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Reviewer: Kate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2013 - 04:17 pm Title: Shiver

Hope for more soon.

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Date: 05/28/2012 - 10:29 am Title: Shiver

Oh, so evil that you've never posted an ending for this lovely little story....one day, I hope you will, you have a wonderful talent - really enjoy your writing.

Reviewer: astridsuitcase Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2011 - 07:08 am Title: Shiver

This story is amazing, and to me is one of most haunting I've read... probably because I really really want to know what happens next! *sigh* I recently got into the title song by the Weepies and it adds an even more haunting dimension to the fic, I think. The inversion of characters is awesome and so believable. And it's so well-written... you're a talented writer!

Reviewer: Deb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/04/2009 - 08:39 am Title: Shiver

Great job on this fic thus far. As always it's great to get them together, but you do a fabulous job of moving the fic beyond the hook up. Looking forward to updates.

Reviewer: Brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 03:36 am Title: Shiver

Oh my. Buffy was so happy to just get her beating heart ripped out her. God. If she stays with William she will be essentially giving up her mother. It seems terrible way to say it, but staying here...I wonder if that will feel like killing her mom..because if she chooses the other reality her mother is alive but with William, her mom is dead. I hope for more of this story.

Reviewer: brett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 - 01:15 am Title: Home

This story is wonderful. I love it.

Reviewer: Atterb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2008 - 11:46 pm Title: Shiver

More? Please? Pretty pretty please?

Reviewer: wastedlifeofjack Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2008 - 06:57 am Title: Shiver

I just found this story and I love it! Thanks so much for sharing this with us. I'm dying for more, though! Are you planning to post an update soon? :)

Reviewer: PrettyPoppy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/05/2008 - 11:44 pm Title: Shiver

Okay, that was totally worth waiting for! And you know my favorite thing about it - sappy, pathetic, hopeless romantic that I am? The fact that BOTH Buffy and William actually said "I love you" before they made love. Thank you. I love it when that happens, although it rarely ever does.

Author's Response: I'm glad it was worth it, I didn't want to disappoint! I'm glad you loved the sappy romanticness of it all, I'm right there with you. It just seemed like William wouldn't have let that moment go by. I'm so glad you liked it, thanks for letting me know what you think!

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/25/2008 - 06:57 am Title: Shiver

great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks Lacey, glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/23/2008 - 10:04 pm Title: Shiver

Loved it even if the end was sobering.

Author's Response: Thanks, Sam. Thinks will definitely be sobering up a bit, but I hope you enjoy what's coming!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 06:05 pm Title: Shiver

I liked the contrast between the hot and sweet love scene, and the sadness of the closing scene. Good update!

Author's Response: Thanks you, Midnight GIrl! Definitely a roller coaster of emotions in this chapter.

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 07:30 am Title: Shiver

At least this dimension doesn't come with the Buffy curse of bad birthdays. That's a big plus.
It was worth the wait to see Buffy and William come together with no worries or guilt. I just wish they could have had more time together before she began to remember again.

Author's Response: Not yet, anyway. The curse can still rear its ugly head. Buffy and William can only make the most of the time they have...definitely stuck in a limbo of not knowing what's going on!

Reviewer: burnkitty Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 03:44 am Title: Shiver

*licks lips* Now that was some HOT smut hunny! If it wasn't for that sombering ending I think I would be going to go n have a cold shower.

I totally loved it, it was so yummy delicious!

Author's Response: Why thank you! They definitely had a nice steamy night. :) Sorry I splashed cold water on you, but that kind of happened to Buffy too!

Reviewer: jardim1 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 01:25 am Title: Shiver

Lovely, lovely, lovely. I love the idea of Slayer Buffy with a human William, and you've given yours just enough edge to keep him Spike-y while still giving this younger Buffy the tenderness she so desperately needed and never got. I feel so sad for this William, though, since it's by no means clear that she'll choose him over her whole world- and especially over her mother.

Author's Response: Thank you, jardim1! I too like SlayerBuffy/HumanWilliam, and I'm glad you're enjoying my incarnation! The decision is definitely a painful one on both sides. So glad you're reading!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 12:23 am Title: Shiver

Bookending this chapter with Buffy waking up worked beautifully. Days of flirting and petting all led to this moment, and they both believably seized the opportunity. William was gentle and loving and just what a person would hope for out of a first time. I was delighted that they exchanged "I love yous" before the lovemaking, and the urgency Buffy felt in finally saying it was charming.

Buffy waking up so happy and sated was lovely, and then you bring reality crashing back with the reminder of the coffee cup. She may be in love with William, but there are devastating problems in her reality. Buffy's found happiness, but duty still calls. I can't wait to see how this is resolved.

Author's Response: Thank you, Brunettepet. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. The resolution is a long way off, magic and love and duty have definitely combined to create an incredibly difficult situation. Thanks as always for your thoughtful feedback, I love reading your reviews!

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/22/2008 - 12:09 am Title: Shiver

Nice little Thursday surprise we have here. :) Loved it of course! And whoa down there Buffy, Spike's only human...can't go no five hours, if she wants that she'll have to go back to the other world. But of course I kind of hope she doesn't.

You know, it would have been so much more interesting on the show if Spike was really her Watcher. Love Giles, but come on!! Research parties would be hot! Actually when I started watching the show around 14 I didn't know what Spike was....I thought he was human. Thought he was like kind of her sidekick that was starting to fall in love with her in season 5.

Oh well, I rabbled on there for a while.

Poor Buffy, ouchy headache to experience there. Seem to be getting worse and worse. William better get his butt down there and take care of her, start researching on how to make the pain stop before she has another vision that makes her not remember him at all or be in a coma (like Cordy).

You know the drill, update soon. :) Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the fun review to read, u2fan2005! So glad you're enjoying the story so much. William as Watcher certainly would have been hot hot hot. I'll update as soon as I can, thanks again for your feedback!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2008 - 10:54 pm Title: Shiver

Thank you for bringing us some spuffyness. Don't I love it! The chapter too, not only the spuffyness. Looking forward to more :)


Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed, cordykitten. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Pixiecorn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/21/2008 - 10:15 pm Title: Shiver

naww i loved this chapter:).... great way to end it... i'm still very intrigued...


i hope you update again soon

Author's Response: Thanks pixiecorn! Glad you liked it, more as soon as I can!

Reviewer: ya_lublyu_tebya Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2008 - 07:32 pm Title: In My Arms

Oh wow. Update soon!! Really loving this story. Very interesting dream in this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you're still liking it. More soon, I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: Pet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2008 - 06:27 pm Title: In My Arms

I loved that Spike showed up in the dream. This chapter was great. Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, Pet! More as soon as I can, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2008 - 05:59 pm Title: In My Arms

Such a lovely (spuffy) scene at the begin of the chapter. William really likes to wrestle too.
And a glimpse of Spike, showing he is William too.
After Buffy won the fight she must decide what she wants. Maybe the two realities will merge if she is happy, getting Spike and William.
Enjoyed :)

Author's Response: The Spuffy will definitely be heavy for a few chapters---some long awaited loving on the way! And yep, just a little glimpse of Spike, who's not so very different from William after all...So happy you enjoyed, more soon!

Reviewer: PrettyPoppy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2008 - 05:12 pm Title: In My Arms

I know it was only a dream, but it was nice to finally get a glimpse of Spike in this story. And the way he was with Buffy was so strange to her, but completely what we're used to from later seasons. I loved that. I know it was uncomfortable for Buffy, but seeing Spike be gentle with her, even in a dream, was nice.

And I like the backstory you've given William; he's searched for true love and passion his whole life and has just never found it. It's very sweet and suits him perfecctly.

Author's Response: I've definitely missed Spike in this story too! It was fun to have him pop up, even so briefly. I'm glad you enjoyed the William back story, without the Dru element I think that's how human William would have ended up...struggling to find "true love". Thanks for the feedback, PrettyPoppy!

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2008 - 07:14 am Title: In My Arms

Very good chapter....I NEEEEED AN UPDATE....SOOOOOOON PLEASE!

Wonderful story: Can´t wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it, more as soon as I can!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2008 - 09:28 pm Title: In My Arms

The quiet evening in was lovely, and it gave these two a breather to think things over. Their feelings for one another are obvious, but there's still the age difference and the alternate reality to consider.

Buffy's dream gave me pause. Was it a slayer dream, signaling her return to the other reality, or permission to stay in this reality? The shock of waking up after losing dream William and Spike pushed Buffy to just grab what she wants. It was a delightful surprise that William didn't bother to argue this time.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter in this entertaining story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the great feedback, Brunettepet! That dream will confuse Buffy, there's two very opposite and very clear interpretations. So there's not a lot of help there with her decision, but she does know what she wants right now, and that's William. So glad you're reading!

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