Date: 02/02/2006 - 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok I like the way this is starting.I saw Dirty Danceing,and I loved it.So keep going.
Date: 01/16/2006 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Great Job, I was pleasently suprised by this! Keep up the goo work. Talk to you later =P
Date: 01/16/2006 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey I just started to read this and I wanted to say i'm really liking this..great job so far...i'm looking foward to see where this is going...keep up the great work....
Date: 01/15/2006 - 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1
I hope you didn't feel like i was hurting your feelings, just wanted to give you some advice as someone who used to have almost 20 stories archived here.
This chapter shows definete improvement, but i still feel like maybe it could be slowed down a little. At least from Buffy's perspective because she doesn't tend to be someone who falls so quickly.
Like i said in my first review this story has a lot of potential and this isn't meant to hurt your feelings, i just know how important it is to have constructive criticism from readers, especially other writers.
If you have any questions about anything i've said, feel free to email me at joannewelsh76@hotmail.com
And again, Good luck!
Date: 01/12/2006 - 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good beginning, especially for a first time fic. Keep writing :)
Date: 01/11/2006 - 09:55 am Title: Chapter 1
nice start, with both Dawn and Buffy thinking the platinum blnde is hot ;-)
Date: 01/11/2006 - 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely can't wait for more!!!!
Date: 01/11/2006 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Annnnd they are off..!! * to dance class that is..lol*
Good start..I could really enjoy this story..I'll be watching for any updates : )
Date: 01/11/2006 - 04:06 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm so happy you finally started posting this! I think it's a great premise for a fic, and I look forward to reading more of it! :)