Very promising Spuffy start at the end of the chapter. Like it better this way. I'm glad you rewrite it! Looking forward for more.

Thank you so much for "fixing" this episode. I too felt it went totally wrong (well - I didnt' care too much about the wedding that didn't happen, or Xander wondering around looking like a neanderthal [sp?] in that monkey suit he had on) but I always felt the opening was there for S & B to get a bit of Spuffy in - he looked so cute trying to be polite, sweet and friendly and she was so.... radioactive, the scene in the series just screamed " rip this ugly dress off me and have you wicked way - but get rid of that skanky ho you brought first" (well, that was my thought anyway). Can't wait for more of this very much needed rewrite. I am in your debt for making it right! More please.

please keep up the good work i am loving it and dont end it too soon

This sounds very cute. I like the idea that you're writing the episode the way it should have been written. I can't imagine what ME/Joss was thinking during the write of that horrid season 6. Anyway, Please, update! Luv, Spuf