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Reviewer: parter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/24/2014 - 09:07 pm Title: Part 16

You had a very enjoyable fic up until the last part. Domination, a leather collar, a leash???!!  WTF?! It absolutely sank this fic. It was an unnecessary, rididculous, completely out of character move. You did all that good, creative writing and then flushed it all down the crapper by ending on that moronic image.  Mind-bogglingly stupid move.

Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2012 - 02:42 pm Title: Part 16

This is a great story. The dialogue is really good; the characters are quite good.

On the down side, it's littered with all sorts of errors: grammar, punctuation, vocab, spelling, and a few continuity errors; all of this combined to make it difficult to read a lot of the time. Lack of punctuation made a lot of the dialogue sound worse than it otherwise would have. Especially misused were the your/you're and there/they're/their issues. (Your = belongs to you, you're = you are; there = that place, their = belonging to them, they're = they are).

Reviewer: Gemini Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2009 - 01:25 am Title: Part 16

This has got to be one of my favs=) And I love the ending=D

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 07:02 am Title: Part 16

Oh I loved it, can't see how Spike can dine on a Vampire for weeks. Wish you did do more.

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Date: 05/29/2007 - 05:54 am Title: Part 10

oh no this is not good, Riley needs to go

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2007 - 05:35 am Title: Part 8

now they have a problem

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2007 - 07:54 pm Title: Part 6

So they both wanted it yay.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2007 - 07:43 pm Title: Part 5

yay they bonded, but Spike is leaveing her, and Buffy is sad.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2007 - 07:23 pm Title: Part 4

Can we not have a brighter Riley, why did they ever write him like that.

I hope it will go better with Spike.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2007 - 07:11 pm Title: Part 3

OH that was great

Reviewer: DayWalker Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2007 - 11:10 am Title: Part 16

This story was fantastic! I love how you made the Scoobies more accepting of the Spuffy relationship. I hope there's a sequel.

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2007 - 06:42 am Title: Part 2

Oh this id good

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2007 - 06:36 am Title: Favours

Oh this is great

Reviewer: Angela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2004 - 06:02 pm Title: Part 16

i absolutely loved this story....it was really good and i hope that you make a sequel where maybe if you want to buffy and spike will get married and have a little buffy or spike jr. running around the house......keep up the good work

Reviewer: Taryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2004 - 12:37 pm Title: Part 16

I loved this fanfic! I absolutly luved it! Great job i'd love to read a sequel. If you ever make one plz email it 2 me at spoiled_chick08@hotmail.com. Thanks and ur a really great writer!

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2003 - 05:52 pm Title: Part 16

I LOVED this. The only slight dissapointment I had would be that it wasn't Buffy who was dominated but thats my own personal preference in these things don't know why - just is. However I don't mean that I didn't like the domination idea or that I have a problem with it being Spike......an interlude of the domnation scene would be nice *hint hint* As for the story as a whole........WONDERFUL. I've now read 'Dreams' (as far as its got) and 'Favours' and am definitely spending tomorrow reading 'Curiosity'. You are a wonderful author and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Sarah x P.S Sorry for waffling so long ;-)

Reviewer: Sarah Aless Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2003 - 04:03 pm Title: Part 7

I'm planning to review when I've caught the whole thing up but I just had to review this chapter. That whole Buffy winding Spike up and going to the bathroom thing was both funny and extremely hot. And the actual bathroom sex.....Hello, that was so damn hot i think i may have had an accident!

Reviewer: Jaime Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2003 - 12:00 am Title: Favours

Oh my. My, My, My. Before the sight first went down, I read this story--Loved it!!! I just got done reading it again, couldn't help myself. Good story. But I glad that your back! It's nice to see some of the familar authors back around here. Keep writing!! -Jaime-

Reviewer: Katy Ann Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/17/2003 - 12:00 am Title: Favours

While I am writing this I want ya to know I'm still laughing! I love the ending it was awesome. I really hope that there is a sequel. E-mail me with more of your stuff, you're a great writer. I AM STILL LAUGHING!!!

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