[Report This]Date: 07/08/2008 - 11:48 am Title: Unwell
I really like your dialogue! :) And yey, they kissed ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I have a lot of fun writing the dialogue, but it's also the hardest part to get right!
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2008 - 02:20 am Title: Unwell
Gotta love a little bit of a spark. Two people that can be nothing but together. Love theri tension.
Author's Response: Isn't that sort of the definition of Spuffy? Can't be anything but together...very true for these two. Glad you're enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 03/23/2008 - 12:21 pm Title: Unwell
Mmmm Buffy is confusing William a lot :)
But at last she's sure that there really is something there, an attraction and that isn't one-sided. Must be worth something :) (Even if that made William run away again *g*)
Author's Response: Oh, yes, the confusion is all over the place! Thanks for reviewing, cordykitten!
[Report This]Date: 03/20/2008 - 04:51 pm Title: Unwell
Awwe... poor confused Spike/William. I love the Spuffy goodness in this chapter, can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed the Spuffy goodness, there is definitely much more to come. :) Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03/19/2008 - 02:42 pm Title: Unwell
William giving in to the kiss felt right, but so did his pulling away. He must be in an emotional turmoil. This Buffy is confused and pulled out of her reality. He's the adult in this situation even though Buffy has had to grow up quickly. The conflict is believable and very entertaining, and I'm looking forward to how you're going to resolve it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad the conflict between them is coming off well. Definitely a really delicate balance between the two of them, and from both sides there is so much confusion and guilt. So glad you're reading, and I am so appreciative of your reviews! Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2008 - 10:07 pm Title: Unwell
argh! so close! :D
Author's Response: I know. Sigh. Oh, the near misses. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2008 - 09:53 am Title: Unwell
Excellent AU story. Like the angst that William feels in wanting Buffy for his own. Great chemistry with this.
Author's Response: Thank you, Deb! So glad you like it, and I'm happy the chemistry is coming off well, it's obviously really important. Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2008 - 09:12 pm Title: Unwell
What a gent!
Author's Response: William is nothing if not the perfect gentleman...at least when he tries really hard to be. :)
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2008 - 06:52 pm Title: Unwell
Hmm. That's quite an interesting twist, to throw the time change in there as well.
My first thought is that if the badness of her 17th b-day can be avoided in this world, she should stay here. But the slayer dream specifically stated that circumstances in the world she didn't choose to remain in would still exist ~ meaning that Angelus would be left to rampage in the "other" Sunnydale. Okay, I officially have no clue where you're going with this so I'll resolve to stop analyzing ang just hang on for the ride!
Author's Response: Hopefully it'll be a fun ride! Love that you're trying to work out the whys and the hows of this screwed up spell, and glad you liked the twist! Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 03/15/2008 - 12:44 pm Title: Unwell
Well at least now we know what happened, but poor William always tryin to do the right thing update again soon becayse i love this fic.
Author's Response: So happy you love it, JO. I'll update as soon as the next chapter is edited a bit more! Thanks for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2008 - 07:39 pm Title: Unwell
The interaction between Buffy and William continues to be wonderful. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, MidnightGirl, I'm happy you're enjoying the couple's interaction! I have a lot of fun writing it, so I'm glad it's coming off well. Glad you liked the chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2008 - 02:22 pm Title: Unwell
Well, that's interesting. What accounts for the, er, 'temporal fold'? And seriously, whose voice was Buffy hearing in her dream? I should probably be asking more important questions, but that one just keeps cutting to the front of the line.
I adored the clichéd spark. :) Not so keen on William running out on the poor girl, although I get why he did so.
Lovely chapter. :)
Author's Response: Ah the temporal fold. And the voice. And the multitude of other things I will probably confuse you with in chapters to come. All will be explained in good time. :) Aw, the spark, William was very afraid and does not handle confrontation well. Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2008 - 01:17 pm Title: Unwell
I am pretty bad about getting out of my hole to write reviews but I really really love this and I can't wait to see more. This plot is so original, which seems to be pretty rare in Spuffy fanfic by now, and I just wanna know whats gonna happening next. thanks for writing!
Author's Response: I'm bad about reviews too, so any time you can crawl out of your hole to let me know what you think I'm immensely grateful. :) So so happy you like the story and think it's original, that's one of the best compliments I can get! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 03/14/2008 - 08:50 am Title: Unwell
Poor William. He wants her so badly it scares him.
And now that Buffy has finally gotten a taste of what she's been missing, I don't think she's going to let him keep thinking of her as a little girl.
He doesn't stand a chance.
Hopefully they have time.
Author's Response: The things working against them, time, location, age, confuse them both and scares poor William right off. And nope, Buffy will not stand for being seen as a kid...and she'll be showing him just how mature she is.
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