Date: 04/12/2005 - 01:20 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
The details in this chapter made it resonate. I ache for Dawn and her perceived role in everybody's injuries. Buffy is very sympathetic, even on auto pilot. I love the way you're writing her loving relationship with Dawn. What is Spike going to think, waking up to a baby that smells of Darla and Angel? I can't wait to find out!
Date: 04/12/2005 - 01:02 am Title: Don't cry little sister
One thing I really like about this story is -- aside from the obvious villains -- everyone is so sympathetic. It's something the show sometimes lost sight of. Awaiting eagerly, as always.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 11:45 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Another great chapter. I just wonder what Spike is going to do when he wakes up next to a baby that smells like Angel. Hmmm... that should be fun.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 10:54 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
j'adore cette histoire je peux pas m'empecher d'etre exciter par la suite
Date: 04/11/2005 - 10:45 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Poor Dawnie. She's so torn. She has always loved Spike, but now that she knows he is her father ... it's killing her even more to see her like this. I wonder what Kristen's part in all of this is. Also, Dawn sounded awfully I shouldn't be here type thing. I was really worried about that. She picked up some in the end though, thank goodness. I do love this story, and I eagerly await for the next update.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Looks like our wesley has the hot's for dawn me think's spike won't be to happy with that nor will her boyfriend casey.love buffy offering spike her blood to show him how much she love's and trust him and loved how much dawn wanted to be close to her parents can't wait till she tell's them the truth.Barvo NIA BARVO
Date: 04/11/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
I can just picture Spike laying on the bed w/a newborn baby tucked up against him! What a picture! I can't wait to see what happens when Spike finds out about Connor and who his parents are and that Angelus is back! Will we be seeing any more of Willow in the next chapter? Please update soon!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Wonderful healing chapter sweetie. I just love all the small, quiet moments you have built this chapter around. I feel so sorry for Dawn and the weight of guilt that she carries. I can't say I'd feel any less guilty if in her situation. I love how you have captured her vulnerability, youthfuness, and yet infused it with a quiet strength born of love. Just lovely, Nia. Her crush on Wes is adorable, and quite understandable. He is some yummy British eye candy, isn't he? *sigh* If only he weren't so much older than Dawn. Loved the moment between Spike and Buffy, when she fed him the medicated blood and then her own blood. Very hot - his growl, his whispered "Please", his knuckle rubbing against her mound. *fans self* Very sexy, very sensual. Just the promise of what is to come when he is better, makes that scene all the more hot. I can't wait to see what Giles learns and if Angelus comes to Sunnydale. Amazing chapter again Nia! Oh, and love the chapter title! Yeah, Keifer Sutherland was sexy evil in that movie. It's what really kicked off my love of vampires.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 09:50 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
I love this story. It's got such a nice mix of elements-romance, passion, tenderness, adventure, horror, mayhem, good chracterization, lovely plot with just enough smut. Lovely lovely story. Update soon. Until next time.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 09:32 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Oh wow. It's the calm before the storm! If I read one of the last chapters correctly, Tara's got some serious mojo in store for buffering the defenses...hopefully take Willow down a peg or two and have Wes incorporate some nasty bugs =P But I love your work, keep it up! I can't wait for the storm to hit!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
ooh, is it possible that we're seeing the beginnings of a Dawn/ Wesley pairing? (please say yes) and just who is that Kirsten chick? Lotsa questions to keep me eagerly awaiting the next chapter...
Date: 04/11/2005 - 09:30 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Yep, Sally, we like you... Another great chapter. Loved the Buffy and Spike interaction as well as the bits with Dawn. Very well done emotions, as always. And I think Wes has been around Angel too long, thinking that way about a high school student. LOL
Date: 04/11/2005 - 09:24 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Poor Spike...he was really pretty beaten up. I like Wes' thoughts - about how Dawn was turning into a woman of his type...and Wes' afterthought. I like how everyone has gelled like a family - makes me wonder when the shoes' going to drop. :) Awesome as always!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 09:22 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
Loving it so far!! I'm so anxious to see what Angelous does (or more so... who he tries to kill)!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 08:54 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
I send you lots o' sugar for that fabulous update. Glad to see that Spike is starting to do better. And I am sooo super curious about Kristen. Plus, I'm hoping that Dawn feels better soon!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 08:42 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
I really, really liked. Dawn is breaking my heart...her pain and guilt palpable. I'm glad that Buffy offered her comfort when Dawn came into the bedroom because that is something she would have done post-resurrection; Maybe she is finally starting to come around and finding her true self again. I hope we get a scene with Buffy and Connoer...can't wait to see how that would play out.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 08:37 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
ooo is that a hint of things to come between Dawn and Wes? Can't wait to find out!!
Date: 04/11/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
I love this story! More soon please.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
this story is so amazing. i cant wait for more. i love it. the whole this with angelus in their bedroom with bloody hands did freak me out. kinda scared about whats gonna happen cause of that, but in a good way. =) keep up the excellent work.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 08:02 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
I like your style. You seem to have everything mapped ou, even if you don't, and I can't help but feel that I won't ever be dissappointed with your work. Nice chapter.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 07:54 pm Title: Don't cry little sister
sugar..I will give you the whole 5lb bag if needed *grins*. What a heartfelt chapter. Poor Dawn thinking this is all her fault. She can't help who she is. How powerful the moment when she walked into the room and curled up with her "parents". So sweet with her blushing with Wes. Can't say I blame her there. Spike our healing favorite vamp. heal Spike heal. Buffy not even thinking twice on giving him blood. Tara gets the best supporting actress in my opinionn. The woman is damn amazing. Doesn't stop in stressful situation just keeps thing moving. HURRAY Tara!!!!!..I can't say enough goodness about this chapter. Giving us the heartfelt side of things. Letting us know how they are fairing in this mayheim. Heal Spike Heal!!!!!...My heart goes out to all of them. I hope the sun stays on thier side to get the items needed to keep that sorry ass vamp out and away. I agree with Dawn Stake his ass. Connor will be safe with at Revello drive. That babe needs a chance to thrive in goodness. Ahhhhh what horrors await them all around the corner though. Quiet for a moment but hell awaits. Gods Nia you are such an incredible writer. Giving these characters emotions and bringing us into each moment with them. I do so wish it would of been this way on TV *sighs*...Keep the goodness coming and hell we will pitch in a buy you the whole damn sugar factory *laughs*
Date: 04/11/2005 - 12:18 pm Title: Tomorrow's questions
I'm glad you had Angel lose his soul with Connor's birth. I always thought it was dumb that shagging Buffy was more "perfect" in the happiness department than the birth of his child. Great story, can't wait for more.
Date: 04/11/2005 - 12:11 pm Title: Tomorrow's questions
Love the story. Your take on Willow's problems is very believable and more logical than even what happened on the show. Your characterization of Spike sticks with what we saw in early season 6, before things went wonky and bad between Spike and Buffy. Great work! I'm looking forward to more.
Date: 04/10/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: Tomorrow's questions
oh my goodness this story/siries is amazing. completly and utterly amazing. I love it all so much and I love just everything about it. from how truely unbelivabily rude willow and xander are to how great giles and wesely are. I love dawn being buffy and spikes and I love how this progresses. I am amazed by how much I can get into a story that is 'fanfiction' and when I actually like it better then what happened in the actuall show I know that you must be a fanominal writer because I am extreemly picky. Great job. Oh yes I love Oz. :) I can barly wait to read more and will deffentially keep looking for updates on this story.
Date: 04/09/2005 - 10:07 pm Title: Tomorrow's questions
that chapter was awesome. i really cant wait for more. pretty please update soon.
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