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Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 04:41 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

Wow...Now this is my kind of fic! : D So I am reading along...and the last two chapters were HOT! *whew!* I have to wonder...How many readers out there almost dropped their laptop when they came upon the lovely picture?? *raising my hand* Can't help but laugh when I imagine how many readers faces actually came within 6 inches of thier computer screen to "get a closer look" hahaha......Of course..Your introduction of Mr. Gordo was without a doubt a stroke of genius! I am Sooooo glad that my kids are in bed. There is no WAY I could contain myself while reading THAT! ; ) I was cracking up..

I WILL be watching very closely for updates for this one..Sex aside..*yeah right* I really like how the plot is going. I believe that Spike will find a hard time just going on to the next client after Buffy. ; ) At least my Spuffy loving heart hopes so! Great work!

Author's Response: Good, glad to hear it, cuz your my kind of reader, *grins*. I reeeeeealy wish I were a fly on the wall when it came to everyone's reaction to the pic. Also wish I could have enlarged the photo but it lost to much clarity. That is a good question... Hey, how many of you out there actually did put your face up to the screen for a closer view? Ah, Mr. Gordo. Like I told Kar, I've seen many fics use that name for a cat, a stuffed pig, and the list goes on. Me and my twisted sense of humor thought, why not, haven't seen it done before. Glad it made you laugh and really happy you like the plot, who says you can't have it all, porn with plot rules in my book. Thanks for the awesome review, stay tuned, we're goin from the fry pan into the fire.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 04:32 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

Whoa! *fans self* The chapters just keep getting hotter and hotter! And the manip, my gosh... that was one fantastic visual!!! I couldn't take my eyes off it. I loved Spike's inner dialogue, looks like William knows he's in danger of falling in love. Can't wait to read more. Wonderful chapter! ;-)

Author's Response: Tee hee, I can honestly say it's the calm before the storm, so get your rain jacket ready for the next chappy. I'm ecstatic that everyone is liking the pic so far, I really do wish I knew who did it so I could give them credit, also feel guilty cuz I couldn't ask permission. Hopefully if they ever see I used it they'll be ok with it and know I did it with the best of intentions. Yup, Williams the brains in the outfit, Spike the brawn/action. Getting them both on talking terms is the issue. Thanks for the awesome review.

Reviewer: Raspy_Luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 03:00 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

Love the story. It is really sexy. i gotta tell you...the way I read I inch the scroll bar down line by line (really about two lines at a time), so when I came to that lovely little picture was at the point I read Buffy's, "Oh my GOOOOD!" And THAT...was EXACTLY my reaction to the picture. it was quite funny. After that though, I had to scroll up really fast to hide the picture at the top of the page in case my boyfriend walked into the room. :)

Author's Response: LMFAO, and then LMFAO some more. THAT was exactly what I had pictured in my mind... that readers would be reading along and then NOT see it till she said that line. I was going to put a tremendous amount of space between her line and the pic just so people would be like, huh? and then find it. But alas, I didn't. So I am sooooooooo happy you shared that with me, it tickles me pink. I wish I were a fly on the wall of every reader when they came upon it, tee hee. I can picture you scrolling frantically too, in case your boyfriend came in, wouldn't want to make him jeaolous. Thanks for the truly wonderful awesome review, it has made it all worth it.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 02:40 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

Whoa....love the picture by the way! Great chapter! Update soon please!

Author's Response: Glad you like it, it is hot isn't it??? Thanks for the review, and yes, I will get back to work so I can post agin soon.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 01:23 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

Just wanted to add, that picture, did someone make it? ( Iknow you don't know who), but I am sitting here thinking I sure wish I was the one with the camera...

Author's Response: Yeah, I would assume so. Let's face it, if the real JM ever did anything like it - it would sell millions of copies, and FAST too. Could you imagine being the photographer, I'd be like, "take it off baby, hold it, hold it, that's it yeah, randy baby", like in Austin Powers. I think it's someone who has the art of superimposing down quite well. Doesn't matter to me, I like it just the same.

Reviewer: Debbie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 01:19 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

OMG!!! I am squirming in my seat.......you have a sincere knack to getting the motors running. I can only say WOW, and I can hardly wait for more !! Great job, and very appropriate pic of one of the sexiest men ever. So I say a very big thanks

Author's Response: LOL, 'squirming in your seat'. Guess I must be doing something right, tee hee. Glad you like the pic, figured it would be appropriate for this chappy. More steamy goodness ahead in chapter 7. A huge thank you for the stellar review.

Reviewer: golddrake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 01:07 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

great chapter

Author's Response: Glad you like it, stick around for more steamy goodness in chappy 7. As always, thanks for the great review.

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 12:57 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

Wow, this is incredibly steamy. Thanks for the chapter :D .

Author's Response: Thanks, it's good to see the effect I'm after is working. Wish my muse was always in this mood. Thanks for the review hon, stick around for the next one - more steamy goodness to come.

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 12:54 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

Thank God I have an air conditioner, and thank God its on right now! LOL. That was HOT -- and then the picture...are you trying to kill me? lol. I so LOVE how Buffy got him back. She is just too cute lol. I'm glad he didn't get mad at her for it, and instead found it amusing. Can't wait to see what the punishment is :)

Author's Response: LMFAO, guess it was rather steamy huh? Imagine me trying to write it???, too funny. I'm really glad you like the picture, I tried to time it within the story - and - hoped it would make up for not posting in so long. Yeah, I needed Buffy to have a sense of humor and a strong personality lest it become too serious. And yes, Spike/William is very taken by her ways... so he couldn't be mad with her. Stick around for the punishment and thank you so much for the awesome review.

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 12:51 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

I love the picture too. wish it could be enlarged-say life size. Great chapter. i bet he will have her begging soon. wonder what her punishment is going to be. cant wait for more

Author's Response: I'll say. If I could get a life-size cardboard cut-out of THIS, it would be that much easier to get through my husbands deployment without actual sex... OK, I'm bad. Thanks for all the great help Jeanie, and the wonderful review.

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 12:45 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

OMG thats hot!! i love this story and am so happy u updated. i love that hes getting her so wokred up and that hes showing her a side of her she didnt know was in her. i hope that he doesnt tease her to much and that everything works out, i alos i hope that wen this first incounter is over that they cant stop thinking about each other and develope feelings for each other. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens. thanx

Author's Response: Awesome, glad you found it steamy enough. With any luck the next chappy will knock your socks off. Yup, Spike is breaking her into a new world of enjoyment. I think it's safe to say that this encounter will be quite... unforgettable. I'll get back to work so I can update soon, and thanks again for the super review.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 12:33 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

First... thanks for the great update and the lovely little surprise picture in the middle - the pic made me try to tilt my laptop to try to peak a bit further down. Loved the update, worth the wait for you and your muse to be happy! Very erotic! (this tale will cause me to double my smoling habit - oh well!). Second I was reading your authors notes from the 1st chap through current and I gotta say, anyone who's flaming you for writing about rape (in this or any tale) should just go read some PG-13 stuff and leave YOU and other authors alone! I believe your "kinky/freaky" warning pretty much covers the possiblilty of a "rape", "pseudo rape" or "implied rape" - there are MANY people out there that have rape fantasies and while the actual rape of anyone is not a matter for enterainment - these stories ARE for entertainment, they are not actual accounts of a real human being raped. I think anyone in the real world who rapes another should have their parts boiled in oil and be put to dealth in as slow and painful way as possible. But these tales are fiction, with fictious characters so in my book anything the writer wants goes! It's your story to tell as you see fit. Now that I've ranted I'll get back to the good review! The tale is awesome, your writing skills are awesome and I'm so plesaed that your heart is big enough to share your talents with everyone. Thanks so much and more please (as soon as you're happy with it of course!)

Author's Response: I was kinda hoping everyone would forgive me for the time lapse if I gave them a treat (the pic), glad you like it. LOL, so what's that make it now, 2 packs of cigs a day? Yeah, you'd think the warnings and categories we choose would spell things out, but there's always someone who may not take that into consideration, oh well. Funny thing is, I wasn't even trying to imply rape, I think it was an accident I didn't see as being misconstrued, again, oh well. I REEEEEEALY appreciate your support on that issue and yes, anyone who rapes somebody in the real world should endure becoming someone elses b!@ch in jail - then maybe that slow painful death you spoke of. Thanks so much for the great review, and I'm so happy you liked it, you are so sweet.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 - 12:32 am Title: It's Not Nice to Tease

Great chapter! Really love this fic!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you came back for this chappy.

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