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Reviewer: cee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/13/2005 - 12:14 am Title: A day in the life

I love you and want to have your babies! This rocks. You don't EVEN know how much I await your updates!

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 11:19 pm Title: A day in the life

so it looks like spike and buffy are dawn real parents.And dawn hoping that buffy is her mom which am thinking that she is.Iove it that means that dawn has the cool parents ever.GREAT CHAPTER NIA

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 11:17 pm Title: A day in the life

I am seriously loving this story . It's well written and it fills in a major plot hole. Since children receive DNA from both thier father and thier mother and different children receive different DNA then if Dawn were created SOLELY from Buffy she wouldn't be so physically different from her.Instead she ould be a copy of her albiet a younger one. If they had said that Dawn was created from Hank and Joyce Summers than that would explain it but they said she was created from Buffy. They didn't say she was only created from Buffy.

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 10:35 pm Title: A day in the life

Whee...book two. *bounces excitedly* Does Spike know how dad-like he sounds? lol Great pasage with Darla. Short, but gut-wrenching. Liked the stuff with Oz, and I'm wondering how he's going to fit into the equation. Can't wait to see what's next for this one. :)

Reviewer: slinkypsychokit Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 09:49 pm Title: A day in the life

Oh, Nia! Thank You! I was goin' nuts with the waitin'. LOVE THIS!!!

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 09:48 pm Title: A day in the life

ahhhh more Niahm goodness! great start, but would it be selfish of me to say i wish it could go on forever? LOL

Reviewer: Rachel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: A day in the life

Hooray for the next part of this absolutely amazing story. And great opening - WOW! Bringing Oz back, what an awesome idea, and it's great to see things at least somewhat settling down in the house. I really hope that Buffy would be Dawn's mom, not Joyce...b/c Joyce and Spike? So not good :P Anyway, I'm so glad to see the continuation up so soon and looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: A day in the life

This may be the start of the Middle. But so fare it is great . Please continue to update soon and often. Thanks for a great story.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 09:16 pm Title: A day in the life

great segway into the new book. Nice flow of getting the things together giving us a bit of an idea of where the major and minor characters that are forefront at the moment stand. Buffy thinking of going back to school, nice thought hope she can handle it. Poor Dawn searching for so much and hitting a bit of dead end. I hope she finds what she needs to find her Origins. Who could be watching Dawn though, hmmm interesting. OZ, GREAT to have him back. Nice surprise there. Will he decide to be someone more often or just pop in here and there???? You describe him well and his expressions and emotions. Just like a wolf, taking it and not letting on what he finding, thinking or smelling and seeing. Darla, Darla not so much someone i cared for,but her character going through this pregnancy, gods I remember those days all too well. Though her maternal feelings are nice to know they are there. Ahhhhhh Buffy teasing Spike *laughs* please they both can sense each other so immediately. I love how he watcher her and the way he engulfs every bit of her. What the energy must feel like in a room with those two in...WOW would give me chills just thinking about it. Very nice chapter my dear. Still so suprised by Oz coming back...YEAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Slaymesoftly Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 07:56 pm Title: A day in the life

Ah, Nia. A great start to the next section. And bringing Oz back? Brilliant!

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 07:13 pm Title: A day in the life

so, Dawn feels as tho someone is watching her. could it be that Ms. West? i wonder........to bad those books didn't give her any more info. looks like shes gonna have to find some more recent ones that include buffy. i am so glad you brought Oz back. i liked him alot. that should be interesting. Darla, gods you make me feel bad for what shes going thru. i guess i do in a way. buffy thinking about going back to school. thats good but could be way overwhelming for her. i'll be curious to see how that goes. oooooo Dawns got a date to the homecoming...and the boy she wanted asked her.......oooooo....soo cool for her. now comes the hard part.....he has to meet and be approved by spike...*giggles insainly* now that is gonna be funny......damn money problems......i hope Giles can squeeze something out of the tightwads

Reviewer: Shelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 07:12 pm Title: A day in the life

What a great way to start this section, Oz. This ought to be interesting. Especially since the dynamics of the "Scoobies" has drastically changed. Really interested to see what we find out about Dawn's research on who her real parents are. I love the idea of it being Buffy and Spike. It makes so much more sense than it did in the series. Can't wait for more! I love this story.

Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/12/2005 - 07:05 pm Title: A day in the life

Great start to book 2 Niamh. Can't wait to see the direction you take Oz's re-entrance to good ole Sunny-hell. Also, still very intrigued with Dawn's search.

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