Date: 05/27/2006 - 09:36 am Title: Chapter Six
wow this is really good. please update soon!
Date: 11/20/2005 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter Six
Great new chapter. I can't wait for Buffy to figure it out and rescue Spike. Awesome job so far...more soon please!
Date: 11/11/2005 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Six
At least Spike is free and has some information now. Can't wait til he catches up with the immortal and cooks his goose (and of course for Buffy to accept that it's really Spike alive and ready for some lovin'!) more please.
Date: 11/08/2005 - 06:31 am Title: Chapter Six
"Yeah, and maybe all vampires have decided to go vegan. Andrew, how on earth did you and the other two dweebs make an invisibility ray? You're even more cerebrally challenged than my sister!"
LMAO! this rocks! Fantastic!
Date: 11/07/2005 - 08:51 pm Title: Chapter Six
The dream was better than the reality, huh? Seems as if Spike was able to flee. I'm glad :)
Date: 11/07/2005 - 05:07 pm Title: Chapter Six
I hope Dawn can convince Buffy soon about Spike's presence. Great chapter, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I think actions are going to end up speaking louder than words in this fic, so hang on to something ;)
And I do try to update as fast as i can - alas, the time eating capacity of real life!
Date: 11/07/2005 - 04:50 pm Title: Chapter Six
Excellent attention to detail in this chapter. It was descriptive and flowed well from scene to scene. I'm looking forward to learning The Immortal's nefarious plot.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review - a critical eye is always welcome. I'm hoping that I succeed in actual storytelling, so please do keep letting me know how I'm doing *grin*