[Report This]Date: 09/26/2012 - 02:58 pm Title: 30
This story is great, but I just have to comment... the story needs a bit of editing to fix errors, including one on this page where you use a racist slur (though many people don't know it's a racist slur). You've used "jipped," which is actually correctly spelled "gypped" and is a slur against the Gypsy people, indicating they don't deal fair. For Gypsies, this is very insulting!
Date: 05/03/2005 - 03:35 am Title: 30
sorry had two late nights love the fred jonathan thing!
Date: 05/02/2005 - 03:57 am Title: 30
Duty!?! Duty to what? Jonathan, the honorable thing to do would be to leave the girl to her own devices... must read on...
Date: 05/02/2005 - 01:46 am Title: 30
oh.oh. i bet buffy is going to save the day!! yippiee!!! and harmony can get what she deserves ;) wonderful chapter, loved it...thanx
Date: 05/01/2005 - 10:50 pm Title: 30
Duty schmooty...Jonathan needs to get his butt over to Fred and dump the bitch named Harmony!
Date: 05/01/2005 - 10:35 pm Title: 30
Duty smoooty!!! HArmful is a pain in the ass!!! Loving this ficage...religiously looking for more!!
Date: 05/01/2005 - 07:16 pm Title: 30
omg what at great last couple of chapters i luv it to death update soon luvs tina
Date: 05/01/2005 - 07:12 pm Title: 30
sorry i haven't reviewed for ages. loved the chapter. the Buffy & Lorne stuff still makes me crack up. its great! loving the spuffyness. hope Harmony gets what she deserves!!!!!
Date: 05/01/2005 - 04:35 pm Title: 30
He better go with Fred cause that is so adorable! You know what I noticed? That you use alot of song titles or lines from them. Like Wind Beneath My Wings, I could die in your arms, and Take my breath away. Is that just a coincidence or am I just crazy?
Author's Response: Wind Beneath My Wings was intentional. The take my breath away and the I could die in your arms, completely unintentional and didn't even notice until you pointed it out lol.
Date: 05/01/2005 - 12:14 pm Title: 30
"Doing my duty. Doing the right thing."
that's the story right there. that one lline is the story simplified innit.
lol, i reckon i know how this is gonna pan out. you make for a great read.
--xXx--
Author's Response: That line pretty much summed up Buffy on the show too...kind of funny.
Date: 05/01/2005 - 10:08 am Title: 30
Heehee, I really love Lorne. And I can't believe Jonathan is being all noble and chivalrous. Booo!!! Someone better hold him down until the wedding is cancelled. =)
Date: 05/01/2005 - 09:43 am Title: 30
Oh my...Isn't he honorable. I hope Buffy beats him up and locks him in a closet or something. LOL
Date: 05/01/2005 - 09:43 am Title: 30
Oh my...Isn't he honorable. I hope Buffy beats him up and locks him in a closet or something. LOL
Date: 05/01/2005 - 09:17 am Title: 30
stupid computer. I continue with my tirade: JOHNATHAN CANNOT MARRY HARMONY!!!!!!!!!!!!! you won't do that to us, will you? *sniffles and looks at author pleadingly* please? ... loved the update, it made me all happy--though a little frustrated at the end =)
Date: 05/01/2005 - 07:09 am Title: 30
Awe, wonderful update! Now I hope that Buffy can talk the groom into quitting :))
Date: 05/01/2005 - 03:18 am Title: 30
Aww! So Johnanthan's only going through with things because it's "the right thing to do"! Since when is that a good enough reason to do anything. lol! Can't wait for more of this amazing fic, so please update soon! Take care ; )
Date: 05/01/2005 - 02:52 am Title: 30
Awwww....poor Jonathan!!! Hope Buffy can convince him not to marry the vapid ho....and convince herself that staying with Spike is the best thing.....man, so much happened in the chapter that it seems like it should have been more than one page!!! LOVED IT!! Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 05/01/2005 - 02:25 am Title: 30
that was sooooo cute. can't wait for more. please don't let jonathan marry harmony. keep up the great work.
Date: 05/01/2005 - 02:15 am Title: 30
Lorne and Buffy are hilarious together, their humor and forthrightness work well together. I loved the Lorne line about "sorority pictures," so true! I'm sure Buffy can come up with an answer about "doing the right thing" that gets Jonathan on the right track.
Author's Response: I can just picture her wanting to do group hugs with her friends lol
Date: 05/01/2005 - 01:38 am Title: 30
omg omg omg! Fred and jonathon so need to hook up and i adore lorne lol! He's always a riot. I cant wait to see whats in store for harmony (in an evil way) and whats in store for Buffy and Spike (in a good way). Youve done an amzing job with this fic so far, please keep the great updates coming as fast as you can!
Date: 05/01/2005 - 12:55 am Title: 30
Noooooooo! Jonathan! The right thing is to chew out Harmony and then go find Fred!!! And Spike and Buffy are so cute! I love it!! Update soon!
Date: 05/01/2005 - 12:49 am Title: 30
Another wonderful. Love all your relationship in this story, from Lorne & bBuffy's instant friendship to even the anamosity between harmony & Buffy....and of course the Spuffy! Can't live without that. Just love it!
Date: 05/01/2005 - 12:48 am Title: 30
Someone better tell Jonathan not to waste chivalry on a bimbo that couldn't even spell the word.
Author's Response: That cracked me up! LOL
Date: 05/01/2005 - 12:43 am Title: 30
Kick his now out of the church and tell him to go be with Fred, Vegas is only a airport away.......fly Johnny fly.....
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