Date: 03/23/2005 - 06:03 pm Title: Farewell, fair day and fading light
Well now that hottness can sure melt the new fallen snow in my yard today. That said. Dawn looked so beautiful. Spike trying to be all host with most. Good for him wanting to meet the parents. As it should of been. Him helping her down the steps and telling her she was beautiful and all grown up. *tears* brings back some good memories. I can sympathize with Buffy's ickies. But hey now if the curse could be that fun then I would not complain about alittle cramping. Nia you wrote that scene like chocolate satin pie..smooth, rich, and tastey. Very nicely done. Who needs steam when you have the hottness that was going on in that bathroom. Great desciption of the events. I could just imagine Spike's eyes with mischeif in them. *grins*. Now for Darla, I am not and was never an Angel fan. Though the way you described how Darla was feeling, oh gods how heart wrenching. Since I did not watch the show I have not idea how this plays out, so I am eager to know if she is able to remember. Will she be able to love this child. Will Angel help her, will he be a man for once and help her through this? The baby needs him but so does Darla. I hope she finds some solace. Then there is the Dawn, having a great moment at the dance. Oh sweet that she looks over at the boy and just thinks he is the cutest thing on two legs. How she is so thankful for Spike not being "hard father figure". Those "gods of the first date" must of just heard her plea. *grins*. Excellent Chapter Nia, nice play of emotions. Keeping us wanting more and more and more. But what is the rest of gang up to? The shit hitting the fan soon? *rubs hands together* can't wait to find out.
Date: 03/22/2005 - 07:44 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
OH MY GODS! I knew we were building up to this, but to see it in black and white is just amazing. I didn't realize, though, that so much would have been prearranged by the monks to enable this to occur. I mean...so many events would have to have been strategically in place. Good gods. Please don't tell me Spike was arranged to fall in love with the slayer. Oh man. I just hope that, when Dawn does disclose this info to Buffy and Spike, that Spike won't doubt his "sudden" development of feelings for Buffy the previous year. We all know how much Spike enjoyed being the Initiative's guinea pig. Not. I can only imagine how he might react to finding out he and Buffy have been playing the part of two puzzle pieces for some monks for the better part of 2 years. Ugh. I wouldn't want to be in Dawn's shoes for the upcoming convo. So glad that Dawn now knows for sure where and who she came from though. That has got to be such a burden lifted from her shoulders. To know that she belongs somewhere must make everything else seem bearable. *hugs Dawnie* Willow's ominous musings have me worried a bit, especially with Giles out of town. Well, I'll wait to see how that develops. Loving, loving, loving this story so much Nia. I can't wait to see how and when Dawn decides to tell Spike and Buffy, her parents, that it's a bouncing, bubbly, hormonal girl! Heee! That conversation is going to be sooo good! Thanks for another incredible update sweetie! *hugs you*
Date: 03/19/2005 - 08:19 am Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
Ok so I read these so fast that I foget things. I see Wesley as pulling out a book to help Darla(nice choice on the book very helpful). Spike interigating Casey was straight out of my high school days. My father would do that to me for the boys who would come to call. Willow is making my skin crawl. I have a hard time reading her. Her non moral character is horrifying. You are really capaturing her character well and bringing that out on the page. Excellent. Giles's instincts are kicking in as usual on things. I just hope Willow gets whatever she does thrown back at her. That she gets a clue about the fact that Buffy and Spike love each other and that is not going to change. Ok I think I remembered things this time.
Date: 03/19/2005 - 08:01 am Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
lol - you're lying - the story was good before that chapter *smile* - it only got better :-D ... I hope, no´, I think this are happy tears Dawn is crying now. Very good chapter.
Date: 03/19/2005 - 07:31 am Title: Clutching stardust
Glad to see that Oz is fitting in - and not taking Willow's side. Wonder what Willow is trying now ... with all the parcels she gets and stalking Buffy and Spike
Date: 03/19/2005 - 07:03 am Title: A day in the life
I'm late, but I'm glad to see you continued. Going to read the rest that's online. I misse it :-D
Date: 03/18/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
Well, I certainly hope Dawn's crying for a good reason. :) I love how Spike is so protective of her and how very "normal" Buffy seems in all of this. I can't wait to see how it all comes together. Awesome job! :)
Date: 03/18/2005 - 09:36 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
didn't take long before willow turned to her evil tricks to hurt buffy and spike by trying to make spike look bad in buffy eyes.hope buffy dosen't fall into her trap and beileve's spike would ever do that to her.knowing how much he loves her and would never do anything to hurt buffy are dawn.loved that dawn parents are buffy and spike me thinks dawn love's it to are she wouldn't be crying tears of joy.hope she tells buffy and spike the good news soon.loved Casey can't wait to find out more about him.great chapter nia
Date: 03/18/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
"she was going to end up shrieking the shop down, piercing eardrums for a five hundred yard radius. " Ha! Well, that's definitely Dawn. Nice chapter.
Date: 03/18/2005 - 07:07 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
Great chapter. Spike and Buffy were not as hard on Casey as I thought. I am glad Spike had that conversation with Casey, to let him know what he expects from him. Good for Casey for not backing down, he seems to care about Dawn. He faced her parents and that's a lot for a young teen. So she is theirs!!! wow, when will they find out, how will she tell them? I am waiting for the next chapter. good job on this one.
Date: 03/18/2005 - 06:12 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
OMG! I can't believe it, finally she found out! Now what? Will she tell them? Hide it? Argh! Please don't leave me hanging for too long! Yay!
Date: 03/18/2005 - 04:25 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
Dawn knows the truth now. Is she planning on telling anyone? I'm interested to see how Spike and Buffy react. Loved the bit with Casey, especially how he reacted to the name "Spike." lol The whole interaction between Casey and Spike reminded me of my own high school dating days. I liked how Casey didn't flinch, but was just respectful. And bad Willow. Bad.
Date: 03/18/2005 - 03:34 pm Title: Indiscreet questions and answers
OMG *laughs so hard*. Nia that was pure greatestness. I can picture Weasley looking around for a book trying to figure out what to do for Poor Darla. Then Spike and Buffy putting the crunch to poor dawn and casey. brilliant bloody brilliant. I am sure all of us ladies can relate to that in some way. *laughs again*. Good for Casey though not showing signs of being affraid of Spike and giving a good answer. Nice scene. That Willow, grrrrrrrr I knew she was not going to leave quietly. Whatever she has planned I hope it blows up in her face three fold. Glad that Dawn and Buffy had a good experience this time shopping. I can't wait to see Dawn in her dress. Nia that was a killer cliffhanger, but YES YES YES Dawn is made from Spike and Buffy. Gods that is so f'n awesome. now how does she tell them?? how do the react?? Ohhhhhh dear me oh my...I will wait and see...Thanks for posting. I know every one will be glued to the TV this weekend watching James in his movie Cool Money.Whoooooooo a great way to start the weekend. A fantastic chapter by Nia and James is on TV...doesn't get much better. Ok it does but you all know what i mean *laughs*
Date: 03/17/2005 - 06:37 am Title: Clutching stardust
I've been in a frenzy vampkiss hasn't updated her origins link to book two so had to skive off work to get to an internet cafe. well worth the subterfuge. Love this fic.
Date: 03/16/2005 - 06:03 pm Title: Clutching stardust
LOOKS like willow is about to turn evil on buffy and spike.but why do i get this bad feeling that she out to get spike the most in her evil plane.hope spike see her coming. am also geting the feeling that oz is taking a like to tara which i like a lot.looks like dawn is closer to the truth about her parents so hoping that her parents our buffy and spike. please NIA
Date: 03/16/2005 - 10:09 am Title: Clutching stardust
what a way to wake up in the morning. *G* the convo between dawn and spike was just hysterical and sooo cute. can't wait to see the look on the boys face. hehhe what the hell is willow up to? xander is the stupidist boy on the planet. he should go straight to tara. i mean DUH, if hes that concerned, which i believe he is. willow following buffy and spike is just.......disturbing. glad dawn got the books she was looking for. can't wait to see what it has ot say. great chapter Nia.
Date: 03/16/2005 - 07:29 am Title: Clutching stardust
Well now that was a way to start out the morning a "cup of Spike" to make the blood start pumping. *grins*. I am so happy that Oz has returned. I really enjoy his character. He seems to just be ever watchful,but yet puts in his two cents when he needs to. I am glad he decided you needed to bring him back. Oh poor poor Dawn, Gods I just can't imagine having to bring home a date to Spike. I mean oh that will be tourture for the poor boy. I mean scaring the living shit out of the boy by his mear presence, could send him running. I would not want to be that boy. Poor Dawn. But alas she is getting closer to her answers and I hope she discovers them soon. She deserves to get them. Oh yeah Oz noticing Tara how sweet of him. GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR that damn Willow following them to the airport. She is up to no good *sighs*. Great now she will mess with voodoo again something she doesn't understand. UGHHHHHH i hope i blows back up in her face at her. NOt a good thing to try the gods's wills to much. Hmmmmmmmmm. Fantastic Chapter Nia, as always.
Date: 03/16/2005 - 07:23 am Title: Clutching stardust
Fabulous as alwys,love how your bringing dawns discoveries out nice and slow. Great to see Oz in this story too.
Date: 03/16/2005 - 12:01 am Title: Clutching stardust
Wow! This story is progressing nicely and the urge to find out some of the answers is making me antsy. I love all the Spuffy, Oz' arrival, and Dawn's subsequent unveiling of her own origins. Willow is def. creeping me out, and I think Xander's almost at the point of no return with his "jobs" for her....wonder how it'll all turn out! Can't wait for what's next!
Date: 03/15/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: Clutching stardust
Wow! I just love this interaction and the reintroduction of Oz. I liked him - he was odd but mellow. That he likes Tara is really cool. Now that Dawn has found what she has been looking for it begs the question - will she like what she sees?
Date: 03/15/2005 - 09:35 pm Title: Clutching stardust
Great stuff with Oz, Nia! I just love your insight into his character. Just reading about him relaxes me, just as his character always did. Plus Oz's insights always were dependable, and you've continuted that with his insight into Tara. It's so good to have him back! *hugs Oz* *gropes morning Spike* I think 'morning Spike' is my favorite. Can I get one to go please? Yee-ha. Buffy is the luckiest filly in these here parts. The best part of waking up, is not Foldgers in your cup, it's Spikey in your bed. *sigh* Really sexy, intimate, delicious morning sex scene hon. I mean, really, really, really goooood. Spike rumbling Buffy's name into her ear was my favorite part. I'd like a "Spike's magic fingers" wake-up call at 7am tomorrow morning please. *double sigh* Xander and Anya are still planning on getting married? Hasn't that relationship crashed and burned yet? No? Huh. *scratches head* She'd get much better orgasms from Giles. You know Giles is bound to have a whole repitoire from his Ripper days. Knowledge like that shouldn't go to waste. I love how you keep teasing us with little bits and pieces concerning Dawn's heritage and the journals. And her squabble with Spike was sooo cute! Spike taking a firm hand as a parent is definitely something to see. I can't wait to see if Dawn can find anything more from those journals. Wonderful chapter Nia!
Date: 03/15/2005 - 08:56 pm Title: Clutching stardust
Wonder how the meeting with Casey will go. I loved both Buffy and Spike's reactions to the prospect of Dawn dating. Very parent-y. Liked the bits with Oz and his observations. And Xander, well, I have the perfect solution to how he can stop being confused by life in Sunnydale--move.
Date: 03/15/2005 - 08:23 pm Title: Clutching stardust
It's good to get Oz's point-of-view on the Scooby gang. It allows us to see Spike & Buffy's relationship from an outside view. I want to know what Dawn found in those journal. Poor Dawnie but I feel more sorry for Casey who will have to face Spike and Buffy, yikes! Love the story so far and I am so glad I found the story!!!
Date: 03/14/2005 - 02:09 pm Title: A day in the life
Wonderful chapter again Nia! Nice re-introduction of Oz into the group dynamics. I hope he becomes a regular figure in the scoobie group. Or the new scoobie group. The passage about Darla was particularly moving. You really make me feel for her in a way that Joss & Co. were never able to. I love the vulnerability you have exposed in her character. Really intriguing. I'm glad Dawn is making some headway into her search for answers. And I'm also glad that she's being cautious about telling anyone yet. I can't wait to see more of Oz and the group, and how he reacts to news of Willow.
Date: 03/14/2005 - 08:10 am Title: A day in the life
It's really interesting to see all the different dynamics that have formed within the group. I was surprised that Oz make an appearance. Wondering what's up with that. Hope to see the distance between Buffy/Dawn get repaired. Would love to see some Buffy/Dawn bonding. Loved the Spuffy cuteness at the Magic Box.