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Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 10:00 pm Title: 24. Appearances

Well Happy Birthday! I"ve been reading this fic all along, though haven't been so great at leaving reviews. Looking forward to reading how the plot plays out between Buffy and Spike, especially since Spike overheard Xander and Giles.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the good wishes. I'm so glad you took the time to leave a review to let me know that you are reading. I know I didn't leave too many reviews until I actually started writing stories myself. :) I should have an update for you in a few days.

Reviewer: henrietta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 09:56 pm Title: 24. Appearances

awwwwwwwwww poooor spike
*gives him a cuddle*
and gosh he's so strong to contain the rage
*BIG HUGS FOR DAWN AND SOME CHEER-SINGING*

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I know. Poor Spike. And yes, he's really having to dig deep to hold in that rage.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 09:53 pm Title: 23. Yes!

Things are falling into place for Spike. His relationship with Buffy is getting easier and easier. She's really trying to trust him, but he has to keep giving her reason. It wasn't long ago he was all about the violent death threats, it's difficult to wrap her brain around Spike's loving her.

Willow seems all for it, though. Now with the ammunition about the Gem of Amara, she's looking at Spike in a new light. She practically made Spike ask Buffy out to dinner.

It's all very entertaining.

Author's Response: :) Yes, Willow is cheerfully on the side of them getting together. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for letting me know.

Reviewer: henrietta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 09:39 pm Title: 23. Yes!

omg i missed a chapter
but i must say it was very
YESYEYEYSYYESYESYEWOOOOOYES
and brownies too!

Author's Response: LOL! I'm so happy you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 09:37 pm Title: 24. Appearances

Love the drama and how Spike is seeing Buffy's attention. More please soon.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoying it.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 09:05 pm Title: 24. Appearances

Happy Birthday! I feel like we're the ones getting a gift since you posted a new chapter. I'm in love with this story. It's so much fun! My heart was breaking for Spike as he overheard Xander and Giles. I thought it was hard waiting for an update before, but now it's going to be doubly hard. I hope Buffy and Spike can hash it out. Actually, I wish he would have said something to all of them and just took off for awhile. Then again, I just want Buffy to trust him but I can understand where she's coming from. Sigh! It's going to be hard waiting.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind wishes. I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the story and that you think it's fun. That's what I want to do. Entertain with a well rounded story. The show was so good because it had a little bit of everything. That is harder to do than I thought, but I'm trying :) I'll have an update for you in a few days.

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/03/2008 - 08:24 pm Title: 24. Appearances

Happy Birthday! Sending you Spike wrapped in a big bow!

It may be your birthday, but we are the ones who got the present! Great chapter, but I'm not loving this turn of events. Dumb GIles and his big mouth! I hope Buffy soon makes Spike see the truth about how she feels about him (or gets it through her thick head herself).

Loved the wandering hands under the table. So sweet but hot at the same time.

Have a great birthday!

Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm so glad you enjoy my updates. I don't think anyone will enjoy the end of this chapter. But, have no fear, I am a Spuffy girl and this is not the end of the story. :) I'm glad you liked the under the table scene. Was fun to write.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/02/2008 - 05:51 pm Title: 23. Yes!

hee! willow is a great ally to have. i like the bit about the story of amara too. and spike's domestication (trash night!) is hilarious. and now i'm off cause the talk of brownies has made me hungry.

Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad you liked the trash can scene. Was fun to write. I hope you got some brownies. They sound good right now.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2008 - 03:16 pm Title: 23. Yes!

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Blackoberst Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2008 - 11:14 am Title: 23. Yes!

So she finally knows who the father is... Took her long enough!

Author's Response: :) Yes, it took her awhile. It was in the back of her mind, but considering the fact that no vampire she'd ever heard of had children, I don't think she was wrong to keep telling herself it wasn't possible.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2008 - 09:58 pm Title: 23. Yes!

Enjoyed the update :)
Good to see Buffy starts to doubt that Parker is the father :) And the brownies? Sweet, when Anabella first brought them and later when Spike was worried about Buffy not eating.
Clever answer to Willow's question.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the brownie parts. And yep, Spike's been around long enough to know how to word something when he feels like being good. :)

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2008 - 10:00 am Title: 23. Yes!

Ooh, things are looking up! Loved it! :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2008 - 03:59 am Title: 23. Yes!

Loved that she is giving him a chance, kindof. I would love to hear more about the Amara story and I can't wait for baby news to come out.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoying the story. Thank you.

Reviewer: _3xy_ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2008 - 03:19 am Title: 23. Yes!

Yay things are looking up. I was half expecting a proposal because of the title *snicker* but that would just be... too fast. :D Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, no proposal. But, I'm glad you like the story. Thank you.

Reviewer: zombiegirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2008 - 03:16 am Title: 23. Yes!

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Execellent chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2008 - 02:09 am Title: 23. Yes!

A little more.. in a positive direction.. a kiss and a little more information about the gem..

Enjoying.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2008 - 05:43 am Title: 22. Breaking Xander

Finally

Author's Response: :) Yeah, it took them awhile, but I was trying make it believable.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 - 09:30 pm Title: 22. Breaking Xander

Enjoyed! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 - 09:29 pm Title: 15. Not Possible?

I've really enjoyed to storey so far... I was always a bit disappointed when Spike lost the ring of Amara so quickly in the Whedonverse... And you do write the characters amazingly well. :)

Sadly, the Buffy suddenly being pregnant bit just kind of horrified me. I've never been able to stand pregnancy/children Spuffy fics, so I don't think I can finish this one. Tried skipping ahead a few chapters, but to no avail. Ah well...

Definitely let me know if you write any non-pregnancy stories in the future, tho'. :) I really do love your style. :)*

Author's Response: Thank you. It was a pleasure talking with you in emails. I have certain things that I just hate to read as well, so I understand where you are coming from. I'll say again, though for the others reading this review, this story is NOT a baby!fic. It's not cutsey about babies and the romance between Buffy and Spike is more about them then a baby. That is why I've purposely kept Spike in the dark about it for so many chapters.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 - 05:27 pm Title: 22. Breaking Xander

I love that Spike goes to Giles to help Buffy out and pretty much spells things out for Rupert. He's wearing his heart on his sleeve, and Buffy's not really as horrified as she claims to be. He revs her motor just as much as she revs his.

The fight in the cemetery was very entertaining, and I love how Spike takes charge. I laughed out loud when Buffy tried to nail him with the weapons bag and he just chivalrously grabbed it and carried it for her like a schoolboy taking a girl's books.

This story has put a big grin on my face and Spike doesn't even know about the baby yet! I'm looking forward to that bit of news hitting the group.

Author's Response: I'm so happy that this story puts a grin on your face. I so want to entertain with my words! Spike carrying her bag for her was a fun moment. He's taking her surliness in stride as he knows that she's got feelings for him. He can sort of sit back and let her run out of steam. :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 - 05:11 pm Title: 21. Off & Ons

Buffy accompanying Spike on his rental interview was fun. She's right to not trust him alone with humans, but his actions did nothing to alarm anyone. Until they got in the car, that is. His seduction technique is not subtle, and Buffy's not falling for his grabbiness. He needs to show up on patrols, not paw at her.

Cleaning up the violent demon population should go a long way to earning Buffy's trust.

Author's Response: And cleaning up the violent demon population will go a long way to getting his violence on. He needs an outlet for it and what better way that to thin the demon herd a little to help his woman out. :) And you are right about the patrolling.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 - 04:56 pm Title: 20. Moods

Spike's heart felt run down of his feelings for Buffy was lovely, and her reaction was in character. Of course Spike couldn't be more wrong for her, and his belief that he can be good is probably misplaced. It hasn't stopped her feelings for him from growing day by day. His actions are going to have to show her he's worthy of those warm feelings.

Spike flouncing out of the house with no destination in mind was amusing, and it brought a solution to one of his problems - housing. The mood ring was a clever way to address another problem - Buffy's mood swings.

This story is all kinds of fun.

Author's Response: I am so glad that you think the story is fun. I know I've had fun writing it. I really wanted to have a well rounded story with humor, drama, romance and much more.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 - 04:39 pm Title: 19. Saying It!

I enjoyed the midnight escape from the hospital. Troy seemed like a nice guy, but I can understand why he put Spike out of joint. It was just like his petty jealousy over Buffy's friendship with Ben.

Joyce's reaction to Buffy's arrival was spot on. Her concern was apparent, even in her mild bitching at Buffy. Spike's right, these are two head strong women.

Buffy had obviously been thinking on the Spike situation for a while to have gotten up such a head of steam this early in the morning. Her dwelling bodes well for Spike worming his way into her heart. Let's see how long it takes for her to believe he really loves her.

I laughed at Spike's reaction to Buffy's inquiry about Dru. I could see him patting his pockets, feigning looking for his keys. The look on his face at her stupidity would have been priceless.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and that you think my characterization of Joyce was right on. Thanks for letting me know. I'm so glad you got the imagery of Spike patting his pockets. I jut thought it was such a "Spike" thing to do. :)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 - 04:25 pm Title: 18. Nurseries & Biology

Giles' plan is actually a good one. Too bad he has no idea that Spike's not the only one in this strange "relationship" having warm fuzzy feelings and letting their guard down.

The trip to the nursery was understandably unnerving, but if Buffy would just listen to her dreams and put two and two together she's know the baby has a ready made father lurking about. I don't know how comforted she'll be, but I bet Spike will be thrilled.

Author's Response: Poor Buffy. But yeah, Spike will be floored by the news and... well, I won't say more, cuz, spoilers.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2008 - 04:14 pm Title: 17. Gift Giving

Buffy's conversation with Spike was charming. She's still wary, but when he's not being obnoxious, he's really very sweet with her. The information about using the bathroom points to other physiological changes when Spike's got that ring on. Say hello to your baby's daddy, Buffy.

Spike watching over Buffy all night was another sweet gesture, and I was delighted it led to him meeting up with Riley again. Not only did he get to hear Buffy's serum induced conversation with Maggie, but he also got to send a message home with Riley. The Big Bad is back, and he's...looking for something sweet to feed Buffy? Hysterical.

Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad you liked my ending for the chapter. That is what I was going for. The Big Bad is back and he's all about Buffy now. :)

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