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Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2006 - 05:08 am Title: Chapter 9

An almost kiss. They really are warming up to each other. Love how she shares little bits of her past. Really enjoying this one. Unfortunately it's time for bed, but I will be looking forward to more tomorrow.

Reviewer: Aurora Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/26/2005 - 12:13 am Title: Chapter 9

Just catchin' up with this story. So Buffy's past is finally trinkling into the story. It sounds a lot like Kendra's upbringing and it explains a lot about Buffy's insecurities and issues. I can see Spike slowly progressing into becoming in love with Buffy. One minute he's thinking about forcing her then the next he's reassuring her that she's beautiful and tries to kiss her. Definitely transition period for our favorite vamp. I'm on to the next chap!

Reviewer: Aisling Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter 9

WOW great update.. i almost thought she'd wear the wedding dress hahah cya xx

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2005 - 02:56 am Title: Chapter 9

Fun chapter. Spike dressing Buffy in underwear and she's not even aware of it. Pretty funny. Love it! more please.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2005 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 9

great update but i wishe that he could have went on and kissed her

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2005 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 9

Ahhh almost a kiss. So close and yet so far away. Look forward to the next update. I like the back story that keeps coming out, the history.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2005 - 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 9

interesting back ground. So she stopped at just eyeliner, huh? Funny that Spike would thing that he would have to take her by force when it seems that he could just as easily get her to accept it as was demonstrated by her agreeable nature at the end of the basement debacle. I look forward to your nex chapter.

Author's Response: The background was fun to develop and write. As for why Spike is obsesed with the idea of forcing her (other than he's evil) that should be further explained in future chapters.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2005 - 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 9

First - Spike is a typical male - letting Buffy do all the cleaning. Second - poor fate this slayer has. Taken (or given I wonder what was the case?) to a watcher, no fun, only lectures what a slayer has to do. Love to see them getting along... doing make up. Mmmm pretty bad Spike mmmm. But Buffy was a bit of a rebell - even only with small things like the earrings.

Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn't imagine a Buffy that didn't have a least a little rebelious streak, whatever her upbringing was. It's funny, I wasn't thinking so much of Spike as the typical male, but as the Victoria Gentleman whose had people wait on him all his life. But yeah, deffinatly male too.

Reviewer: Addie Logan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2005 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 9

I like it. More please. Just kidding. ;) Although I do like it and do want more... lol I really like what you've done with Spike. There are too many stories out there where he's still completely evil, but all it takes is a kiss from Buffy to make him a defender of Christmas and puppies. If you're going to have a pre-chip Spike, you have to make him still a killer, and make any transformation believable, which you've been doing here. Makes the story so much more enjoyable when people take the time to remember Spike's a vampire and not a big, cuddly teddy bear... I like the little glimpses you've been giving us into Buffy's pre-Spike life, and I'm looking forward to seeing how that develops. This fic is one of my favorite current WIP's.

Author's Response: Glad you like it, and thanks for the review. This Spike is deffinatly going to remain vampiric for the time being.

Reviewer: NEO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2005 - 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 9

Really liked this chapter, noe spike and buffy's real colors are coming out. Hope to see more chapters soon

Reviewer: riam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2005 - 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 9

They look like they would be a great couple. spike realy needs to get over that nasty bitch drusilla(sudders). And a buffy unhinderd by dumbfriends and stupid fairytale love angel. i like the way this story is going. see ya

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