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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2006 - 05:14 am Title: Chapter 12

That was all kinds of powerful. Buffy with her fears conflicting with her duty and Spike's heart seemingly in conflict with itself. Amazing chapter.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 - 04:53 am Title: Chapter 12

This is just so great! The way you are showing so many facets of both Spike and Buffy (Spike is all trying to be such a big bad evil thing but yet he has Happy Birthday Buffy written on a cake for her and plays a romping "you're it-hide-go-seek" game with her -- more and more of those shades of gray --- and Buffy is slowly learning to be playful and vulnerable - things I don't think she allowed herseft, or was even aware she could allow herself, as the slayer) I REALLY LOVE THIS!

Reviewer: Gina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 - 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 12

This keeps getting better and better!

Reviewer: Emma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2005 - 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 12

I love this fic. Really, even though it's not usually the type I read, it's very good. Spike bringing up all those ethical questions about if being a slayer is worth it and so on... Anyway, keep going with this one, it's really great!

Reviewer: Alison Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2005 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter 12

more please? its good

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2005 - 03:12 am Title: Chapter 12

Very emotional chapter. Wide range of emotions as well. We have the teasing and joyful lilt as they played "tag" in the house. Then we have the gut wrenching feelings of betrayal and loss at the end. Look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: I_Love_The_BigBad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2005 - 01:48 am Title: Chapter 12

Ohhh! kool! You have a great story going! Can't wait to find out what happens next!!! :)

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2005 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter 12

great update i loved it and the closeness between them is coming along fantastic

Reviewer: Aurora Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/10/2005 - 12:03 am Title: Chapter 12

Lovin' the chappie. Spike's still pushing her at every chance he can get and Buffy is still just so confused. Yet there's so much more. It seems that Spike's giving her something that she never really had growing up. Friendship. With him she can do the things she had never been permitted to do before. With the cake, tatoo, videos, wrestling games, Buffy can be a kid. Spike also challenges her, even at times pushing her a little too far. Though I think Buffy is innocent, she isn't stupid. She knows what Spike is but she's just scared. He's a way for her to escape, for her to forget that she's all alone. That's why she stays. I can't wait until Spike makes his real, non-biting move on an unsuspecting Buffy. I wonder how she'll react? Plz update soon.

Reviewer: 3988Akasha Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 12

Stupid, dumb Spike! They were all cute, and then he had to go and be, be...Spike! Grrr! I love it.

Reviewer: FuNkY Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 12

Update, please? Really lovin' it so far!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 12

I loved the new chapter! What Buffy did after seing the films, Buffy nestling, the hunt - and then it was sad: Buffy's watcher is gone. But then - Buffy's like a child inside: Spike asks her if she wants cake and it's okay. ... For the moment at last

Reviewer: riam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 12

great chapter, loved the invite bit. The only thing i didn't like was spike being portrayed as a puppydog for drusilla, he is a master vampire in hes on right. Even in the show you could see that spike didn't respect or fear his vampirc family, even the old days when angelus was stronger then spike did he not submit to him. love the growing relationship between buffy and spike.

Author's Response: Glad you liked most of it. As for Spike being too much of a puppy dog, I certainly understand your point. What I had hoped to portray (and maybe didn't) was that William, the poet is the puppy dog and the one who puts up with all of Drusilla's abuse, while the demon, the Master vampire, struggles against that and knows that he deserves more respect. However, I should also add I always saw Spike as submissive to Dru because of the whole Judge thing. I always saw that as being Dru's plan, and Spike just went along with it to make her happy.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 12

Interesting chapter. Usually fics have William love Buffy and his demon dragged into the relationship. Here you are stating the opposite. Good chapter.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/09/2005 - 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 12

Yay! An update! Really funny how she had to invite him in! Oh man! Lol! Their little romp through the house after that was cute too! Update soon!

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