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Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2005 - 12:43 am Title: 36

Okay first of all, I immensely enjoyed Buffy's logic in this one. How Happy Buffy meant Happy Spike, but especially the bit about being jealous. And second, you couldn't even give them a day of happiness without throwing the father in there?! This was an awesome chapter. Absolutely loved it.

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: 36

*looks up and scratches head* huh. Guess the Great Shoe of Doom is gonna be a Docker. =) can't wait to see what happens next, so I'm gonna go read more...

Reviewer: rockerbaby Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 11:36 pm Title: 36

Oooh very evil of you to leave us hanging like that! Can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: spuffy404 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 09:07 pm Title: 36

OMG!! I hope Spike killks him. lmao. not really. jail would be inconveint.

Author's Response: lol cracked me up

Reviewer: samica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 09:03 pm Title: 36

OMG! I hope dear old dad doesn't make trouble.

Reviewer: Babi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: 36

(excuse my french) HOLY FUCKING SHIT! You must update fast! As fast as you can! I'm on pins and needles. I love it completely!

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 07:20 pm Title: 36

more!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 05:51 pm Title: 36

Loved the update - that Buffy knows now that she trust Spike - and is very glad about it. And the babie's father? I thought he would pop up in a way.... and yes - there he is. Dum dum dum - cliffhanger! :))

Reviewer: spikeslover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 04:54 pm Title: 36

dum, dum, duuum! Go kick his ass Spike!!!!!!!! i hope the little sh*t gets whats coming to him! although i wanna thank him for being the reason Buffy & Spike found their love for each other, i wanna see his ass kicked for doing the one night stand, false name & number thing. grrr.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 03:31 pm Title: 36

Everything was going so smoothly, and I really enjoyed Buffy's "Go me" epiphany. Bringing the father into the story should add some drama amongst all the love and puppies.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 03:18 pm Title: 36

besides that i can't believe we share a birthdate...i wanted to tell you what an awesome chapter...the way you interlace every thought and feeling...and that cliffhanger!!! grrr arggg hope you update soon...pleeeeeassseeeeee---thanx

Reviewer: Spikes Eternal Lover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 01:10 pm Title: 36

dan dan DAAAN. woah go you. excellente. magnifico superbe tremendooze yeah... I'm out of weirdo italian sounding words now so i'll leave... --xXx--

Author's Response: lol

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 11:53 am Title: 36

Oh freakin crap!!! Spike's gonna go bezerk!!!! really am waiting for the next one!!!!

Reviewer: Kimber Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 11:37 am Title: 36

Oh you had better have the next chapter ready pronto honey........pronto on the double like the day before yesterday.....LOL

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 11:32 am Title: 36

Gasp! And the plot thickens...totally not expecting the guy to reappear. Heehee. Can't wait to see what happens next. =)

Reviewer: Pin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 10:02 am Title: 36

Really good chapter. By this time, I'd completely put the Father in the past, so this is a really nice twist on the progress of their relationship. Thanks!

Reviewer: Shadowsbabe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 05:00 am Title: 36

Knew it had to happen. But didn't think it would be so soon. Now let's see how not jealous Spike is going to be. Yeah, right!

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 04:40 am Title: 36

Dun...dun...dun....CRAP!!! I hope that doesn't ruin the happiness that's finally engulfing Buffy and Spike...whom, may I add, are CUTE!!! I love your Spuffy couple so much!!! Can't wait to see what'll happen to them now that the 'father' has appeared.

Reviewer: alexandrea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 04:38 am Title: 36

please please make buffy pissed off at the father .......and let spike just be the father he deserves it more plzzzz

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 04:21 am Title: 36

After all of that very happy non jealousy, you throw on quite the cliffhanger. My goodness, I can't even imagine what she should say. Are you honest, or are you not? Either way could result in some interesting legal battles down the line. So sad that it isn't actually Spike's baby. I hope that guy isn't a total asshole. Now, I know it's a given, but you really have to update, like, super-soon! Please?!

Reviewer: jade2099 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 03:38 am Title: 36

Uh oh...the daddy rears his head. WOW!

Reviewer: Mockerfab4 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 03:34 am Title: 36

Doh!!!! Great chappy and I was totally not expecting that ending! Whoah...can't wait to read what happens next. =) Thanks.

Reviewer: Kerry Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 03:26 am Title: 36

That is sooo wrong to just leave us hanging like this!!! Please post again soon...like tonight?

Reviewer: melissa g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 03:23 am Title: 36

omg omg omg nooooooooo! i hope buffy and spike dont brake up ohh and i hope the guy isnt riley or parker. love the sotory please update soon thanx.

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 03:13 am Title: 36

I can't believe you did that!!! You are pure evil and you better update soon. Brilliant, I was wondering if the baby's daddy would come back in the story.

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