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Reviewer: JG91 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/29/2005 - 11:11 pm Title: 32

Now, I have to say that was one of the best Aleternate Universe fics, I've read in a long time. I hate to say this, cause' it is against everything I believe in for the Show Buffy the vampire slayer, but I think that Buffy and Spike should havestayedfriends. I know, condem me to hell, but its true. In the story, they were the perfect friends. I still can't believe I said that, but aside, the story was awesome.

Reviewer: Bint Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: 32

i love it more now plz!!!

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: 32

Very chaotic, yes, but also dang near perfect. Loved the ending banter between Buffy and Spike, it made me laugh out loud =) Also...WHOO-HOO!!!! Jonathan ditched Harmony!!!! *happy dance* And--Bob Barker. He he =) To be honest, this is one of the best chapters so far of this fic--in my opinion, at least. Great job!

Reviewer: spikeslover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 03:31 pm Title: 32

i LOVED it! Yay for Jonathon and Fred! Can we have some Spuffy lovin soon, pretty please...pretty please with a spike on the top...with chocolate...and whipped cream...ooh, naughty images entering my head!

Reviewer: Jerzeyanjel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 01:42 pm Title: 32

I think the fight scene was great. It was very chaotic but I could so see Buffy standing there silent and then yelling I KNEW IT!! Like Noel in felicity when he sees her and ben studying together. Exclamations are fun. I still love this fic and cant wait for more!!! =)

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 11:08 am Title: 32

Oh you could have brought in the moon man, and as long as Harmful got what was coming to her I'd be happy......but was actually tame.......LOL

Reviewer: Jessi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 10:05 am Title: 32

I love this story and I think that it should never end.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 09:43 am Title: 32

Loved it - this was fun. And Ithink it is chaotic with something like this here happens.

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 07:04 am Title: 32

Yay I'm glad everything worked out for Jonathan and Fred, they're cute. I hope we haven't seen the last of Lorne. =)

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 06:59 am Title: 32

Yay I'm glad everything worked out for Jonathan and Fred, they're cute. I hope we haven't seen the last of Lorne. =)

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 06:37 am Title: 32

Yay, Jonathan and Fred ride off into the sunset. How beautiful :sigh:

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 06:09 am Title: 32

Ch. 31=You go, Fred!! I totally support the ass-kickage of Harmony...I'm right behind ya sweetie!! Buffy's speech was spot on perfect...loved that she's seeing the light about Spike too! Ch.31=Freaking A!! Great chapter!!! Harmony's shrieks totally remind me of those dog whistles...great analogy!! Oh mama, and Spike's icy voice...yum!! I love it when he goes all dangerous...great!!! Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Kerry Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 06:06 am Title: 32

It is incredibly wrong and mean of you to leave this hanging like this! :) Well done so far- I'm reallyq uite eager to see how they handle the 'fake' engagement portion of it :) Kerry

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 05:59 am Title: 32

I LOVED IT! *And then door burst open, hitting the wall with such force that it shut on the person who had flung it open.* LMAO! I love the comedy of it...and then Spike's chilling threat. Don't know about Buffy, but DAMN! That manly protective thing just makes me want to jump his bones. Hoping that Buffy gets to do a little of that in the next chapter?!

Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 03:39 am Title: 32

can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 03:33 am Title: 32

I would tend to thing that it wouldn't be a peaceful event... leaving the bride-to-be for another women on the morning of the wedding... not a calming situation. Though breaking up the wedding in the church would have been even less calming. and then, there would have been an audience. So much for the road not taken. A bit curious about the aftermath. Cause really, we all know Joyce is only upset because Harmony has nowhere to go :) Simply fabulous chaos, update soon!

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 03:00 am Title: 32

that was great...great scene, you did an awesome job...thanx

Reviewer: Jen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 02:20 am Title: 32

Loved it as usual.

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 02:12 am Title: 32

Oh my gosh - what a great chapter! I think that the chaos was very realistic, cause how else could someting like this happen! I'm sorry that Joyce blamed Buffy though... Anyways, I can't wait for more, so please update soon!

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 02:09 am Title: 32

That was awesome, I so fell out of my chair from the excitement. Okay, not really. But it was still totally awesome. Are you sure Harmony knows what fornicate means? I mean it can be a big word...lol! I'm just saying. Yeah, thinking you can tell how much I really don't like her. I'm glad Jonathan finally stood up to her and got with Fred. Screw the height difference. That man will be shorter than any woman...lol! Buffy is taller than him for crying out loud. Okay, no more drinking for me. Love it=)

Reviewer: Nic (Smitten) Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 02:08 am Title: 32

You handled that break up greatly I loved it!

Reviewer: Lindsay Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 01:59 am Title: 32

I loved that Jonathon stood up for himself and that Buffy told Harm off. It was chaotic but so is ruining a wedding on the day its supposed to happen, so kudos, the chap was perfect. I also loved the Buffy Spike banter at the end, so cute :)!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 01:45 am Title: 32

I actually thought that Harmony would of wailed a bit more and maybe in a fit of pique torn the flowers out of all the bridesmaids hair or smacked someone upside the head with her bouquet (If she couldn't get to Buffy - anyone would of done just as well) so your chaos was actually very nice. I really did love the chapter and I'm so happy for that very successful break up. So what else can Spike and Buffy get into before returning to their own lives? More please.

Reviewer: Kattie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 01:24 am Title: 32

Does happy dance in my chair... they was sooo sooo sooo great! i luv how fred was sooo well not really fred like but upfront and stuff. and hte end of this chapter was soooo funny! i luv it all plz update soon!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2005 - 01:23 am Title: 32

Yay!! Saving the day!! I love the end part there!! The rubbing off and such!! SOOOO funny!! I love it!!

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