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Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

ohhhhhhh dear is me, this is so heartbreaking and beautiful all at the same time. I love what you have done with this story. you are brilliant. Though i am dying to know what happens..Gahhhhh

Reviewer: Shauna Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 08:33 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Are they going to get the chance to say goodbye, or is she going to be pulled from him while he sleeps? I hope they get the chance to at least say goodbye.

This chapter was touching; it's sad to know they're going to be separated, and soon. However, I have faith that the end will be worth the wait.

Reviewer: Fran Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 07:58 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Ow. This chapter really got to me especially Spike thinking about her scent not being in his apartment anymore. Good stuff.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 07:46 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

What can I say, it's just so heartbreaking! She could be a teacher. Teacher's are inspiring. Well mostly.

Reviewer: MARGARET Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 07:35 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

VERY SAD I HOPE YOU CAN FIX THIS SOMEHOW TO HAVE A HAPPY ENDING

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

What a melancholy chapter, and the last lie was ominous. The line "How could he sleep on sheets that no longer smelled of her" made my heart hurt.

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Does she have to go back? If I could have a guy who loves me that much I would stay with him no matter what

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 07:01 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

aww! sad but beautifully written. glad to know you write happy endings.

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