Date: 11/28/2008 - 06:54 pm Title: First Steps
Thanks for the answer :)
Ah... the apartment is empty, not a good turn for Joyce.
What a disappointing reaction of Joyce's mother. Good thinking to get rid of the credit cards when she decided to run. Not easy for Joyce to gain a foothold (to gain ground) again. Finding Olga seems to be a good start. I hope she'll take it well that her new tenant is pregnant....
Still loving it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking this so far : ) I hope you continue to!
Date: 11/27/2008 - 05:55 am Title: First Steps
Oh thank goodness she found somewhere to live! I was starting to worry. Now, all she has to do is find a job...
Nice chapter, I am enjoying this very much.
Author's Response: thanks for the review! I'm so glad you like it!
Date: 11/26/2008 - 06:52 pm Title: First Steps
Glad you ruled Spike out as the father, that would have been ooky. Don't suppose it's Angel? No, prolly not, it would have desouled him. Poor Joyce, her situation is very similar to Buffy's in 'Anne', but particularly like Cordelia's at the beginning of Ats (except for the pregnancy).
Author's Response: I agree with you about Spike! Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/26/2008 - 06:27 pm Title: First Steps
uh oh wonder whn olga will find out about the baby
Author's Response: very soon! thanks for the review!
Date: 11/26/2008 - 04:31 am Title: First Steps
Interesting first two chapters. I like the idea you're exploring. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 11/26/2008 - 03:05 am Title: First Steps
I really like Olga. It looks like she's a good judge of character. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I;m glad you like her. I like her, too. Thanks for the review!