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Reviewer: Sharon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2007 - 03:33 pm Title: Coming Together

I think it was great and it did emphasize the emotional aspect while still being totally hot.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks :) I love it when y'all smack me for being insecure! lol

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/15/2006 - 12:00 am Title: Coming Together

this is in NO WAY weak. It's beautiful--especially that speech that Buffy gave. she's right--they CAN overcome the Xanders of the world, and they will!

Author's Response: Thanks. That was just my perfectionist, insecure part talking. Your reviews really make me smile!

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 01:01 pm Title: Coming Together

well... i think it could be a possibility. But if joan of arc faced death because she heard voices... i know i can stand a rough time in morality's sake!
(and i am not thinking about hot, mind-blowing sex... i swear, i'm not)

Author's Response: hahahahaha. Thanks, I needed that!!

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/11/2006 - 09:30 am Title: Coming Together

Well if you have a LJ it's not under the name of 'Xela' or I would have add you already ;-). I'm German and I never heard the word 'kip'. Thanks to the Internet you can find all the definitions or that there are none *gg*. I'm sad to hear that you didn't find a beta there that did return your stuff too.
*gg* Spike and William were a bit too much for Buffy's ability to speak ;-)
Hot chapter :) I'm glad Buffy feels connected to them both and intend to make their relationship work, her 'MINE' statement. ~ And I don't think it was weak. It was more for them to find out they really want to be together. And it was still hot :)

Author's Response: And hey, kip is just one of THOSE words...I guess. it's under Aleekza. lol Thanks for your continued support!!

Reviewer: Sandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 09:05 pm Title: Coming Together

Enjoying it so far.
Don't know if you or anyone else has noticed, but Buffy always reaches for or kisses or starts sex with Spike first and THEN Will joins in. Is that just me seeing that? If she really does do this then is this going to cause a problem at some point? Just wondering.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. As for the initiating, there's something to it and there's osmething not. You'll just have to read more to see what it is :D

Reviewer: hotlipedjen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 06:35 pm Title: Coming Together

I found the chapter lovely. Now I'm just waiting for the shoe to drop. What's Xander gonna pull?

Author's Response: Let's just say that Xander is a massive ass...

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 05:26 pm Title: Coming Together

okay... i changed my mind. This is sick. and perverted... and totally selfish! I'm so envio... ahem, shocked by her behavior!
i can come to term with buffy/spike... soulmates, and destiny, and blah blah blah. Buffy/william... that's a nice alternative, it offers different scenarios... But buffy & spike & william? i am against it! it's immoral! she can't have both of them! she should behave like a good girl... choose one and give the other my address so that i can confort and redeem him!

Author's Response: I think this is one of my favorite reviews ever. But I think Buffy would track you down and beat the crap out of you. Just a thought...

Reviewer: Jenn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:33 pm Title: Coming Together

That was defintiltly not a weak chapter at all. You showed so much emotion and love in this chapter it was great. can't wait to find out what the dangerous look was between will and spike.

Author's Response: :) Glad the emotion came through...and that look will be addressed

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:13 pm Title: Coming Together

Not weak, HOT. Very Hot. K, cold shower now.

Author's Response: Ha, thanks, and save some cold water for me!!

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:11 pm Title: Coming Together

Weak? NO WAY! I love this story..Like I said before..You are touching on new territory here, and I think you are a brave author for doing so. I imagine there are a few people who will not read this simply because of the "taboo" subjects that this touches on. SO I say..BRAVO my dear, and carry on! lol

Author's Response: Well thank you. I must admit, I'm having way more fun than I should writing this... But your support is amazing.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:09 pm Title: Coming Together

Absolutely loved it! Looking forward for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ScarletRose Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 01:31 pm Title: Coming Together

Good god that was hot! Update soon, please?

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 12:40 pm Title: Coming Together

I didn't think that this chapter was weak by any means. I want to know more about the dangerous look in Spike and WIll's eyes? Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Eh, I dunno, sometimes you write something and it just doesn't sit well with you. But thanks for the comments, that look will be addressed forthwith! :)

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:44 am Title: Coming Together

Great chapter! The emotion was so intense! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Thanks, that's what I was going for.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:43 am Title: Coming Together

Weak? by whose standards, makes me want to go out and find a set of twins! (LOL) I loved it and thought it just the right amount of physical and emotional Spuffiness! And after I smoke a pack of cigs and have a cold shower..... well, just hurry and post more, cause I would really love to read more of this delightfully smutty, spuffy tale! LOVE IT! Thanks!

Author's Response: Mine, lol. You know...sometimes what you write just seems off, and you just can't fix it. And EVERYONE needs a pair of twins, I'm convinced!

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:36 am Title: Coming Together

great chapter

Author's Response: merci.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2006 - 02:18 am Title: Coming Together

very nice.... :) yep, that about sum's it up!

Author's Response: lol, well thank you!

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