[Report This]Date: 01/06/2009 - 07:50 pm Title: One-shot
i love how funny your fics are. there's an affectionate teasing of the characters that never feels mean but is just adorable. like buffy spelling metamorphosis. hee!
of course spike knows what's been going on, he's always more in touch than the rest of them. AND of course he gets buffy mad enough to punch him. that's the spike we know and love!
and william is so sweet!
*swoons*
Author's Response: I saw all your reviews together this morning and haven't stopped grinning since! I'm so very glad you like the way I write my stories. I need humor, and that's one of my major problems with "It Doesn't End With A Wish"; it keeps trying to be written in a lighter tone than I'm aiming for. Thank you so very much for the review, hope you had a wonderful Christmas and an even better New Year's! *huggles*
[Report This]Date: 12/18/2008 - 01:31 pm Title: One-shot
mmmm 2 spike r definately better than 1!
-Beth
Author's Response: Yes, they most definitely are! :-D
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 05/31/2008 - 09:31 pm Title: One-shot
i know this is already completed but i thought i'd review chapter by chapter anyway. I love Spike/Buffy/William fics and this looks really original so can't wait to carry on reading, which I will do as soon as I've stopped typing this review! So well done so far - Spike and William are both adorable in their own ways and it seems like Buffy is gonna get to have some fun with them both in the near future, here's hoping anyway ;)
Author's Response: OK, I'm officially honored! You're reading my fics in a row!!! *squishes* I promise lots of fun to be had with and among the boys ;-)
*hugs tight*
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2008 - 04:56 pm Title: One-shot
Hmm, the Immortal did a good thing ;) for once, the rest of the time he's a creep ;) Well, I wouldn't say no to such a wish... *grins* 2 is better than one, if it's Spikes ;)
Author's Response: Hee, my thoughts exactly, honey! Two Spikes are Heaven! And the Immortal definitely sucks, but we won't see him again until the sequel ;-)*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2008 - 07:52 pm Title: One-shot
Wow…what a beginning! And funny too… The confusion is nicely handled by the two Spikes automatically knowing what seems to be everything about the other. Buffy reaction seems classically Buffy…swinging back and forth between surprise, anger and awed delight at finding herself the lucky recipient of no less than TWO Spikes. OMG!!!! I have a feeling the heat’s about to be turned up…ha-ha-ha! tee-hee!
Author's Response: Hee :D I just sent you an e-mail! I'm glad you found it funny! I hope you like the heat in the next two chapters, cuz I thought I could do smut, but after that BSV thing *shakes head* not so sure...Thank you so much, you rock!!!*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2008 - 02:53 pm Title: One-shot
*gag* the Immortal omg! *gag* GROSSS!!! girl u have hit on a gold mine!!!! can't wait for ch. 2!
“First of all, did you just call me a British word for bitch?”
LMAO fyi ps, chimera (pronounced ki-mera also) was also in a greek fable. it was a demon/disease killed by a prince named Ballerphone (sp is incorrect but...)
Author's Response: I am so glad you liked it! Hee!!! Part Two is already up, hope you like that to. As for chimera... I am Greek, (and I knew that :P) but I believe it's also used for going after impossible dreams. I hope I wasn't too far off there!*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2008 - 01:44 pm Title: One-shot
I so needed the laugh and this was perfect for it! *giggles* Loved the Immortal's solution, loved that Buffy has two vampires to cherish her (even if one of them is a bit dense) and that place to end the chapter was so perfect with Buffy punching Spike! Off to read more!
Author's Response: Hee :D Thank you honey! I'm so glad you liked it (again! lol) And he's not dense... ok, maybe a little bit! lmao. I'm glad this provided you with the laugh you needed and that you liked where the chapter ended!*hugs you tight*
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2008 - 08:32 am Title: One-shot
Always love a good threesome fic, especially with two incarnations of Spike! Love the reason for Buffy being with the Immortal and the wishing for exactly what she wanted! Can't wait for the smut to begin!
Author's Response: Hee :D You just made my weekend honey, thank you so very much! Smut commences on Tuesday! LOL*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2008 - 09:05 pm Title: One-shot
Oh sequel is good :)
Good thing for Buffy to get what she wants (but now she has to let go the Immortal, no killing him off then). I don't think he'll fall for her trick a second time and change again.
Spike and his big mouth, huh? Looks as if his nose will suffering. ;-)
Author's Response: :D You're right about the Immortal... kind of:P There is not going to be more plot in this 3 part fic, but if (or rather when, cuz I've really warmed up to the idea) I write the sequel all loose ends will be tied. It will take a while though, cuz I wanna finish QS and get another fic down (you see, it's been twisting and turning in my head for a while) before I get to it.Oh, and Buffy will make Spike forget that his nose hurts really soon :P*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2008 - 06:08 pm Title: One-shot
Yum Yum give me some.... preferably naked - the both of them (three is good too). Liked the whole twist to the Immortal relationship : )
Author's Response: :D You'll have a LOT of nakedness on Tuesday, believe you me!!! I just hope you'll like it, cuz I haven't written anything like it before!!!Thank you for reviewing sweety, XXX
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2008 - 04:14 pm Title: One-shot
lol!! i love it!! can;t wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Hee! Glad you did!!! Thank you so much, more next Tuesday!XXX
[Report This]Date: 02/01/2008 - 03:14 pm Title: One-shot
LOL! i really loved the start of it and was gonna say how cute and stuff it was, then i got to the end! ... well i dunno, m... I LOVED IT! its the old Spike and new William and it couldn't be a fic if Spike isnt punched in the face! Aw, love how Spike is insecure too, like when she asks where hes going, and he automatically assumes shes gonna kick his ass because he think she think hes gonna feed. i know, confusing comment but what the hell! lol!
Author's Response: LOL! I loved your comment honey! Than you so much :D And she had to silence Spike somehow, but I swear it's gonna be all better in the next two parts! Smutily so! LOL*hugs you tight* Thanks again!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 06:53 pm Title: One-shot
No Fair! It was just getting good! Oh right, wait, I guess that really just a taste of my own cliffhanger medicine huh? More Please?!?!
Author's Response: SQUEEEEE!!! You liked iiiiit! Yup, that cliffy serves you right! *grins smugly* but I'll update in Tuesday instead of Thursday after all!*
hugs*
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 04:43 pm Title: One-shot
Oh yes, more prettyprettyplease!!!!
Author's Response: :D Ask and you shall receive! Already decided to post the second part on Tuesday instead of Thursday! Glad you liked!!!XXX
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 03:33 pm Title: One-shot
Ooh! I loved the beginning of this! 2 Spikes, could it be better? :) I can't wait to read more of this, so please post another chapter soon!
Author's Response: I was thinking of posting the next one next Thursday, but I might make it Tuesday after all. It is only a 3 part fic at the moment, and it's already written, so I might as well not draw it out!I'm sooo glad you liked it! SQUEEEEEE*huggles*
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 01:52 pm Title: One-shot
SQUEEEEEEEEEE she got 2, count them 2 Spikes. Can I meet the Immortal too, and if I rub him right get three wishes? LMAO. You know I think that with this story, you've grown as a writer and taken to the whole spillfy thing like a natural. It's not a road I think I'll ever travel, so I bow to your bravery and as always, it's a pleasure to help out in any way I can. Luv u, boo!!!
Author's Response: Oh honey, I'm blushing and giggling like a mad woman right now! Thank you so much for everything!!! Other than the best beta I could ever wish for you're also a great friend, and I promise if I ever cross paths with the Immortal (and right after I get my wish ;P) I'll let you rub him any way you want!I love you too, boo!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 12:30 pm Title: One-shot
LOL, you stopped! And here I thought you were going to include the rest of the story....UGH! Well, I guess I'll just have to wait then (pouts). Great job hun, as always!
Author's Response: LOL! I had to! People would get an overload if I posted it all at once! :D I already had my first negative review without the graphic sex! Glad you liked it honey, *hugs you tight*
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 09:51 am Title: One-shot
wonderful, just wonderful. loved your use of the immortal. more please, with or wthout plot
Author's Response: :D So glad you liked it! Thank you so much!!! More on Thursday (hope it'll be good, I've never written threesome or slash before...)XXX
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 08:38 am Title: One-shot
nice! altough two spikes seems too much to handle!
PS you got a trainee???
Author's Response: Yeah! He's not my trainee, he's the office's newbie and he's the boyfriend of John's daughter :( Nice kid, but too cheerful, as I said! LOLAnd no Spikes could ever be too much... well, I guess they could, but *shrugs* she's the Slayer, she'll manage! *giggles**hugs*
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 07:49 am Title: One-shot
Ok, I just read your other review and just had to get this out.
Why? Why, I ask...do people feel the need to read a story summary that specifically states threesome, then turn around and leave a mean review about it? It just never ceases to amaze me that some people are just that rude. "It squicks me out"...hello, then don't read it. Gah!
Enough of my ranting. Write all the nasty, naughty, shad two Spikes until the world stops spining smut that you want to. I will be waiting for it!
:)~Serenity
Author's Response: To her defense, I didn't have the 'threesome' part spelled out in the summary until I got that review, I thought the title and summary hinted on that.It was on the author's note, and I guess she left the review after she read that, without reading the chapter.Plus, she loves my other story, so yay!!! (I'm a little Polyanna -if that's how it's spelled:P-)*hugs*
Author's Response: And I'm a silly cow, cuz I didn't thank you for sticking up for me *hangs head in shame* Thank you hon!!*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 07:46 am Title: One-shot
Oh, honey! You have so got to write more on this...like...Now! Really interested.
I, for one, would be up for a more "proper" sequel if you are. Feel free to entertain me as much as possible. Gets a bit boring here at work sometimes.
Speaking of work, how goes it with the trainee? Is he still grinning from ear to ear and being all annoying?
~Serenity
Author's Response: Hee! Glad you liked it! I have all three parts of this done, and will be posting next Thursday and the one after that. I'm seriously considering the sequel, as I have some ideas, let's hope that will work out!The trainee still has that stupid smile (he's a great kid actually, but annoyingly cheerful!!!) but I told him part of his training is to do all the paperwork... alone! So yay me! LOL*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 01/31/2008 - 06:24 am Title: One-shot
Love your other story. But I will be passing on this. I hate threesome stories. I find it to be sick.
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know. I realize this will squeek a lot of people out, but as I said it was a request.Really glad you love my other story, though!*hugs*
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