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Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 01:18 pm Title: Temptation.

Good chapter Mabel, but i hate everyone being suspicious of him and all, making him doubt himself even . Hope giles and Xander stop being idiots.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm with you that Spike needs bit of respect! But will he get it........?

Reviewer: jamies_lady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 12:25 pm Title: Temptation.

wonderful update. really enjoyed.

Poor Spike he's doing his best and no-one is giving him a chance. looking forward to more

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!! I've got a feeling there's plenty more to come!

Reviewer: Spikes mrs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 12:23 pm Title: Temptation.

Wonderful chapter Mabel can't wait too see if all that human blood really has done it's work and healed Spike uop properly...I never really did think that one bag of blood here and there would be enough to feed a active vampire like Spike seeing as the average human body has 8-9 pints of blood flowing through it and Spike once said he ate three walking happy meals a day on average....

Author's Response: Thanks for the reiview!! I'm really gettin my teeth in to this fic if you'll pardon the pun!! Had to ask friend's how much blood in body as I'm bit like Buffy in the biology stakes!! tee hee

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 05:18 am Title: Feeling Hungry

awww.....awesome udpate:) cant wait for the next one...hope it's soon hehe

Author's Response: Thanks for that, was my favourite chapter so far!! :)

Reviewer: jan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 02:47 am Title: Feeling Hungry

OK Mabel you got a nomination for Best new author (and Best Drama and Best angst) at Sunnydale Memorial Fanfiction Awards. I also put you up for Best New author at the Spark and Burn Awards http://spark.jaded-paradise.net/nominees.htm
but you haven't been put on the ballot yet. Now do we get another chapter?

Author's Response: Wow Jan!! Thank you so much!!! I will do my very best to update later today!! Wasn't holding you to ransome, just been v busy!!! LOL :)

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2007 - 06:38 pm Title: Feeling Hungry

I love this fic so much I've faved it....Can I have another chapter soon please as i'e spent all afternoon reading whats posted...Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket

Author's Response: Oh wow! Thank you so much for that!! Mean's a lot!! Will update as quickly as I can just real life getting in way a bit, got friend just about to instigate a divorce!!!! I'm the shoulder she needs right now!! But will scribble away as quickly as I can!! Thanks!!

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2007 - 02:37 pm Title: Number Seventeen

Just to let you know I'm still reading... I'm not known for reviewing as I tend to forget....If I find a fic intresting....

Author's Response: I'm a bit the same myself, when there's a lot up to read!! Hope you carry on reading!! Tee hee!! :)

Reviewer: spikes mrs Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/21/2007 - 02:11 pm Title: A Typical Day

Um ..... intresting Hostile 17 must be Spike....And things are lookng bad for him as well... I'll just nip to the next chapter now...

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Keep letting me know what you think!!! :)

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2007 - 02:55 pm Title: Feeling Hungry

poor spike, buffy and he were sharing something beautiful. willow and co shouldn't judge!! Thought the bit between xander and Spike was wonderful, spike understood totally. looking forward to more, hated giles. hated his reaction, wouldn't trust him to guard spike's back either.


Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing the scene with Xander and Spike! Was hoping you guys would like it too! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2007 - 12:35 pm Title: Feeling Hungry

Oh boy now that was bad , just like Giles and Xander to jump to the wrong conclusion and now the want the chip reactivated . How would he fight the initiative if that happened, what was Xander doing down there anyway,Nosy git, always around at the wrong time. Very ,Very, good Mabel.
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Author's Response: Cheers Jo, I had most fun writing that chapter than any other so far!!! I was hoping you'd like it.

Reviewer: bluebird Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2007 - 10:31 am Title: Feeling Hungry

Love your story pleast write more soon!

Author's Response: Comments like that always make me write faster!!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2007 - 08:58 am Title: Feeling Hungry

Stupid Xander, and stupid Giles! Poor Spike... Loved how Buffy defended him though, and the spuffyness was sweet. Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked the spuffyness! It's not my forte! Much easier to write the angsty bits!! Tee hee!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2007 - 08:35 am Title: Feeling Hungry

Another turn in the story... first I thought for the better when Buffy let Spike feed to heal him but then it got worse (Xander overreacting). As did Giles... activating the chip again would indeed make him the same level as the people of the Initiative, playing around with the chip. Especially if the chip is going to fail if he'll be manipulated a lot more. Buffy wouldn't have been pleased if they had done it without her knowledge. And she would have noticed that they did, sooner or later. Even Willow don't trust him know. I wonder why they still think they are the ones to decide what is happening between Buffy and Spike. It should have been her (their) decision. It's not involving them. He needed the blood because he was ill, therefore Buffy did it. ~ Looking forward to more; enjoyed reading. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, think this has been my fave chapter to write! :)

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/19/2007 - 02:48 am Title: As You Were

haha the last few lines made me laugh:) great update....cnt wait for the next one

Author's Response: glad you liked that bit! I had fun with it when I wrote it! Will update soon but real life's got inthe way abit these past few days (pal with marriage troubles,s shoulder to cry on etc) but weekend makes it easier!!

Reviewer: jan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 01:24 pm Title: As You Were

Great update. I was wrong about the dates of the voting for the Spuffy Awards. Voting doesn't start until December 18. You should add your nomination in the story description. Campaining and asking for vites is allowed.

Author's Response: Think you must be my campaign manager!! So what do I say? That it's nominated for Spuffyawards and then say what categories? Yeah I enjoyed writing this chapter. and the next one too!

Author's Response: Back again, I'm touting for nominations for the sunny d awards at http://sunnydawards.dragonydreams.com there's a category for new author that I'd love to be in!! Hint hint! Been writing since Aug this year so not long!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 10:21 am Title: As You Were

Hah... Michael is blaming Spike but he also told Spike is dust. At last the 'normal' Initiative soldiers aren't looking for him now. Maggie? I thought she was dead?? Not s much if she wants to operate Michael herself. Sounds as if Michael has a chip now too. Yeah indeed, he has. And maybe Spike will get his revenge after all.
Glad to see Spike is okay after they took the bug out.

Author's Response: Couldn't let Maggie get off that easy!! Thaks for reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 10:01 am Title: As You Were

Wow, the bitch is back gotta say didn't see that coming. Thanks for the spuffiness , very nicely done,lot of kissage. Great job Mabes

Author's Response: Had to chuckle when you said you were cross that Maggie had got off so lightly!! I'd already written this!! Tee hee!! Now we can have some fun with her!! Glad you liked the spuffiness!!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 09:55 am Title: As You Were

loved the update. ugh Maggie ...she isn't even human!!
congrats on the nomination.
looking forward to more

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!! Delighted about the nomination!! I've only been writing since Aug! Also little scared would have been easier if it had been for a finished fic!! I'll be a nervous updater now!! Tee hee!! Luckily got few more chaps already written just need to type them up!! So old fashioned, use pen and paper!

Reviewer: jan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 02:45 am Title: A Bit Of A Ritual

You made the ballot!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that!! But what's made the ballot mean?Is it cos only 15 are aloolwed in each section?

Reviewer: jan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2007 - 01:24 am Title: A Bit Of A Ritual

I nominated this story for most original plot and best angst. They have to review the story before it goes on the ballot. Voting goes until 12/18. Check out the site... lots of great stories and you can enter yourself too.

Author's Response: Oops just read your other review re the ballot thing! Thank you!! I'v also spotted sunnydawards on a link, they have a best nw author section!! I've been writing only since Aug!! So if you're feeling generous in the nominating way... tee hee, can't vote for yourself on that one!! Thanks for pointing them out to me! :)

Reviewer: jan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2007 - 04:25 pm Title: A Bit Of A Ritual

Thanks for a wonderful update. Bet you are having fun naming all the demons and monsters.

Author's Response: Hi Jan, Not sure that my friends appreciate the way I've started naming demons!! Friends names backwards!! My secrets out!!

Reviewer: Pet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2007 - 03:03 pm Title: A Bit Of A Ritual

Great update! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: The next couple of chapters are my favourite's so far so let me know what you think!! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2007 - 02:06 pm Title: A Bit Of A Ritual

Uh-huh.. thought so when Spike shoved Buffy aside; he's still under control of somebody else. (Maybe it's the moving implant?) A red line.. if he was human I would say he has blood poisoning (sepsis). I wonder why they didn't clean the wound correctly. Didn't they have the time? Or it was about Spike loosing his arm then they would have to do the transplantation after all. Eeww, a bug. And even if it stinks it's better the bug is out now. :)

Author's Response: Oh yes that little beauty was better out than in!!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2007 - 10:54 am Title: A Bit Of A Ritual

tThank God u got that thing out of him it was too gross for words. Really good story telling Mabe, Now som Spuffy?

Author's Response: Hi, Jo, there's a little spuffygoodness coming your way in next chap or two!! Glad you're liking the story :)

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2007 - 10:04 am Title: A Bit Of A Ritual

awesome update:) looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: Wow! a review that includes the word awesome!! Will be grinning all day now!! Thanks!! :)

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