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Reviewer: Dolau Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 08:18 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Oh wow, thank you so much for that experience. Only cleared a couple of lines a time and listened to the music.. Perfect settings.
Almost OD'ed on the fuzzy feeling but that's all good, 'cause I'm still here.. lol
Absolutely loved this update and can't wait for more..
btw: my thanks to Kitty... Yum yum and off to the land of anything possible....... Ok, I'm back.. lol
Am gonna be looking out for your other story too... In happyland right now.. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks sweety, glad you enjoyed the music along with the setting and dialogue. Yeah, it was a bit mushy, but they needed it. I'll be sure to thank kitty for ya, she did a wonderful job on the pic. With any luck, it shouldn't be long before I post 'LOL's' sequel, Lessins in Love'. Thanks for the totally awesome review hon.

Reviewer: Anya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 08:10 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

loved, loved, loved it more soon please.

Author's Response: I'll get right to work hon, thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 07:21 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Actually, Jolynn's is Lesson of Love, so maybe not an issue.

Author's Response: Oh, LOL, I didn't see this review afterwards, ok, sorry there. Thanks again hon, your such a doll.

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 07:18 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I thought it was very sweet and hopefully showed William that she wants more from him than just what Spike has to offer. Also, so happy to hear about the sequel to Language of Love, but wanted to make you aware (if you are not) that another fic with the sequel's title is currently being posted by Jolynn. It might be kind of confusing.

Author's Response: Good, glad you liked it, and yes, she's trying to feel him out for the real man inside, William, and she'll realize more and more how much she wants him. Oh, about the title conflict, Jolynns story is Lessons of Love, mine is Lessons in Love. Yup, I was aware sweety, I mean Jolynns work is so fab, I'm always looking for any of her updates. Thanks for letting me know though, I wouldn't want to make that kind of mistake either. Thanks so much sweety for the great review.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 07:00 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

wonderful chapter. not too fluffy at all. she shared something that was very important and sentimental to her. that took courage to take him there. i also love 50's and 60's music. i was raised on that music. well i was a child in the sixty's. can't wait for the rest of the night.

Author's Response: Good, glad to know its more romantic than mush. Yeah, she really wanted to 'see' William and thought it would be the perfect place to take him... somewhere where he couldn't be flirty and dangerous 'Spike'. ONG, I really do love that music, particularly The Platters and The Everly Brothers. So glad you liked it and I think you'll enjoy 19 as well. Thanks for the awesome review sweety.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 06:58 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Great chapter. You painted a very nice and romantic picture. Not too sappy at all.

Author's Response: Thank God, cuz I can't do fluff, I mean, if it gets too mushy even my muse starts to gag. Glad I could strike the right balance and that you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great review hon.

Reviewer: Victoria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I was so looking forward to this chapter. It was just....wow. Thanks so much for a little romance for our couple. It made my day. It'll definitely help me get through the 'more angst to come'. You described the entire setting so beautifully it felt like I was there. I love the way you write. Can't wait for more updates. You do good Spuffy. Thanks.

Author's Response: Squee, so glad I could make your day. I owed to our couple and the readers alike to have a little romantic connection going on. Yes, there will be more angst ahead, but hey, it'll be a sweet ending too. I'm so glad you enjoy my writing, hopefully I'm getting better with time. Thanks for the wonderfully sweet review.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 06:27 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Very sweet.

Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed... thanks hon.

Reviewer: Ekips Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 06:22 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Great Chapter. Now I`m going to sit in the garden with my husband - drinking a glas of whine :-)

Author's Response: Oooooh, I envy you. I can't wait till my hubby comes home for the holidays so we can do the same - although it will be in front of the xmas tree. Enjoy your afternoon and thanks for the lovely review.

Reviewer: Spikes GaL Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 06:15 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Oh what a great story !!and a lovely chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you hon, glad you enjoyed and thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Pam S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 06:03 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Nice..

Author's Response: Thanks sweety.

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 05:56 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I thought it was excellent! I loved the songs tooo!! It was so romantic. Your story is truely addciting!

Author's Response: Tee hee, well I'm glad you're addicted to my story, it's a healthy addicition right? Glad you liked the romance, and I'm sure you'll enjoy 19 as well once I'm ready to post. Thanks for the review sweets, toddles.

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 05:30 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Awwwwwwww. Shmoopy, shmoop, shmoop. Complete with cuddles and old people. This chapter was very sweet. It even reminded me of dancing with a boy I liked it high school; I held him as tight as I could as if I could make the memory last even longer. So sweet. I await to see how the evening of bliss plays out. Ahhhhh, William.

Author's Response: LOL, yeah, sticky sweet with sugar all over. It does kinda bring about old memories huh? Had a few like yours from high school myself. I do hope you enjoy the rest of their evening together, it will be full of spuffy luvin. Thanks for the awesome review hon.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 05:19 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I've been checking all day and here it is at last. I am such a hopeless romantic - I loved it. Beautifully written chapter - thank you. You are right to have meaningful relationship they have to have more than they have had in previous chapters. Had a smile all over my face although from what you have written I'm not sure it's going to last!!! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more. xxxx


Author's Response: Awwww, glad I could have you smiling and not to worry, the next chapter or two will be all well and good before things start to happen again. So glad you enjoyed the romance, I couldn't help myself, I felt they needed it. Thanks for such a lovely and wonderful review sweety.

Reviewer: eve Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 05:01 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Oh I really really liked it, sweet, mushy, romantic, can't get enough of it. Let them have a few chapters of mushy-romantic before the angst comes back. Please?

Author's Response: Thanks hon, I think at least one or two more chapters like this and then, unfortunetely its back to RL for them. So glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: cinnamon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 04:55 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

wow, no wonder that was your favourite chapter to write! really great chapter and listening to the music at the same time totally rocked, it was all soooooooooo sweet - can't wait for the rest of the evening!

Author's Response: Tee hee, yeah it really is my favorite. Glad you listened to the music and enjoyed it... it will really help to set up the tone for the rest of their evening together. Thanks for the awesome review hon.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I just loved their mushyness! Update soon please!

Author's Response: *giggles*, me too, what can I say. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review hon.

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 04:17 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Yay! Loved this chapter--I'm a sucker for the romance, can't get enough of it :-) It was so sweet, exactly what they needed--and the music blended in was a great touch! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Hee hee, I think we all have a little romantic in us all, so I'm glad you enjoyed their time together. Yes, they most definetely needed this in order to move on. So happy you liked it and thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: teasha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 04:15 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

good chapter. Romance is always good.

Author's Response: Thanks sweety, I felt they deserved this little break. Hope you enjoy 19 once it's up.

Reviewer: chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 04:08 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I thought it was a lovely chapter, just the right amount of romance without it being 'ove the top'

Author's Response: Very cool, I had hoped to balance it as best as possible... no one likes too much syrup on their pancakes after all. Glad you enjoyed and thanks so very much for the great review.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 04:03 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Loved, loved, loved the chapter! It was so romantic and just what they needed to realize this is not just a passing attraction, but love in the making. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you hon, you are so sweet... you frip honey, hon *giggles*. Glad you enjoyed the chappy, and yup, they now understand this is more than physical attraction.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 03:54 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

Wow... what a romantic romantic night *sighs blissfully* Actually I love the chapter you wrote, tney do need that connection, makes whatever they feel for each other more real. If anything it serves as the best catalyst for William to start working for what he wants, instead of being "Oh she'll never be mine..."

Overall, great chapter, I've enjoyed it. :)

Author's Response: Wonderful, I'm ecstatic you enjoyed it. I agrfee, they need this time and connection to be made, especially for William's sake. It's time he convinced himself he is worthy and started to fight for what he wants. They may be small steps at first, but it will change quickly and for the better. Thanks for the awesome review hon, I always look for your review and your keen insight.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 03:52 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

OMG!!! You did an amazing job with this chapter! I loved all the extras you included, the Spike pic was droolworthy, the banner is lovely, and the music was perfect. The imagery William and Buffy dancing under the stars is so romantic. *sighs dreamily* Can't wait to read about the rest of the date. Fantastic update! :D

Author's Response: Squeee, so glad you enjoyed it, it really was my favorite chapter to write so far. I just loooooooooooove that music, it stirs the heart and weaves magic. Thanks for the wonderful review, you have me grinning ear to ear sweety. Oh, and of course glad you liked the pics too.

Reviewer: jo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 03:51 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

I didn't think it was to mushy , i positively loved it,you did a great job and I agree they needed to connect this way . Can't wait for more .

Author's Response: Thanks hon, I felt they did too. I mean rushing straight for the bedroom didn't seem fitting. Thanks for the lovely review sweety.

Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/14/2006 - 03:49 pm Title: Smoke Gets In Your Eyes

it was really sweet!! I cant wait to read the next chapter... *cough* smut pretty please *cough* :))

Author's Response: LOL, i like that... *cough* smut pretty please... too funny. Ok, ok, steaminess straight ahead in chapter 19, promise. So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the great review.

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