Date: 08/09/2006 - 09:23 pm Title: Living Conditions
Connor is cute :)
I wonder who was with Dru, did this. Too bad they don't have evidence (but that would make it too easy). So Dawn's mother is Cecily? No contact doesn't mean dead. What doesn't fit is William's profile: has no prior criminal record, and does not have a history of violence. Looking forward to the next part :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the chapter :)
Date: 08/09/2006 - 07:04 am Title: Living Conditions
good update. PS- I love that the puppy is connor. how cute is that?
Author's Response: So glad you like it. And Connor is my own little touch. I had a puppy named Connor too :)
Date: 08/09/2006 - 03:31 am Title: Living Conditions
I liked this glimpse into Buffy's homelife, Conner was so cute. I loved the way Buffy spoke to him about Dawn. The police report was very informative, Dru really did a great job in setting Spike up. I look forward to finding out how the plot unfolds from here. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)
Date: 08/09/2006 - 01:13 am Title: Living Conditions
More more more more please! love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the great review. So glad to see you're liking this!
Date: 08/08/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Living Conditions
wow. loved it. buffy is right. something about dru's statement just didn't make sense. i mean, yeah we all know that spike didn't do this but still. something doesn't add up. loved it sooooo much please post soon. great job.
Author's Response: There is something there, and more will be revealed soon. So stay tuned. Glad to see you like where this is going. Thanks for the great review! :)
Date: 08/08/2006 - 10:44 pm Title: Living Conditions
Maybe the handprints aren't the same size or something. There has to be something they missed! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you like :)
Date: 08/08/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: Living Conditions
Really loving this fic! Can't wait for another update!
Author's Response: So glad you like. Thanks so much for the review! :)
Date: 08/08/2006 - 09:59 pm Title: Living Conditions
STILL LOVING THE STORY, WONDER IF DRU IS CRAZY ENOUGH TO DO THIS TO HERSELF OR IF IT'S SOMEONE SHE'S PROTECTING. UPDATE SOON THANKS
Author's Response: So glad you like this. I was really worried abou this chapter. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/08/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: Living Conditions
Hmmm - noticing that Dru could not have been raped before 3:30 pm and that her appointment with Spike was a 2 pm. Wondering when their tutor session stopped and if anyone can corroborate that. I'm interested in this story and it is very well written. The subject matter is a little too upsetting for me, but I will continue to read for a while - if not just to see if anymore Connor is in the story!
Author's Response: I'm sorry this chapter upset you. Hopefully you'll be able to stick around to see what's to come. There's lots of fluff mixed in with all the angst! And Connor does make another appearance too. :)
Date: 08/08/2006 - 07:54 pm Title: Living Conditions
So, I wonder who "did" Dru (cause we all know it wasn't William or there would be no point to this story). Looking forward to more. I love it and can't wait until Buffy starts to figure things out (and of course falls in love with William in the process).
Author's Response: Yes, there are alot more secrets that will come out about Dru. She's a sneaky one. Glad you like, and don't worry. The spuffiness is coming soon. :)
Date: 08/08/2006 - 07:50 pm Title: Living Conditions
connor is my hero! i mean, he did save the day... NOT chewing william's folder! lol
i really like how the characters get more defined... the plot goes but there is space for them to develop.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you like the character development. I really think that's important for a story like this. Hope you like what's to come.
Date: 08/08/2006 - 07:15 pm Title: Living Conditions
i just read all of this fic and a really like it! i hope there's more soon!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it! :)