I really have been enjoying this fic a lot. It has been very well written and engrossing. I do have one small irritant with the last couple of chapters. You make the fact that their first time was not all flowers and rainbows out to be something shameful. Just because you love someone deeply does not in anyway mean love making is gentle and romantic all the time. I've been married for 16yrs to a wonderful man and if it was starry-eyed-teenage-ideal-lovemaking all of the time I would have sat him down and said WTH? There is nothing wrong or disgusting between two consenting adults, especially if they love each other. All that does is make it even more intense and passionate.

I'm really glad you updated again! I need more! This one was so sweet.