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Reviewer: Samantha_78 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Awwww! They need to make love soon please!!! Don't let her walk out of his life.....they are *too* cute together! Love this story! :)

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 07:22 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

You are getting really good at making me cry. lol This is an amazing story. So very bittersweet. I hope you have something up your sleeve for them, cause I really want them to work out. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

I'm glad Spike asked her to stay. He had to. I just wonder how Buffy could think there's a greater purpose than to love Spike!

Reviewer: Kristy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/26/2006 - 02:04 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

I love it... such a beautiful story. I have tears running down my face as I write this review. I'm such a sap.
I hope this makes it to the end.
Please update soon.

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 02:50 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I just want them to be together but I love the way you right and I know that the story will develop and I will love it. Instant gratification isn't always the most satisfying or lasting. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: bloodplay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 11:29 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

I just read the enitre thing in one sitting. And Now, I'm DYING for the next installment. WhenI read that you weren't going to be putting up any poetry I thought it would diminish from the story line but then it all meshes together and works. KUDOS! But hey, if you want some poetry to pass off as Spike's I'd be happy to oblige you maybe just a smattering of lines here or there. I love to write out the stuff even if its rarely any good. Drop me a line if you want any of my stuff. :)
PS-please note that I love the story anyway... just thought I'd offer.

Reviewer: nichbuket Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/25/2006 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

tears:(

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

AWWWWW THAT IS SO SAD!!!!!!!!!! i really hope that she has the whole month to stay there and doesnt have to leave since he finished his maniscript. i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. i really really hope that she decides to stay and that they gte together and are happy. also i hope everything works out and that buffys sees that shes meant to be with spike, evem if that means she has to give up being a muse. please update as soon as u can, im dying to read more. thanx

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

True love MUST conquer all (even musedom and the PTB). This is so wonderful (and so sad at the same time) . More please.

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

He's done!? No! What happeneds next?

Reviewer: A Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 02:42 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Really great story. You seem to be touching a lot of people with this one- I guess everyone has experienced the kind of pain Buffy and Spike are going through. I hope their story turns out better than some of my experiences. Which is one of the great things about fiction, of course :)

Please keep up the good work, and give us some happiness soon!

Reviewer: Charlie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 09:41 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

This is my favourite fic so far! It's honestly the only one i check everyday to see if there's an update XP Yes, i know i'm so sad but I can't help it, it's just so good! Please dont make this fic end soon It looks like its close and well to say that would suck would be an understatement.

Reviewer: Paige Conners Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

this story is great but it has taken a rather depressing turn as of late.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 03:19 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

I loved the scene in the graveyard, it was so poignant. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

"Because the pain was worth it. Anything was worth it to get to know her."--So beautiful, and how brave of him to live that way. He stands ready to lose more than most ever even have and he still stands. I'm impressed by him, and I guess I'm impressed by Buffy's desire to seve that higher purpose. But she can't knock love. I really think it's worth more than she gives it credit. And what happens now that he's written the whole thing. What's to come tomorrow... Amazing chapter, can hardly wait for more.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 01:37 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

cant wait to see what happens next!!!!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2006 - 01:16 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

great update

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

well.....buffy's gonna be leavin' soon. how sad. those two belong together. lol. anyway, loved the chapter. really great work. please post soon. i'm dying to know what's going to happen next. more please.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I typically love your stories. They range from good to fantastic. This one is the best you've ever written (IMHO of course). The thing is, what's going on in this story is how I feel almost every single day. I know that one day someone I love is going to be taken from me through death, and this rips me apart to think about. I try not to, but I can't help it. Sometimes it cripples me so that I'm not enjoying the time that I do have. It's difficult sometimes to cope. I understand their pain, as I'm sure everyone reading this does. I feel for this Buffy and William. They clearly belong together and don't see a way that they can make it happen. It's heartbreaking.

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 10:31 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Sweet update, more please :-)

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

As always ... beautifully written, emotionally draining, moving and gripping. As I read, I am continually praying to the God of fanfiction that there is a happy, happy ending.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Oh, they're so cute. I love this story, and i can't wait for the next update!! :)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

So sad....

Reviewer: Satindoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 09:35 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

Finished?!? It's finished? What now? Oh, god, when did you say we'd get the next update. I'm hanging here by a thread!

Sd

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 09:15 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I really love it when the updates come so quickly :)
Too bad for them the knowledge of living on borrowed time to be on the forefront. So Spike is trying to make some memories now because he knows what is bound to happen very soon. In a way so sad. Spike will have to learn to live with his jealousy and without Buffy like she has to live without him. And Buffy wants to stay a muse? She knows what she must do then; leave, sooner than later and follow her calling. It's heartbreaking indeed. In asking Buffy to stay even if he knew he didn't have the right, at last he tried all he could do.
And Spike's manuscript is finished now. I wonder too if Buffy has to go now or can stay till her month is over. ~ Sad but good chapter :)

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