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Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 04:24 am Title: Domesticated

Love it! I hope he'll share a bit, though...I have a feeling her game will be a bit of truth or dare?

Author's Response: Not quite, but I think you'll like it just the same. Thanks for the review sweets.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 03:44 am Title: Domesticated

Ooh, a game! Yay! Loved this chapter, it was so sweet, romantic, AND sexy! excellent to get all three in one! Loved that he cooked for her--although he really should tell her he's the one that makes that cake she loves, I think she'd love him even MORE :-)

Author's Response: LOL, well, all in good time she'll find out, that's for sure. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 03:07 am Title: Domesticated

Thanks for the great chapter :D .

Author's Response: You bet hon, thanks for taking the time to review, I appreciate seeing you come back for more, *hugs*.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 02:40 am Title: Domesticated

I--LOVED - IT!"But about Spikes cooking.And buffy not picking up on,the fact that spike did n't just cook ,But put out a spread like a Chef Da, When is she going to pick up on a clue.Beyond that.Cant wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Well, Buffy isn't in a frame of mind to put two and two together. All she sees is William with an apparent talent, for now. Glad you liked the chapter hon, thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: Braydie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 02:37 am Title: Domesticated

Love it! Definitely love it. :) This sort of playful domestication suits them well. When is William gonna have his money, so he feels comfortable starting a real relationship? And when is Buffy gonna crack and tell him how much she cares? More, please...?*

Author's Response: Awww, so glad you liked their domestic moments. I thought it suited them as well. As for William getting the money he needs, well, even he doens't know at this point. Buffy is a tough niut of another variety, she won't crack till the pressure is on, trust me. Thanks for the wonderful review sweets.

Reviewer: VICTORIA Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 02:26 am Title: Domesticated

I keep checking back for updates on this fic cuz I just love it! This was a really sexy and fun chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks hon, I'm blushing. Glad you liked the chapter, 21 shold be up in a few short days.

Reviewer: Mac Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 02:07 am Title: Domesticated

I love it! Can't wait to read about the game!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the chappy sweety, I think you'll enjoy the game they'll play - lemme know. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 01:05 am Title: Domesticated

Why is he sooo scared about telling her the truth? She'll be mad when she finds out he lied to her! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Well, inside he;s quite fragile, having been William most his life and Buffy is very important to him. He;s too scared to risk anything that might push her away from him - thus the insecurity. Well, she may be mad with him when she knows everything, but he hasn't lied to her yet, he's only managed to give her a bit of truth a couple of times when put on the spot. So, it's a half truth, no lying. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: Kimmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Domesticated

Another wonderful chapter ... this was so perfect, so comfortable and cozy. One thing that you do so incredibly well is shift gears and still keep the reader involved no matter what your characters are doing. (Sex or laundry)
I almost feel guilty during some of the intimate scenes because they are so well written that I feel as though I am in the room too (like a peeping Tom). And this awesome chapter I felt as though I was there with them sitting on a kitchen stool watching him cook and listening to them banter. I'm almost felt as though I had tagging along with them throughout the entire story ... it's because you do such a great job of writing each scene --- descriptions and emotions. (I'm gonna need my hand held when the angst gets rolling my friend).

Hope you guys are all feeling better ... talk soon!! Hugs, Kimmie

Author's Response: Thank you my dear friend. It's a tad tricky switching gears without letting it appear odd, but thankfully I rely on their growing/developing feelings for one another to help that along. Well, that's always a compliment - making you feel like a fly on the wall, it means I'm doing my job then. Oh hon, I will hold your hand through the angst, I know how you don't like it. Rest assured all will be well after that angst though... plus making up is always the best part, right? Yup, we're all feeling better here. Luckily it was a less than 24 hour flu bug for me, though lots of sleep and fluids rendered me wide awake and writing like crazy by 6 AM sunday morning. Oh well, at least this chapter was the result, and i'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks, as always, for the lovely review, *hugs*.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2006 - 12:07 am Title: Domesticated

He loved the playful banter they always fell into

so do I . Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks sweety. I haven't forgotten about you, just trying like hell to post the second I finish typing... life has been hectic beyond what I imagined lately. I appreciate you still following me hon, thanks so much.

Reviewer: Sara M. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 11:41 pm Title: Domesticated

Its so sweet. And he hasn't left, kind of makes you think he wants to be there. Shouldn’t Buffy realize that? Unless she’s just thinking he’s waiting for his clothes?

Author's Response: Well, she should, but these are our typical clueless characters for now. Glad you enjoyed the chappy hon, thanks so much for the great review.

Reviewer: nina1074 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 11:38 pm Title: Domesticated

Well that was fun! Of course I am out of ice now, but what FUN!

Cute breakfasty goodness! I loved how easily they go from hot 'n heavy to easy banter. It was just so damn cute and sexy. I am in love with these two. It did make me a little sad that Spike is still hung up on insecurities that he won't come clean with Buffy, but all in good time, I am sure.

Twenty chapters and still awesome. Thanks for the update!

Cheers!
Nina

Author's Response: LMAO, you;'re too funny. Yeha, I wanted to have them understand, as well as the reader, that they are meant for one another through a semi-normal day (given the circumstances that is). Yes, it is too bad SPike/William is stil insecure, but this is all still too new to him, especially seeings that he's admitted to himself he's in love. His first boig step forward is that he's determined to quit working for Lorne and of course pursue Buffy when he has the money for the restaurant. So we're moving forward slowly, but rest assured, all will unfold at the right time for these two. Thanks for your patience sweety and of course the lovely review. I'm so glad every time you come back and leave me words of kindness.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 10:52 pm Title: Domesticated

I think I have a disease.... I can't stop smiling. Through this whole chapter... all I do is smile! I know what this disease is, it's the this-story-is-so-incredibly-sweet-its-turning-me-into-a-sap disease. lol! Really good chapter. Can't wait to see what the game is. :)

Author's Response: LMAO... smil-itis huh? That's what I aimed for, the feel good, awwwwww kinda response to the chapter - well, after the initial "oh my" of the morning's activities of course. Glad you enjoyed hon, and thanks for the awesome review - made me smile.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 10:27 pm Title: Domesticated

love it! They are adorable together!

Author's Response: Kinda makes ya go awww, doesn't it. I know I said I didn't do fluff, but hey - the ideas rolling around in my head wouldn't allow for Spike to leave without sharing in some 'domesticated' moments. Glad you enjoyed them sweety, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 10:02 pm Title: Domesticated

So great. I hope there won't be too much angst...they're just so cute together! Great stuff :)

Author's Response: Well, I suppose everyone's idea of angst is different from the next persons, so all I can say is that from my pov, it's enough angst to make you worry, but not the kind that will punch you in the gut and make you feel it will be impossible for them to get together. I hope my not-so-eloquent little definition helps, (hey, I just woke up and am still on the first cup of coffee). Just trust that it won't be anything too bad, just bad enough to throw a monkey wrench in the mix. Thanks for the lovely review hon, as always, keep the faith all will be well in the end.

Reviewer: cinnamon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 09:54 pm Title: Domesticated

I totally hated it. Really. Of course I loved it! Good grief how do you do really think we could not enjoy all that?! There's gonna be some more angst now isn't there? Looking forwards to the next chappie. Lots and lots. And lots.

Author's Response: LMAO, well yes, the angst does have to happen some time, but you never know, I may just surprise everyone and delay it by one more chappy, we'll see. Thanks for such a wonderful review hon, I'm so glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 09:35 pm Title: Domesticated

I am IN LOVE (and lust, lol) with this story. The dynamic you have going between these two is so great. It really makes you want them to be together, despite how they met and what his profession is.


Author's Response: Well, if this review didn't make my day, nothing else will. You summed it all up beautifully sweetheart. That is exactly what my story is suppose to do, make you want them to be together despite the circumstances. Thanks for making my day, and of course the wonderful review sweety.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 09:34 pm Title: Domesticated

you shouldn't even have to ask if i love it cuz....DUH!!!! of course i do!!!! lol. was this chapter setting up the angst that is to become this story soon??? I can take it. I can take it. they were so cute in this chapter.....buit not in a fluffy way. definately not in a fluffy way. lol. please post soon. i'm lovin' every word.

Author's Response: Hee hee, it's always a pleasure to see you leave me a review, big hugs from me and my muse. Well, admittedly yes, it is a set up for the angst to come, but it will also act as something for them to think back on when that angst arises as well - call it a dual purpose chappy. LOL, well, even I'll admit it had it's fluffy moments, but hopefully it came across a tad more, hm, sophisticated than fluff - I guess it's because I'm 36 y/o that I dare not tread on that territory - for fear of being boxed in and labeled. Thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 09:19 pm Title: Domesticated

It's a sweet chapter. I love this little interlude before you throw in the eventual angst. :))


Author's Response: See, now I feel bad for having to go back down a darker road - sorry sweety, I have to. But, rest assured this night/day of bonding will serve as a reminder to our couple when the going gets tough - that they belong together. Glad you liked the chappy hon, and of course, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 09:19 pm Title: Domesticated

Oh my, you did it again... Another awesome update :-) Adored it..

Author's Response: Thanks hon, big hugs and kisses from me and my muse - he always loves to see you review.

Reviewer: ellle Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 09:08 pm Title: Domesticated

this chapter made me smile and laugh they are very cute :] update soon

Author's Response: Tee hee, I couldn't resist some playfullness for this chappy... glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 08:42 pm Title: Domesticated

Awe, update! The one not angsty chapter :)
I love the conversation (the arguing) of Buffy with her inner self *g*
Hot chapter again. Loved their banter the morning after, they seemed to be so in tune with one another. Mmm domestic, normal.
They were too cute in the kitchen :) And the way Spike sliced the vegetable Buffy should guess that he knows what he does, that he has learned it. Too quick for a hobby cook. And indeed, she came near the truth :)
The chapter? Loved it :))

Author's Response: Hi hon, *waves*, so glad you liked the chappy. Yup, Buffy's slut is always handy with the advice and an opinion too. Well, Buffy is a bit too stunned by the whole cooking thing to really think naything at the moment, but she'll eventually figure it out - if she doesn't get told before hand. Sorry, I'm being cryptic here. Thanks, as always, for the lovely review hon.

Reviewer: tis-kit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 08:29 pm Title: Domesticated

Loved it; and what a perfect morning! Now, if they'd only just talk openly with each other...



Author's Response: LOL, yes, indeed if it were only that easy. Hey, it's Buffy and SPike, oh and William too here we're talking about... nothing is ever easy with them. It's half the fun in writing it though I must admit. So glad you liked the chapter sweety, and of course thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Platypus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: Domesticated

So ecstatic to see an update-and a fabulous one at that. Such a great thing to come back to the internet to(damn aol, technical service my ass) . So yes absolutely love this story. "Wanna play a game?" quite possibly the most deadliest words in the world.

Author's Response: Awww, well not to openly bash aol, but I'll never use them again - nuff said. lol, yes, those are deadly words indeed, but I think you'll be pleasantly surprised by what the game actually is. I'm happy to have made your day with this chapter, cuz you made mine with your lovely review - thanks.

Reviewer: Dana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2006 - 07:54 pm Title: Domesticated

I love how easily they fall into normal life together.

Author's Response: Ah yes, it seems too good to be true huh? Exactly what Buffy may think after he leaves... a tad of aspoiler here. Glad you enjoyed it hon, thanks for the great review.

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