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Reviewer: Sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 11:07 pm Title: 16

I think you did a really good job at writing this chapter!! I couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen!!

Reviewer: Wikka Tara Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2005 - 09:02 pm Title: 16

You did a great job at writing it! I bet it was a little hard, but it came up great!

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: 16

well, it was really kinda sad, but I was awww-ing by the time it was over. I'm glad you've got Joyce acting human--for awhile there she sounded like my mom :) seriously tho, you're an incredibly talented writer and you carried off this chapter beautifully.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 - 06:07 am Title: 16

"I think I should just cut out the middle man and have the therapist deliver the baby,"--Yet another wonderful line. And that whole bit a where the pregnancy was reveiled... that was shear brilliance. Really funny and emotionally deep chapter. Great job.

Reviewer: Samolly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2005 - 11:38 pm Title: 16

You did a gret job on this chapter!

Reviewer: Enchantress Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2005 - 07:40 am Title: 16

I may have said it before, but I will again. I looooveee this story. It's so wonderful. I can't wait for things to get a little more spuffy.. but its so much fun for now.

Reviewer: spikes_niblet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 11:42 pm Title: 16

YAY this chapter was awsome and I cant wait for Spuffiness when they realize what they've got.

Reviewer: beverly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 11:11 pm Title: 16

if you hadn't said anything i would have never known it was dificult for you to write that chapter, it was excelent!!! i am really enjoying this story please keep up the good work!!!

Reviewer: Babi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 08:17 pm Title: 16

This is brillance! sheer brillance. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 03:40 pm Title: 16

Ugh, bitch needs to be slapped. Talking about Harmony, obviously...lol! That comment was just not cool. I loved Buffy's speech though, she sounded like she really meant it. Like they really were engaged and she was having Spike's baby. I really love this story, more soon=)

Reviewer: spikeslover Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 03:06 pm Title: 16

ah yeah! that was amazing! i'm so glad they know now! Spike protecting Buffy and jumping to the rescue was brilliant. I loved the chapter. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 02:40 pm Title: 16

yipppieeee!!! what an awesome chapter!!! i sooo love this story!!! thanx so much!! keep up the fantastic job...you can still strech out some of the UST ;) sorry i'm just an UST freak...like you didn't know by now =P thanx...hope you really really update soon

Reviewer: Julia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 01:57 pm Title: 16

The story seems to be getting better with every chapter. Good work. Waiting for an update.

Reviewer: shadowsbabe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 01:43 pm Title: 16

It may not have been an easy chapter to write but it was an easy chapter to fall in love with. It brought tears to my eyes and it made this lurker come out of the woodwork to tell you how much I'm loving this story. I'm definitely going to print this one out and save it. It's the sweetest "Spuffy" I've read in a long time. I'm happy you keep updating so quickly. But you know I don't want this story to end. Any thoughts about making this a long story or following up with the chacters again after this story ends?

Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 11:48 am Title: 16

I'm sure that's exactly how Buffy wanted to break the news, lol. I can't believe this was hard for you to write; it was so good! The family outburst was great, the Buffy and Spike moments were so tender. =)

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 11:10 am Title: 16

Oh what a can of worms......LOL, this was a hoot......great chapter....and barbie must die.......

Reviewer: tina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 10:58 am Title: 16

omg that was really good luved it to death update soon luvs tina

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 09:48 am Title: 16

What an incredible chapter! Seriously, it was great! I can't wai tfor more of this awesome fic, so please update soon!

Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 09:34 am Title: 16

What a way for them to find out..... cant wait to find out waht happens next..

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 07:27 am Title: 16

This was really good! I can't believe that horrible Harmony asked Buffy that!! Someone hit her please!! Harmony... not you. Anyway, I loved it. I also wonder if there was some modicum of truth in Buffy's speech about Spike being the long haul guy?? Eh?? Hehehe! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 06:38 am Title: 16

I was glad to get the email announcement that this baby here got updated; I'm looking forward for every new chapter (Eh, and my one and only too!) The way the 'being pregnant' came out was perfect because it was so naturally. And Ggrrr Harm, for asking such a thing. Are this her own fears? What what's the what of Harm and J., we'll get to know later, huh? And again: Loved the chapter. Sometimes I don't find the vocabulary /words I want to say; it's easier in your own language or translate yourself the words whilst reading. C.

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 06:05 am Title: 16

If this chapter wasn't easy for you to write it really doens't show. You did a fantastic job though it would have been great to see the scene with Harmony after Buffy left. I am really loving this story. Thank you for the plentiful updates.

Reviewer: melissa g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 06:04 am Title: 16

i love the story so far although i want to get together soon. cant wait for more chapters please update soon thanx.

Reviewer: K Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 06:04 am Title: 16

This is a great story, and I can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Mark Evans Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/19/2005 - 05:22 am Title: 16

I loved this chapter, just like all the rest of them. The way the pregnancy was revealed was great. It was a unique twist, something to keep the story great.

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