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Reviewer: missus_grace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 04:58 am Title: Chapter Eleven

How many naughty things can they do without taking her virginity, I wonder? It's fun being along on their ride as they find out!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Buffy is thinking.. she isn't used to what happens to her now, she doesn't know what it is. Never knew it so why should she recognize her feelings...
To me it seems as if she already has fallen in love but she doesn't know it yet. That would explain the tugs on her heart :) Mmmh I would think when Spike awoke this feelings in her because she is connected to him on her mission, the Muse thing.. than, after the whole time she would have experienced it before :)
Awe, she feels treasured. Yeah, Spike knows what Buffy is to him (his feelings for her, not only her job of being her muse) and yet he knows he can't have her. And it isn't like they could try out what counts (still counts) not affecting the virgin part. ~ Loved the update, hot again :)

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 05:24 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

I just found this, and it's an absolutely adorable fic!! :) Can't wait for the next update!!

Reviewer: galatea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 02:06 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

First thing - woah mama, that was STEAMY! *fans self with hand*

I really like that the virgin thing is not strictly explained at this time. I think it will be really interesting (and HOT) to see how much they're willing to risk as they work around the virginity clause. I love how you have Buffy, in her innocence, being the one who pressures Spike to go a little further than is possibly wise- and him being the one swept away from logic and reason.

Because Spike is experienced and Buffy is not, I think it's important that she still have some measure of control over what they do, so it doesn't seem like Spike is trying to seduce her out of musedom. His wanting what's best for her is what makes their relationship so tender and sweet.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Hot and romantic at the same time. Buffy's balance of seductiveness and naivety is charming, no wonder Spike's fallen so hard.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Great update-- Our naughty little Muse is getting quite an education, isn't she? How very sweet they are with each other, though. I look forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Great update-- Our naughty little Muse is getting quite an education, isn't she? How very sweet they are with each other, though. I look forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 10:31 am Title: Chapter Eleven

It's a strange but beautiful fic and I will keep reading.
Thanks

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 06:48 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Huh, brainfreeze.... That was hot.. kinda wish i didn't stop smoking last year.. lol
Love the innosence from her mixed with the hotness of Spike.. Great update

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 06:08 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Great Spuffy interlude, very hot and sweet. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter Eleven

I love this story. It is amazing. So much emotion in every sentence that you write. But it is very bittersweet. I'm glad that you brought up the virgin issue. I was curious where you were going to draw the line. But I can't help but think that if they were together, the means shouldn't matter. But then no more story. So bring on the sweet sweet torture. ; ) Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter Eleven

"He wanted to snap, to give in and take her, headless of the consequences.

It surprised her to discover that there, in the heat of the moment, part of her wished he would."--The way those two play, if there is anything hazy about that "virgin" clause, it would seem highly plausible it's already been crossed. How wonderful for them to unknowingly cross that line and wake up together one morning more than they should have. But then again there is also much fun to be had taking htat clause and barreling through it full throttle. Either way or any other, this is fabulous and fun. Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 03:02 am Title: Chapter Eleven

"He wanted to snap, to give in and take her, headless of the consequences.

It surprised her to discover that there, in the heat of the moment, part of her wished he would."--The way those two play, if there is anything hazy about that "virgin" clause, it would seem highly plausible it's already been crossed. How wonderful for them to unknowingly cross that line and wake up together one morning more than they should have. But then again there is also much fun to be had taking htat clause and barreling through it full throttle. Either way or any other, this is fabulous and fun. Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Paige Conners Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter Eleven

okey now i feel really sorry for her. but this story it si captive. can't wait to read more

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter Eleven

cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 01:52 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Awwwww!

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter Eleven

SHEW that was totally hot. I love how you are betraying buffy in this fic. All very innocent and inquisitive. Ready to experience anything. This is an awesome story. more please

Post whenever you want, i will always read

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter Eleven

wonder how long Spike will be able to hld out before he "HAS" to taste Buffy. More please.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Another lovely chapter. :)

And about the change in posting... I don't mind when you post it as long as it gets posted! lol! ;)

Reviewer: readergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter Eleven

This vague description of what makes Buffy a virgin sucks wind! She deserves to know what an orgasm is like from firsthand experience! Aaaack! What a torturous, wonderful plot device this is.

Reviewer: ash Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2006 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter Eleven

loved the chapter!...nope there's no problem with the change..anytime an update is made it is greatly appreciated...cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2006 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Great chappie, lovin' the fluff! :)

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2006 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

aww!

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2006 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

... i trust addie to get us through this sweet torment to a happy ending ... i trust addie to get us through this sweet torment to a happy ending ... i trust addie to get us through this sweet torment to a happy ending ... I trust addie to get us through this sweet torment to a happy ending .....

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2006 - 10:35 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

definately not a problem for me. loved it!!!! great job. there time is winding down huh???? please post soon. love this soooo much.

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