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Reviewer: Sevvy_O Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2005 - 02:45 am Title: True colors

Mmm leather pants...lol I'm getting sidetracked. Great chapter. Love the spuffy moments. I wonder if they're going to have a talk about their futures? Oooh and will there be more biting *hopeful look* ? Heehee. =)

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2005 - 01:25 am Title: True colors

Angelus "singing very badly." Heh. I liked Buffy thinking of all of Xander's lies. In grabbing Anya, Xander, here, is the man shown at the end of his vision in "Hell's Bells." It's a good exploration and characterization of the worst aspects of canon Xander. I'm glad Anya and the others are realizing the awfulness of his behavior towards her rather than accepting it, as they did on the show. Nice S/B. :)

Reviewer: Esther Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2005 - 01:16 am Title: True colors

Whoa...Xander needs to get the crap beaten outta him...fast! I can't believe he would do/think that about Anya!! I totally get the Buffy/Spike thing he hates, but the stuff with Anya?!! What an a@@!! Thanks goodness Wesley saved her and the baby...and I know the others wanted to just hit him or something...Mr. Harris has crossed the line...he's finally in Willow territory...can't wait for the next one!!!

Reviewer: jade2099 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2005 - 12:16 am Title: True colors

I think Xander is an ass. He just won't let go of this demon notion will he? And Anya...as annoying as she is she has this innocent quality about her. With angelus coming they all need to be on their toes. Casey's comment about being a boyfriend now that was sweet. :) GReat update!

Reviewer: Tam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2005 - 12:09 am Title: True colors

Okay, lemme know what you think about this one, becuase it nearly got completely scrapped. now that would have been a CRIME!! freakin awesome update Nia!

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 11:22 pm Title: True colors

Dawn and casey are so cute togather loved win she blush win casey said that what boyfriend are for.Just so cute,Also loved win dawn said those wankers she is so her daddy little girl are teenage girl can't wait till she tells them the truth.On to angelus who is totally psycho who think's it will be that ease to get to buffy and spike think agine cause spike will be ready for you so will buffy.Looking forward to spike and angelus showdown should be a very good one which am hoping spike come's out the winner in.Now on to another abusive psycho xander who is living in dream world if he think's buffy will ever leave spike now are ever cause it will never happened.OH i forgot xander did always live in a dreamworld win it came to his sick obsession with buffy.Looking forward win his dream's will trashed agine.And i always love buffy and spike scene's togather win it's just them alone love it even more win spike and her have disagreement's it only show how much they love each other.Another great chapter nia and i hope your feeling better.And a big time congrts on your nomination at LLG cause you so derseve it

Reviewer: Rana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 10:44 pm Title: True colors

Is it wrong that I actually like Angelus better than Angel. Yeah, he's way evil, but he's at least entertaining. I can't wait to see what his first move will be. The part where Spike was rambling out loud was just hilarious! LoL. It was so adorably endearing. *sigh* Spike on morphine is soooo cute. Xander grabbing Anya, and nearly shaking her and Connor, just made me see red. Gods, he's following in his father's footsteps! I'm really liking the idea of putting him and Angelus in a room together more and more. Poor Anya. I wish someone would stand up for her. Wonderful chapter again, Nia! I loved all the little coupley moments between Dawn/Casey and Buffy/Spike. It just made this chapter feel so homey, so comfortable.

Reviewer: Pin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: True colors

I'm very glad that you didn't scrap this chapter. I think that you covered a lot of important ground. You clarified Buffy's feelings and gave us a lot of fun StonedSpike. You gave us the possibility of throwing Drusilla into the mix - definitely upping the potential for crazy nastiness. You gave us a nice explanation of Dawn's current feelings toward Spike. And last, but definitely not least you gave us Anya being Anya, who I like; and Xander being Xander, who I loath. You do a really great loathsome Xander. Thanks and I look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: SlinkyPK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 08:58 pm Title: True colors

Xander keeps getting worse and worse! He's coming apart at the seams and I like it! I've actually decided to go back and re-read Origings, since I loved it so much!

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 08:58 pm Title: True colors

Because they're the Leather Pants of Evil, held in place by the Belt Buckle of Doom. Angelus is such an evil bastard. You write him well. (Is that a compliment that you wirte "evil bastard" well? LOL Oh well, meant it as such.) Another good Buffy and Spike moment. Drugged up Spike made me chuckle. Like his concern for Buffy and her continued persistence. She's a stubborn one that Slayer. And Xander... Ugh. Don't like the whelp. Anya needs to get out before he has a chance to humiliate her at the altar...

Reviewer: Addie Logan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 08:58 pm Title: True colors

Because they're the Leather Pants of Evil, held in place by the Belt Buckle of Doom. Angelus is such an evil bastard. You write him well. (Is that a compliment that you wirte "evil bastard" well? LOL Oh well, meant it as such.) Another good Buffy and Spike moment. Drugged up Spike made me chuckle. Like his concern for Buffy and her continued persistence. She's a stubborn one that Slayer. And Xander... Ugh. Don't like the whelp. Anya needs to get out before he has a chance to humiliate her at the altar...

Reviewer: Adriana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 08:47 pm Title: True colors

ooohh..can Angelus eat Xander please?

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 08:27 pm Title: True colors

Don't scrap it. It's good. Xander is an ass ... everyone sees it more plainly here. Spike doesn't want to drink from Buffy, but she isn't going to let it go. Angelus is way evil and really going to piss everyone off. Dawn and Case are cute .... There is so much more too. I love this story, and I love the nuances that you have given each character. You've done a great job with all of them. I look forward to more updates.

Reviewer: Wolfspider Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 08:13 pm Title: True colors

Scrapped???? what you smok'n Nia?? *laughs*. I have no idea why leather pants seem to get equated with being evil. I hope Angelous gets chaffed from wearing them, thinking about his never ending oral sex with Dru. Rat bastard. Ok why did I not have a nice boyfriend like Casey, how sweet was he to just comfort Dawn. Kuddos to that young man. Spike rambeling was great. Pasty Cline, yes a wonderful talent. Blueeeeeeeeeee oohhhhhh soooooo lonesome for youuuuu *oh sorry it just came in* Buffy being a stubborn bitch, she wants her Spike well and that is that. Go Buffy. Anya would be a good mom. How sweet was it her holding the babe. Xander, oh Xander you rotten, no good piece of f'n shit and more bad names, how dare he how dare he grab her. how dare he grab her and with a baby in her arms. Someone please just let Anya tell him to go to hell and then someone please like kill him. Ok now that i got that out. Wonderful capture of Buffy thinking about how Spike never lied to her and how he has always been honest no mattter what. I think it just makes her love him more. Spike being honest about the blood line and what was coming. Batten down the hatches all, because the asshole vampire is going to hit town soul or not. Please stake his ass. Excellent chapter as always. this is progressing so well. You flow like a mountain stream with steadiness at some points and rapids at others. You give it all balance.

Reviewer: demonica mills Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 07:49 pm Title: True colors

Nia! No scrapping of chapters!!! This was good I love Spike with his drug induced ramblings. made me giggle. And it looks like poor Xander is going to end up like his parents. sigh, men. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: hmm... Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 10:43 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

great chapter!!! i get so excited when i see an update - you have all the characters voices done so well its crazy! i'm sorry to hear about all the pain you are in - hopefully you will be fealing better soon :)

Reviewer: blodiebear Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/29/2005 - 12:33 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

loved it. it's about time that buffy said that she loved spke. even if he didn't hear it. i hope she says it again soon. keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Cam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2005 - 08:24 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Wow. I just read the last chapter and I can't wait for an update. I think this story is beautifully crafted and I look forward to seeing just where you take the characters.

Reviewer: Cam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2005 - 07:16 pm Title: Tomorrow's questions

I give you crumbs. Tons and tons of crumbs. No, scratch that, I give you an entire loaf of bread. I absolutely adore this story and I can't wait for the next installment. It really is terrific!

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2005 - 12:20 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

that was nice of xander to help with the bags. anya's musings about them has me curious. i do hope she can find someone who appreciates her. spike thinking that he would go to dust when buffy died, very very old is classic spike. that is just so how he is. i love that they put the crib in with buffy and spike. i has thought it would go in with tara but yet again you pleasently surprise me. glad Oz voiced his suspisions about willow with spike and buffy. now i want to know if tara will revele to them what she saw. it still makes me giggle that giles is resercheing vampire pregnacys.....hehehhee. he is right tho. will they ever get a break? angelus.....such a bastard btu i have to admit i just love angelus. i'd stake angel in a second btu angelus....great character. oh oh oh oh......she said it......she told him and he heard her and smiled.....aawww..made my day..*sighs* wolfram and hart used an urn or osiris....*giggles* xander can be sooooo narrowminded tho i am so glad they all stood up to his idiocy. casey bringing balloons is the cutest. what a good kid. wonderful chapter and sooo fullof things going on as always. i do hope you feel ok hunny

Reviewer: mlgm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2005 - 11:42 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Great chapter. By the way, did Wesley mean to say Connor was awake again as he came down the steps, rather than Spike's awake again? Love your Tara & Oz, need more scenes with them. Maybe they'll go tell Willow to watch out for Angel? Or maye that will fall to Xander.

Reviewer: beasleysmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/2005 - 11:22 am Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Where do I start. I have just read the first book, the in between, and now what you have so far, and I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!! I am totaly hooked. I so wish this is how the show really went, cause i have to say I am loving all the spuffy going on. The fact that Joss never went into to much detail as to how Dawn came about used to really bug me, but now when you bring the whole Spike/Buffy thng up that would have been perfect. I don't want to write a novel or anything, but I can't wait for the next post! I hope you feel better soon(what ever is aling you)! Speedy recovery! Kuddos!

Reviewer: Gail Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 05:03 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

I thought this chapter flowed very well from scene to scene. It was filled with wonderful moments as well. Great job of choreographing all the many characters and, at the same time, keeping them so vivid. I hope you feel better. :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 02:58 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

No need to worry about the chapter - would I say. I don't now why you thought so. :) Willow used the Urn of Osiris too to bring Buffy back... loved Spike's musing about what he would do .. seems he would love to have a baby of his own like Buffy does. Take you time hun, no pressure, right?

Reviewer: Miski Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/2005 - 02:55 pm Title: Half a dozen reasonable hours

Love the story. I am hoping that Spike and Buffy will find out that they already have one child together and it's good to see Dawn displaying some traits inherited from her dad. She definitely wouldn't mind having some siblings and according to this chapter that is very much possible, yay!! I like Xander but he needs to come around and understand Buffy and Spike soon or things will not work out. Well I guess when Giles goes back to Sunnydale he will find the journals and figure out about Dawn's origins....that will be interesting...hmmm...Keep up the awesome work that you are doing with this story. Seriously you deserve major congratulations.

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