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Reviewer: ComedyofErrors Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/03/2006 - 09:35 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Yes. Exceedingly evil, cruel, unkind, and demented.

Brilliant chapter, with the successive revelations. Tara's was the most heartbreaking. I do hope Oz can give her some comfort. I love the dogs. I enjoyed Lawson's conversation with Spike.

Jenner and Faith. Not a bad idea. Kinda like that.

Reviewer: Gail S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 11:41 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Oooh! Great chapter. Yes, you are! Vivid descriptions of the various reactions to the breaking of the spell.

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 01:52 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

THIS CHAPTER WAS AWESOME!! Buffy realizing that the mess with Dawn never would have happened...can't wait till she finds out who caused it!!! Can't the hounds AND everyone else have a turn in tearing Willow apart? Oh, and poor Cordie. That is gonna be heartbreaking. More soon please!

Reviewer: kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 08:31 am Title: Unending lightning

Nothing to be nervous about girl-dear; your writting is just beautiful. The emotion and caring that you are able to convey through your words is heartfelt and appreciated. I love reading a good love story, especially when it has the ability to draw the reader in. So, worry ta pas ta tete,ma chere, ::)) you have absolutely nothing to be nervous about!! Do you have your own website?....Silly me;) I suppose I could just check the author section eh?.....again, lovely story, keep writing.................

Reviewer: Lyns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/02/2006 - 06:46 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

evil you ask? Why yes, yes you are!! Freaking great chapter with a hella evil cliffie. Hope the next chapter churns itself out soon!

Reviewer: Amy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 07:44 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Awesome chapter! Worth the wait.

Reviewer: Buffyratt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Yes, quite evil. I really enjoy the quotes you use. This chapter was worth the wait, thanks

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 04:46 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Yay for Faith! The witch is dead eh.. the demon :) And seems as Jenner has a crush now *gg* and Faith too. Oh, it was hard for most of them when the memories came back. And it seems Anya was the first one to notice who did it. ~ Poor Tara.. what will she think when she 'wakes' up? ~ Oh Jenner thinks Faith is Buffy *gg* ~ Lawson.. looking forward what will happen with him too. Seem he could be a friend. And Jenner? Mmmm Faith could convince him. ~ Tara yeah. Very bad what Willow did, especially to her. But the hounds seems to be after her now. And the answer to your question? Yes if you take too long to update again *gg* Thanks for this chapter. A good one :)

Reviewer: MG Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 03:43 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Yup, truly evil for leaving it that way!!

Great chapter. Spell breaking, Cordelia waking, Faith & a vamp (what is it about these Aurelius vampires!) & the Hounds finally cornering their prey - I'm blown away!

Reviewer: Ptolemy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 02:08 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Yes! Yes! Yes!
Arghhhhhhhhhhh!

[waiting patiently for chapter 50!]

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 09:59 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

You have totally made my day when I saw this new chapter. Well they all have their memories back and they know who did it. but what will they all do now and what is the Hounds waiting for.? They are all at strategic places.... I am glad that Spike didn't let Buffy go, not only did she get her current memories back but she was going to be flodded with her "heaven" memories as well. That man just really loves that woman. but really what is Lawson up to and go figure Faith to get the hots for Jenner.
WHOOHOOO FIREWORKS!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 09:52 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

great chapter

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 06:44 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Oh yes, very evil.

I like Anya's reaction especially. She's the consumate professional.

Reviewer: Marta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 04:19 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Hi! You have no idea how bad you are. I read your story fo like two days, ignoring everything around me and suddenly its stopped! I'a crushed. But enough about me. Your story is great and I think i didn't read that good story in a long time. I love the plot and everythink. I hope you update soon [like really soon]. Ok, so thats it. I only wanted you to konw that I'm waiting for the next part and love !!! your work.

Reviewer: dihcar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 03:59 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Yes, finally that stupid spell is broken, hope that willow gets what she deserves. As for lawson, well i like him, as long as he remembers whos boss(spike and buffy). Not so glad about the jenner/faith ship since i wanted a confrantation between spike and jenner. A full out battle, oh well.

Reviewer: cindy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 03:47 am Title: Cutting the heart asunder

It just keeps getting better. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: romero Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 03:46 am Title: A day in the life

This is one of the best stories I've read. I hope that your pain gets better and you can continue writing. I just love the the first story and now this one

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

finally willow will get what's coming to her...Good that will teach her to play with miagic and peoples lives agine so hope those hounds go after her cause know one should get by with what willow did to the people s she is suppose to care about..And i think am gone like lawson a lot me thinks spike will need a good friend from his past....Great chapter nia and i love the cliffhanger at the end can't wait for the next chapter should be really good

Reviewer: Talen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:27 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Ohhhh, you are way beyond the realm of evil!! Leaving us, poor readers with such a cliffhanger. How can I study now? I'll be thinkin about the outcome of this chapter until the next update!! Please update soon. BTW wonderful chapter as always

Reviewer: slinkyPK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Am I evil for leaving it like that?

Um, yes? C'mon, Nia, honey, precious, pumpkin, darlin', sweetie, sugar! How can you do this to me? Just leave me hanging there at the edge of - hopefully- Willow's downfall!?

So cool was the stuff with Lawson and Spike! And need I even mention the wonderful tease of Jenner and Faith?

Evil? You? You betcha! All caps and underlined twice.

Reviewer: RP Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Willow has been a bad bad girl!!

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 08:38 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

OMG!!! Noooo!! Must have more!!!! Gah, I knew this was gonna be great, but damn, you've just smacked me in the head with how freaking awesome the reveal became! And Faith/Jenner? DAMN!!! Oh, I beg you, please...update soon?

Reviewer: Nina Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 08:30 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

I had a shit day. Really. However...I would have twelve shit days in a row for another chapter like this!!!

*glee* The spell is broken! Gawd, I was holding my breath. Clever girl leaving Tara's realizaton last since you knew it would be the most profound.

I am so intrigued by Lawson. I love his souful-like admissions. An enigma I am delighted to get to know. Jenner as well, though he is still slightly more obscure and I can't wait to see how these two vamps are *fleshed* out.

Anya. She will always be one of my favorites. Always relegated to the background by the scoobies despite the wealth of knowledge she hold. I love how you give her such righteous indignation.

Oh Oz. You have done so much for his character. No longer is he a passing character, but a real player and I silently squeed when his realization washed over him. Oz and Tara. Friends or more, it doesn't matter to me. You have given them so much depth...and now a history in this fic. They are becoming as important to me as Buffy and Spike. Wow.

The dogs are there and I have goodbumps in anticipation.

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What moved me:

"She was pack. Tara was part of him, whether he understood the reasons why or not, it hardly mattered anymore. The feeling had been growing, slowly, inexorably, but growing all the same. It had taken this spell, the theft of his memories and hers, to clarify the emotions.

Okay dude, so now you know you aren’t losing your mind. . . . what the hell are you gonna do about it? He thought for a moment, his mind blank, then realized he was going to do what he always did after practice.

Go home. To Tara." *sniffles*

And...

"He had the grace to look abashed. “I don’t know.” He swung his gaze between the two. “I didn’t know he had a soul. . . . that was. . . . Look, I understand if you don’t want to help me. I’m nothing to you. But I’ve been watching you and I saw. . . . “ he paused, looking steadily at Buffy, “I’m sorry about your sister.”

Buffy stiffened behind Spike and he could feel her temper rising. Spike moved back, casting a sideways glance at his mate. Lawson looked genuinely saddened and it was Spike who acknowledged it. “Thanks.”" *wants to hug Lawson*

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Phew! Now Cordy is waking, the hounds have arrived, and Lawson still doesn't know the truth about Dawn. Is it evil to leave it where you did? Nah...it just gurantees that I'll be watching the RSS Feed for another update. *wink*

Thank you. Take Care. Be Well. Coax the muse.

Cheers!
Nina

Reviewer: Elaine Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 08:26 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

Truely, truely evil. And brilliant, and a fantastic writer. Bur mainly evil. ;)

Reviewer: H Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/31/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: Cutting the heart asunder

YES, yes, yes.. EVIL!!!!! Brilliant, but evil. Glad to see they finally remember:)

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