Date: 04/17/2005 - 07:46 pm Title: The real stuff of life
I really enjoyed that chapter. Eeek with the Willow sighting, and it completely slipped my mind that she might be on the top of Angel's hit list. Those spuffy moments were so tender, I like seeing them all domestic with the baby and everything. And I love how determined Buffy is in getting the chip removed. I wonder what Spike's answer will be (it's mean to have cliffhangers lol). =)
Date: 04/17/2005 - 07:41 pm Title: The real stuff of life
Awesome chap! I can't wait until everyone finds out that Buffy and Spike are Dawn's parents. More soon please.
Date: 04/17/2005 - 07:40 pm Title: The real stuff of life
Ok i have an insane sinus headache at the moment,but nothing can tear me away from your postings. Mmmmmm yummy goodness biting with spike and buffy. still having those tender moments of emotions that is so raw for Buffy. She got so hurt so much. Though now she has Spike and it will be as right as rain. Spike healing nicely from the slayer blood. YEAH!!!!!. Angelous that pompous ass. Oh who to kill first, Oh how bout he stake himself and put us all out of his misery. Dawn and Wes have a flirty convo and Wes getting all nervous. Hmmm where will they take this?? Tara and Oz sharing nice moment. Then OH gods what happened to Willow, did her lil spell back fire on her? Disfigure her somehow??? But son of a bitch she sees them in the grocery store shit shit shit...ahhhhhh run run away from her as fast as you can there is work to be done...to hell with willow. The action is building i feel it. Oh there is much much craziness to come. Nice building here Nia...I am wondering what or who will try to get the action going in sunnyhell????
Date: 04/17/2005 - 07:17 pm Title: The real stuff of life
Uh oh ... WIllow sees Tara. Hasn't seen Oz yet, but uh oh. Ncie flirting with Wes and Dawn. Good scenes with Spike and Buffy and the baby. Angelus making sure to go after Willow first. That is going to be interesting. I wonder how this is all going to go down. Hope you were able to get ovber your writer's block and you feel better. Glad to see a new chapter. Look forward to more.
Date: 04/16/2005 - 08:12 am Title: A light shines in you
buffy's feeling hit right on the mark.....you said all those tihngs that were never adressed in the show......thank you b/c they so needed ot be said. Oz and the van came in real handy. glad hes back. :) dawn feeling like it is all her fault is so right on to....yea i know...duh. the way you portrayed her was brilliant....she acted like the young adult she is becoming and wesley talking ot her logically aobut it all was a good way to get her to see things a bit differently. the scene with the baby and them on the bed.....aaahhh...so nice. :) "my heart Spike......its....in your hands" good gods woman. that is so much more real than the i love you that everyone wants to hear her say. that is more buffy and it took my breath away.........
Date: 04/16/2005 - 05:47 am Title: A light shines in you
Hi Nia, I've been away for the past couple of weeks but I just wanted to let you know how much I absolutely love your story. I love how you use so many of the characters and blend in both series so well! And the word sprog just makes me laugh. I'll be more faithful with the reviews from now on. =)
Date: 04/16/2005 - 04:07 am Title: A light shines in you
I'm just all out of superlatives I mean what can you say but amazing love it. I have an idea who Kirsten is. I'm surprised Willow hasn't been round to check on her handywork.
Date: 04/15/2005 - 11:17 pm Title: A light shines in you
awesome as always.
Date: 04/15/2005 - 03:38 pm Title: A light shines in you
Nice Spuffy moment there. And my heart just breaks for Buffy - can't say "I love you," but can't not at the same time. I'm loving Oz here, and his interactions with Tara. Wes is hot. And I don't think I've ever seen a fic with Wes/Dawn undertones like this one - it's working a lot better than I'd think. Keep up the great work!
Date: 04/15/2005 - 12:23 pm Title: A light shines in you
Awe, yes - better the story than the name list. I love Clannad! I have all the older CDs. I haven't checked out if they have new ones. In a Lifetime is one of my favorite.... (found them because they did the music for Robin of Sherwood - otherwise I could have missed that group!) .. It's good that Buffy had blurt it out that she wanted the baby to be hers... Spike was retreating again, feeling that Buffy wanted the baby because of Angel... He is so insecure when it comes to Buffy.... But maybe he got it now, when Buffy told him he was in her heart. Looking forward to the next part!
Date: 04/15/2005 - 11:34 am Title: A light shines in you
Very good. Liked it all; but especially fond of Dawn & Tara understanding and appreciating Anya and not condescending to her. Love Anya, almost as much as Spike.
Date: 04/15/2005 - 10:09 am Title: A light shines in you
This story continues to enthrall me! I'm anxiously waiting for updates.
Date: 04/15/2005 - 07:58 am Title: A light shines in you
Oh I think you did a WONDERFUL job with this AWESOME chapter.......Spike/Buffy with Buffy finally getting the words out.......beautifully done.....and Wes and Dawn's interaction..... was just so well written.....and for me so like Wes.......
Date: 04/15/2005 - 04:22 am Title: A light shines in you
Absolutely LOVED it. It was wonderful, perfect. Now I want Spike's reaction to what Buffy just told him.
Date: 04/15/2005 - 04:01 am Title: A light shines in you
Wonderful chapter, as always. Just love the Spuffy relationship in this story.
Date: 04/15/2005 - 02:28 am Title: A light shines in you
Frustrated sob! You giveth and you taketh away - meanie! What a beautiful declaration from Buffy, absolutely wonderful - or it would have been if someone had allowed us poor readers to be given Spike's response! No fair! Yeah, I know, who said life was fair. Bloody great chapter and, fancy that, am gagging for more ASAP! Thanks muchly (but you're still mean!).
Date: 04/15/2005 - 02:26 am Title: A light shines in you
WOW!! Great chapter!! Was there a little foreshadowing, or was I dreaming? Anyway, I love the slight hesitance to Buffy's confession, cause that's just core Buffy there: afraid to lose another man she loves....and Spike...perfect. The familial feel with the addition of Wes and Oz to the present Scoobs is wonderful...those two just add their own bit of personality to the group. Overall....FANTASTIC!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 04/15/2005 - 12:35 am Title: A light shines in you
I think this story just keeps getting better and better - and that's saying something. Buffy's words to Spike have a smile plastered on my face. I can't get enough of this story.
Date: 04/15/2005 - 12:21 am Title: A light shines in you
Wow, look at all the reviews. Everyone loves you, Me included. This was a wonderful chapter. I liked the way Wesley was able to give dawn a little better perspective to her situation. I can't believe Buffy finally told him! His little heart's gotta be burstin with joy. Of course I hope there's more sweet words from Buffy in the future. Spike doesn't get to hear things like that near often enough. I'm just dying for Dawn to tell Spike and Buffy about the journals. I can't wait!
Date: 04/15/2005 - 12:19 am Title: A light shines in you
I enjoyed the emotional domesticity of circling the wagons for Angelus' return. This group is ready for the unexpected, but not emotionally inured to possible consequences. I loved the scene with Buffy and Spike and Connor - her reaction to the baby was well written and heart wrenching, and the need to tell Spike what she was feeling for him was believable in this context. Wesley and Oz are already an intriguing component in this story. I'm looking forward to how they'll feature in the future. You're doing a good job drawing all the characters. Anya was both brittle and sympathetic, and Wesley's emotional support of Dawn was lovely to read.
Date: 04/14/2005 - 11:50 pm Title: A light shines in you
aww buffy and spike are so beautiful togather with her wishing that connor was there baby made me tear eye.Than win she told him that he had her heart in his hands was just so awsome you hit buffy true feeling on the spot.They are so great togather and so in love with each other.If buffy only new she dose have a child are is it daughter's cause me think's kristine and of course dawn are sonny and spike children and won't they be in for a shock.Can't wait till they find out they be in shock.But will love it even more,Great chapter nia agine.Oh loved wesley talk with dawn
Date: 04/14/2005 - 11:06 pm Title: A light shines in you
Awesome update. The scenes between Spike and Buffy were very emotional and well throught out. Your thoughts, back emotions and present emotions were right on. They moved me through the entire chapter from start to finish. Wesley's bit with Dawn at the end really gave a lot to Wesley's character. I like how you put that in. I enjoy seeing Oz, Tara, and Wesley fleshed out into broader and more main characters. Oz and Tara actually make a cute couple, if the story goes more in that direction. Dawn and Wes are so cute. Maybe she can convince Wes that her crush is okay if he likes her because she's an ancient ball of energy in human form. So she's way older than him anyways. LOL. Look forward to the next update.
Date: 04/14/2005 - 11:01 pm Title: A light shines in you
ROCK MY SOCKS. Totally deserves the award. You just really know how to keep us on the edge of our seats don't you?
Date: 04/14/2005 - 10:51 pm Title: A light shines in you
I think this is going to be one of my favorite chapters. There was such emotional depth to each and every scene that played out in the most basic and human way. Thank you, thank you, thank you for the Buffy and Connor moments...I love that she connected with him. So incredibly beautiful. My two other favorite moments were Anya's reaction to Dawn's guilt - a reaction we rarely get from Anya so when it happens it has such a deep impact and the other was Wes comforting Dawn...just such an unexpected moment but one that worked perfectly!
Date: 04/14/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: A light shines in you
no doubt you've got me hooked. I need more and more and more. I wonder is Kirsten is dawn's sister/buffy and spike's daughter. things that make you go hmmm.
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