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Reviewer: Rainey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2008 - 03:21 am Title: Epilogue

I really, really enjoyed this story. I loved how it stayed in the Buffy-verse, but managed to make it everything Joss didn't. Lol.

Author's Response: LOL! Thank you. That about sums up what I was trying to do. Though I do like Joss and think he is a brilliant artist.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2008 - 01:07 am Title: Epilogue

Sorry, I was probably a lurker (bad Carrie), but I tend to shy away from stories that aren't finished (again, BAD Carrie - I'm too impatient and a big fan of instant gratification!).

So I saw this was finally finished! YAY! WOO HOO! Awesome story! I loved how you played with the dialogue from season five and twisted it to your storyline. I was shocked that Harm actually got dusted (if only THAT happened in the series... *sigh*) and the progression of Spike and Buffy's feelings were more natural (not a wham-bam-thank you ma'am type of thing).

The funniest parts for me were when Buffy and Spike watched the day-time shows like Maury - and then she had her own dream about being on the "My Baby's Daddy" show! LMAO, I cracked up!

"The Peas." That was cute and funny to hide the Gem there - good idea! And wow! Willow and Wesley (cause in real life they're married and were gah gah over each other from the first moment) was great!

I hope you'll pop in on all the couples from time to time and give us glimpses of their lives - I'd love to see them growing older, and by far... wiser!

Thanks for the ride (I read this all in one setting *fans self*) and I hope to enjoy another adventure soon!



Author's Response: I'm like you in that I prefer to read a story when it's complete. I am such an impatient person. I'm so glad that you liked the story. I had a lot of fun writing it and coming up with twists and shockers. I'm so glad you enjoyed the Maury show parts. LOL! I spent too much time gawking over those Baby Daddy shows for research for this and feel I probably lost a few brain cells in the process. But if I have entertained, then I feel it was well worth it. LOL! My mother uses a fake soup can in the freezer to hide her most valuable jewels, so blame her for the silly idea. :) And the Wes/Willow thing, I added because I love their RL relationship and just had to find a way to get them together in one of my fics. :) I can't believe you read it in one setting! Super reader, is you.

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2008 - 12:51 am Title: Epilogue

Thanks for a great story.

Author's Response: You are very welcome. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2008 - 12:26 am Title: Epilogue

Big cheer! Wonderful end to a wonderful story. Glad to see such a happy ending but I'm so sad to see it end as well. I used to get so happy when I saw "In Harm's Way" in recent updates. You are a great story teller. Thanks for giving us such a great one!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words. I'm thrilled that you look forward to the updates. And I'm so glad that you liked it so much.

Reviewer: droatia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2008 - 12:18 am Title: Epilogue

awesome. awesome. awesome. Fantastic ending to a fantastic story. I'm so sad to see it end, but it was a perfect ending : )

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm thrilled that you liked it.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 10:49 pm Title: Epilogue

Wonderful fic! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 10:12 pm Title: Epilogue

A baby boy :) Sweet; you're right, I remember my brother and his cousin have very blond hair when younger. With time it got darker.
Enjoyed the domestic glimpse in their future.
Loved the story.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yes, two of my children had blond hair as babies, but now it's sort of dirty blond. One of my sons looks like he's going to stay blond. And my husband's hair was blond until he turned thirty. It's now a light brown.

Reviewer: Mabel Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 10:11 pm Title: Epilogue

It's been a privilege to be listed as one of your betas for this fic. I have enjoyed every word. And some of your chapter titles have been inspired - Peas - for example! LOL! Great plot, well wrtten, good job done *hugs*

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Mabel. I really enjoyed chatting with you and this fic wouldn't be up as is, if it weren't for all those chat sessions on what I was going to do next. You are a great listener and you come up with some great ideas!

Reviewer: MarzBar Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 09:46 pm Title: Epilogue

Sigh! Sorry this story is finished but I enjoyed every bit. Are you working on another?

Author's Response: Hi there. I was sad to see it end too. I am working on another. It's a collaboration and may not be posted under my penname, but under one that we make up together, because we both have pennames here. I've also got plans for another installment in my vamp!Buffy verse.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 09:31 pm Title: Epilogue

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A most execellent story.

Author's Response: Thank you. And thanks for faithfully reading and leaving reviews. :)

Reviewer: Zaira Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 08:01 pm Title: Epilogue

Thank you for this wonderful story! It was one of my favourites. I always like it when an author takes the time to bring our favourite couple slowly closer and it's not just Spike giving Buffy one look and becoming instantly a good boy or Buffy giving in on the sexual tension on first sight. I loved this story through the course you took it and I'm almost sad it had to end. Thanks a lot and I hope to read more of you soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this nice review. I'm with you, I much prefer a more believable yet longer pull towards each other. I'm so thrilled that you liked it. I should have more to share in the future.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 07:02 pm Title: Epilogue

Really great ending to a wonderful story. I loved it and can't wait to read more from you. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked the ending.

Reviewer: Sibb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 06:03 pm Title: Epilogue

Loved it! Seriously, this was a lovely story and thank you for writing it and then sharing with it with all of us.

Author's Response: Thank you, Sibb. I'm so happy that you read and enjoyed the story. It was pleasure to share it with everyone.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 05:29 pm Title: Epilogue

ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL ENDING!!! i LOVED reading this fic and im so glad that u stuck with it and finished. the ending was perfect and youre an amazing writer. THANK U soo much for writing this fic and i CANT wait to read more of your work

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Your enthusiastic reviews were always a pleasure to read. :)

Reviewer: victoria2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 04:37 pm Title: Epilogue

What a perfect conclusion to a perfectly lovely story. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

Author's Response: You are very welcome. I enjoyed every minute of writing this story and I'm so glad that I got to share it was an appreciative audience. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: beast Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 03:52 pm Title: Epilogue

i loved this whole story. it was awesome

Author's Response: Thank you. You are awesome for leaving me a review to let me know how much you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 03:52 pm Title: Epilogue

This chapter wrapped up this fun, entertaining story with a big, shiny bow! Billy was delightful, and I could picture him being handed off through all the festivities. Anabella making a guest appearance was also charming.

Spike turning into a doting father was no surprise, but I enjoyed the description of his changing diapers and midnight feedings. He's slipped into the role seamlessly, though I'm sure he'd love a daughter to spoil. Maybe the Gem will work its magic again.

Thanks for this delightful read.




Author's Response: You are certainly welcome and thank you for all your insightful and well worded reviews. I looked forward to them. :)

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Epilogue

Loved it ...

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 03:40 pm Title: 30. Always

Spike being all demanding and pushy was fun, but reveling in Giles' shock at all this new information was a little mean. I know there's no love lost between them, but Giles deserves some respect, he's all about keeping Buffy safe, too.

Spike and Xander bonding was charming. Xander's a lot more tolerant than canon, and here I think he'll wear Spike down. Maybe even become a real friend in time. Wes turning up was a big surprise, but I loved the reference to his goofy dancing style. That scene on "Angel" never fails to make me laugh.

Author's Response: Well, Spike is a soulless demon. :) And there is no love lost between them. So it might be mean, but I think it is in character. I love the goofy dancing on Angel as well. :)

Reviewer: _3xy_ Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/29/2008 - 03:08 pm Title: Epilogue

*happy sigh* Perfect ending though I'm really sad that this is the end. Looking forward to your next story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2008 - 10:27 am Title: 30. Always

Loved this chapter, as always. I don't want this story to be over, though. I'll be keeping my fingers crossed for a sequel. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm not sure about a sequel. I wrapped it up pretty tightly with the epilogue. But I'll back with more stories in the future.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2008 - 10:00 am Title: 30. Always

Already read so I'll just say:
Loved it :)

Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2008 - 12:03 pm Title: 30. Always

Loved it! Will be looking forward to the epilogue!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2008 - 07:49 am Title: 30. Always

I really enjoyed reading this fic. It's nicely written and keeps you hooked.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2008 - 04:17 am Title: 30. Always

i LOVED the update and im so glad that giles accepted it. i LOVE this story and i CANT wait to read the epilogue. PLEASE update as soon as u can, im DYING to read how it ends. THANX

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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