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Reviewer: Ariadne Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2008 - 11:29 am Title: Better Version Of Me

Interesting, so she has the other Buffy's memories? And William is in love with her? :)

Author's Response: Something like that. Very confusing for our poor Buffy, and William too!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2008 - 02:04 am Title: Better Version Of Me

The same girl, just different memories.

"Maybe you don’t remember, but, yes, alright? I have feelings for you. And…I was starting to think you did too. Before you forgot about me.”

How much emotion that brings about. Not did, there are feelings. Interesting to see where that goes.

Author's Response: Yep, there's no past tense in their feelings for each other at all. Thanks for the review, BuffyRat!

Reviewer: PennyDrdful Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/23/2008 - 01:21 am Title: Better Version Of Me

So I've been steadily working my way through these chapters, and while I just cannot swallow Drusilla as a good girl, I can definitely buy into your portrayal of Evil! Willow, Xander and Giles. You did an excellent job of making them truly menacing. Particularly Giles. Ripper seems like major bad news for our Slayer.

Author's Response: It's definitely hard to totally turn a character into something opposite, so I'm glad my evil trio are ringing true for you, even if Dru isn't. Ripper is such, such bad news! Thanks for your comments!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/18/2008 - 11:55 pm Title: Better Version Of Me

Will coming in for the save was vivid and exciting, and he and Buffy coming together after such a scare felt natural. Will must be suffering horribly, being in love with his charge and her not really knowing about the depth of emotion that's probably been running between them for months. You're doing a good job building the tension between them believably.

Author's Response: I'm glad their coming together felt organic, and not forced, and I'm so happy I'm conveying Will's pain well. Thanks for reviewing and letting me know what you think.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 11:00 pm Title: Better Version Of Me

*phew* Glad William came for Buffy. That was just in time. And Buffy got in trouble for the second time now; maybe it's time to rethink and take indeed back-up with her.
I thought he would stay with her when he took care of the wounds. He really was worried sick to find her hurt. Ah he was fond of Buffy before. ~ I wonder if William's reaction when Buffy called him Spike was partly because of being jealous.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, cordykitten! Yeah, maybe our little Slayer shouldn't be so quick to wander off alone! Good call on a possible reason for William's reaction...keep reading, it'll definitely get brought up again!

Reviewer: Lou Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 06:15 pm Title: Better Version Of Me

A beautiful scene between them.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Lou. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 02:37 pm Title: Better Version Of Me

Great story, can´t wait to see what happens next. I kind of curious to know what happened to the other Buffy and her reaction for Spike as a vampire.... (?).
Please update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, akarinacj! Glad you're excited to see what's coming up. William's research is showing there may not really be this other Buffy...keep reading, things will become clearer soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, akarinacj! Glad you're excited to see what's coming up. William's research is showing there may not really be this other Buffy...keep reading, things will become clearer soon!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 07:40 am Title: Better Version Of Me

William's talk with Buffy was very informative, loved the dialogue between the pair. Fantastic update!

Author's Response: Thanks, MidnightGirl! Glad their talk made things a little clearer for you. So happy you're reading!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 06:40 am Title: Better Version Of Me

Fab update.

Author's Response: Thanks, Sam!

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 06:05 am Title: Better Version Of Me

Another brilliant chapter! So Buffy is basically the same no matter which dimension. Can't wait to find out if the other version is in 'original' Sunnydale with the ' wrong' memories too. Things seem to be heating up somewhat with our favourite couple : ) always a big plus and gold star from me there :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Heidi! Glad you're loving the Spuffy goodness. :) Things are going to stick in this reality for now, and hopefully everything will be cleared up in a chapter or two!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 03:30 am Title: Better Version Of Me

So other Buffy and him were not together? Loved it and more please soon.

Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. And maybe there is no other Buffy and William's research is correct...Glad you loved it!

Reviewer: burnkitty Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 03:29 am Title: Better Version Of Me

Aww I loved it! So soft and sensual at the end there. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks burnkitty! More soon, so happy you loved the end! I was hoping it would be affecting.

Reviewer: Michelle D. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 02:37 am Title: Better Version Of Me

Great update - thanks!!

Hmm... interesting theory of multiple copies of the same person. I'm looking forward to how this all plays out and I want to see Ripper again!

Author's Response: You're welcome, Michelle D., and thanks for reviewing! Ripper will definitely be making a reappearance!

Reviewer: Tanit Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 12:29 am Title: Better Version Of Me

William to the rescue! Yay! Glad Buffy at least got the attraction conversation started. Rather sad end, though, "Before you forgot about me." *sniff*

Nice update. Happy to hear you've had a good weekend, creativity wise. Lucky us! :D

Author's Response: Thanks, Tanit! Glad you liked the chapter, as sniff-inducing as it was!

Reviewer: Dorians Kitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 12:16 am Title: Better Version Of Me

All caught up now and ready for more! Soon please!!!

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you're ready for new chapters, which you'll get pretty soon. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2008 - 12:14 am Title: Better Version Of Me

Poor William--realizing how close he came to losing her. I wonder if William had admitted to his feelings before (to "his" Buffy)--it sounded like maybe he had? I hope the conversation continues soon. :) Thank you for updating.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, Anna! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Poor, sad William...things will become clearer for him in just a few chapters. :)

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