your man!

Can't wait for more PB! I so wanna meet William. More son please. *squishes*

Author's Response: :D Thanks, AMI! heehee You're so sweet *smooch* I'll try to get to work on that sequel soon for ya ;) You got it lol Cecily = Bitch, and William = Sweet but wussy. You'll see that Cecily was good at preying on poor William's insecurities to make him so wussified. Perhaps all he needs is the love of a good woman to make him feel good about himself? hehe Stay tuned to find out :P Thank you for all of the lovely reviews you've given me, hon! I really appreciate you taking the time! *Huggs and kisses*

Ohh man.. I sooooo can't wait for more! This is sooo good so far!

Stupid Cecily and her BLIND idiotic ways. I would KILL to have William as my husband, and she treats him like shit.

*bitchflicks*

MORE SOON PB!! *off to make banner!*

Author's Response: heehee Thanks, Chan! I can't wait to see the banner you come up with :D Cecily doesn't appreciate sweet William, she's been a big meanie to him. But Buffy will try to kiss the boo-boo's and make it better :P Thanks for reviewing, sweetie! *hugs & squishes*

PB MY LOVE! I was wondering where you had been, but now I see you've been writing this lovely new fic! It's off to a great start and I cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks, Paige! Yeah, I've been MIA lately, been workin hard :P I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :) Thank you for r&r'ing, babe! Mmm I love yummy reviews *gobble* *munch*

Waiting to see what William is all about.

And if Buffy's plan works out ..

Interested..


Author's Response: :) I sent the 2nd chapter to my beta, hopefully won't be too long before you can get a peek at William. You'll get a real good peek at him within a few chapters ;) lol Thanks for reading and reviewing, Pam! *smooch*

Author's Response: :) I sent the 2nd chapter to my beta, hopefully won't be too long before you can get a peek at William. You'll get a real good peek at him within a few chapters ;) lol Thanks for reading and reviewing, Pam! *smooch*