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Reviewer: ChrissieLinnit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 08:49 am Title: Arrested Development

Just a quick question...

Could you send me the number of this Agency?

*veg*

Author's Response: 1800 GET SPIKED. Teeheehee., thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 08:31 am Title: Arrested Development

great update. im glad they finally got to the point of stepping out of charcter of escort and client. the police officer may be cliche but it is definitly a fantasy of many, many women.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure its many a woman's fanatasy - whether she admits it or not. So in that aspect Buffy didn't mind, though she laughed her head off in the beginning. Thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: jayman Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 08:30 am Title: Arrested Development

Well, I think he should just quit his job, they should get married, have kids and she will blow up into a big fatty, he will get a beer gut, and they'll collect welfare, end of story. LOL, just kidding, but he should quit his job and they should have more sex because I need to read more sex because that's all I want to do all day anymore is read your story!

Author's Response: LMFAO... ewwwwwwwww, not sure I'd want to write those sex scenes. It might recquire rolling her in flour, lol. THanks bro, I needed the laugh.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 08:03 am Title: Arrested Development

Who cares if it's not the most original, it's all in how you work it. And you worked it great! I'm so unbelievably glad he told her that he couldn't pretend. I think it was important not only for her to hear that, but also for him to admit it outloud.

Really good chapter. Looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, sometimes cliche works out, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Oh yes, he needed to let her know - verbally - how he felt, even if that's not 'exactly' what he said. His words will have her thinking long and hard. Thank you so much for the lovely review.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 07:56 am Title: Arrested Development

Personally I like the way the story is playing out. I loved how this interlude turned into something more than just smokin' hot sex, the moment when William and Buffy's eyes locked and they made an emotional connection to each other was wonderful. I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next to our favorite pair of blondes. Fantastic chapter!
~ Loved the yummy pic of Officer Spike, and congratulations on your nominations at the Spuffy Awards!!!

Author's Response: Your words are music to my ears. I could have just gone the route of nothing but sex, but it wouldn't have done much for the story as a whole. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, truly. Also glad you like the pic sweety and thanks for the wonderful review.

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 07:04 am Title: Arrested Development

I am not disappointed whatsoever! I get so frustrated with people who can't handle a little angst. The angst is what makes the reunions, the love, all the more better. Who wants a story where it's easy going from start to finish, it would be boring and predictable. When the characters have to overcome hardships, it's all the more sweeter. I loved this chapter and I loved the ending. It was perfect that he couldn't go on further because he was afraid of getting his heart caught up any further, absolutely perfect. I think this will also show her that she means more to him than just a job and that's what she needs. Simply awesome! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: A huuuuuuuuuge thank you sweety. I just have to bear in mind I can't please everyone out there. The muse however, is the one I must please, lest he take another vacation on me, lol. Oh yes, angst makes the reunion and all else more powerful in the end. My motto - if I don't have 'fluff or spike/other or whatever' listed, then it's NOT that type of fic. Yes, William is much too affected by her to continue torturing himself anymore and it will most certainly make her 'see' things differently. So glad you enjoyed this chapter hon, and thanks again for the confirmation my muse needed - he's pretty smug right now - lol.

Reviewer: Platypus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 06:45 am Title: Arrested Development

O yay update! This has seriously made my week (which is either extremely pathetic or just a huge cudos to your writing ability and power to take my mind off tha psychotic place they claim as work-I'll go with cudos) Once again waiting tensely for your update

Author's Response: LMAO, you are so funny. Glad I could whisk you away from that place they call work - it's not work, it's hell with fluorescent lighting... I always loved that one. Thanks so much for the great review, made me giggle.

Reviewer: kay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 06:00 am Title: Arrested Development

really great ! next chappy?

Author's Response: Hopefully not much longer till 16 is ready. Thanks for the review hon and glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 05:47 am Title: Arrested Development

Love it ! You're doing a great job & looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much sweety, and I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter. I feared I'd drive some away for the sake of delving deeper into the plot.

Reviewer: dusty273 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 05:18 am Title: Arrested Development

Okay, so I repeat that you are evil by leabing it there, but I do trust you and your storytelling abilities, I can't wait to read more. Thank you for your sweet mention at the beginning, it makes me happy to know I could help you.
Back to the story, I keep on loving their inner talks, they're hilarious! And of course, the interaction between them as feelings keep up growing and they realize that whatever it is, it's deeper than they ever imagined. Wonderful character development, I just can't wait for the aftermath of William leaving after such a statement.

Author's Response: You're welcome hon, you deserve it. Nope, not trying to kill anyone here - just going for plot development - or the thickening of it anyway. Thanks for the lovely review and all your time spent on helping me, *hugs*.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 05:16 am Title: Arrested Development

Ohhhhh, did Lorne's plan backfire, after all?

Author's Response: Actually no, it didn't, but it didn't 'play out' like he may have hoped it would. He can't predict people's reactions or behavior. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: aj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 05:01 am Title: Arrested Development

Ahhhhhhhhhh! you cant just leave of there!

Author's Response: Of course I won't, but it is a vital set up for what is to come, promise. Thanks for the review sweety.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 04:49 am Title: Arrested Development

good update but not much of a love scene

Author's Response: Well, truthfully, it's not meant to be a love scene at all. It 's part of the recognition process for both as individuals. The time for romance will come, though in a timeline I feel suitable to the story's development. I'm sad you didn't like, but keep the faith, it's a spuffy ending for all and that's a promise sweety. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 04:43 am Title: Arrested Development

When is he going to quit that job?!?!?!?! Poor Spike and Buffy! I hope it gets better for them VERY SOON!! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Soon enough, but of course I'm sure not as soon as readers would like it to be. It will get better soon, just stick with it, it'll be worth it. Thanks for the review hon.

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