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Reviewer: Talen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 08:22 pm Title: Communication got me down

Wonderful chapter as always.

Reviewer: ariadne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: Communication got me down

thank-you for the authors notes. i can listen to you teach all day long. i am honored to be your sister. great talk between tara and buffy. gods, the revelations.....they both have so much to deal with and i am glad they have eachother. willow, willow,willow....i have to say that i would love to see her kick some angelus ass. i loved this chapter as much as i love all the others. i am enjoying a second read.

Reviewer: Lyns Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: Communication got me down

pish, whoever said you're not moving the plot along is a dummy.a fool. completely unhinged. your writing is perfect in every way. You ahve the characters down pat, your plot is pure gold, and the emotions you express in your words melt in my heart like butter on my tongue. In short - me like it, ignore the flamy moody people. just read the last 2 chaps in one, so as for the previous one - WOW. i love how you handled the revelations about dawn being buffy and spikes. after the intial blurting out you made it so perfectly understated, quietly brilliant, and just plain beautiful. this chapter was all with the exciting willowy revelations - and again you had me with my heart in my throat just waiting for angelus to come through the door at any minute and eat her (although the more i learn about your willow the less that concerns me!). OK. this is getting long, so i'll stop for now!

Reviewer: WolfSpider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: Communication got me down

First off i am not sure which i prefer the milk and cookies or the beer and whiskey *grins* thank you hun. This chapter is filled with shit to come and oh baby when it happens. Tara goddes bless that woman she is so much stronger than she thinks she is. I give her so much credit for telling Buffy what she saw. You nailed her way of doing so very well. Gave her that Tara shyness but at the same time the strength to reveal what was needed. Oh my heart was in my throat with Buffy running up the stairs, I think I held my breath till she got there and i huffing along with her. Spike how f'n sweet and cute him talkn to Connor and reasurring the lil guy he would help out. His reflections of Dawn were incredible. How he always knew she was a part of him somehow. Buffy telling spike "how could I not love you" that is a perfect way she would of said it too. In away to not let herself just let it out. Though knowing full well she can't do without spike. Willow and Xander oh christ frick and frack...Willow the manipulator and XAnder the stuge(sp). Well now Giles needs to get his ass home, Willow needs to watch her back, Buffy and Spike need have hot monkey love soon *laughs*. Angel needs to get staked..and oh your muse needs to keep on bringing the good stuff to you for some awesome writing. EXCELLENT chapter...nice movement..interesting insight in yet a deeper mode of the characters beings.

Reviewer: Carol Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Communication got me down

I'm getting nervous. Both Angelus and Willow to worry about. I love how protective Spike is of Connor. Please update when you can.

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Communication got me down

I look forward to each chapter. As usual this was a great chapter. Please continue to update sooner and more often. PLEASE

Reviewer: Cecilia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Communication got me down

Hooray...an update!!! Loved it, loved it, loved it. I can't wait to see where it goes from here and what happens to Willow. I hope she doesn't find some way to team up with Angelus to try to hurt Spike. Poor Tara--she must be so sad:( Spike's the best--"even if I got dusted I'd find a way back"--my heart skipped a beat when I read that.

Reviewer: zanthinegirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/17/2005 - 07:46 pm Title: Communication got me down

Ooohh-- the plot thickens! Very interesting update; continue to love this story!

Reviewer: Appomattoxco Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2005 - 03:46 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. On the possitive side that means less of a wait for updates! This is the chapter I've been waiting for since the begining of Origins. You've done an awsome job. I was weepy too. If I were Dawn I'd use Mom & Dad in private to address B&S and Daddy when I wanted something.

Author's Response: I'm sooo glad you said that. I wanted to know if I was the only crazy one who cried during portions of this chapter. Thanks for admitting it!

Reviewer: vampkiss Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/2005 - 11:24 am Title: The ragged edges of truth

Been a horrible reviewer lately, but still reading and LOVING this story. Simply amazing. :)

Author's Response: Hey, its okay, all's forgiven. Thanks for the boost. It means alot!

Reviewer: Annette Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 11:43 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

So touching and sweet.

Author's Response: Well, thank you so much for that. I tried as best I could with that scene.

Reviewer: phantomwriter Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 05:46 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

I've been reading this 'Origins' (and the first one) for at least three days, and now...Now I have to be like everyone else, and wait the excruciating amount of time it takes for people to update, be it hours or days. I am LOVING this story, and really loving the perspective on Tara. I always thought that the writers neglected her as a character, and that she had the potential for an incredible amount of depth. So, only three questions. 1) When will we see Kirsten again, and who (or what) is she? 2) Will Dawn still call Buffy and Spike by their names, or will she them Mom and Dad? (Basically, is she gonna come clean with everyone else) GREAT job. Update soon!

Author's Response: Three days!!! OMG. Thanks sooo much!! Um, actually, you sort of asked four questions. . . but. . . to answer them in order: perhaps soon; you'll find out when she comes around next time; Dawn hasn't made up her mind, but she's leaning toward Spike and Buffy . . . . 3 Days! Damn!

Reviewer: MG Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/2005 - 04:00 am Title: The ragged edges of truth

Great chapter! You managed to bring a whole gamut of emotions into it and it worked really well. Congratulations.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 10:03 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

Oh dearie no need to be nervous.....this was wonderfully done.........it brought tears to my eyes of sadness and happiness.......and now baby makes 4..........

Author's Response: Yeah, baby Connor makes 4. . . Thanks so much for your reivew, and I swear, I didn't mean to make anyone cry. . .

Reviewer: MysticSemaj Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

Good story so far, very well written and each character is written very in character. You are quite the talented writer and I can't wait to read more. Hope you get to feeling better, real life sucks.

Author's Response: Thanks for the good wishes. Real life does suck. Reviews like yours make me want to keep going. . . even when its hard. So thanks.

Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 08:29 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

Finally! They know! I've been waiting forever! (that's not a compliant btw! I love the story) Wonder how everyone will react?

Reviewer: slinky Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 08:09 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

Oh, Nia, it's...I'm actually crying here! You made me cry! It's just so...it's gorgeous! And I'm crying, dammit!

Author's Response: Aww. . . slinky. . I didn't mean to make you cry. . . I really didn't.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 02:07 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

Loved the way Dawn did say it - it was so naturally. Awesome chapter, indeed! Loved the little family.

Author's Response: *Grins* Thanks, and thanks so much for reviewing all the time. . . means a lot to me!

Reviewer: Jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 01:10 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

It worked beautifully. It was tender and emotional and oh so satisfying. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks! It did kind of come together nicely.

Reviewer: Diabola Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 12:56 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

Good chapter Nia. Like the way the turth came out. Much better than some planned and prepared meeting with a bunch of people who don't even belong there. - Yup, you've got it right, I don't think too highly of those so called Scoobie-meetings.
And the reactions were beautiful! Buffy really seems to be coming back to herself if the first thing she does is pout over Dawn not looking more like her :-)
Spike was great with her, but then, he always knew just how to handle Dawn...
Really good, looking forward to the next part.

Author's Response: Thanks! No. . . no scoobie meetings -- coz really, they don't exist as a group anymore. . . but I know what you mean. Spike has the Summers girls all pegged -- and they've both got him wrapped around their fingers. . . And, yeah, Buffy's on the road to herself.

Reviewer: sheila Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 12:09 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

My god so beautiful had tears to my eyes.As buffy said to spike there a family now his family is beautiful nia.And dawn telling spike how much she need her mommy to was just so so emotionaly Wow there not more i could say about this chapter except Wow Wow And Wow.Spike no only has buffy heart but he has a beautiful daughter who worship the ground he walk's on and has always loved him long before buffy could.You have nothing to be nervous about with this great chapter Nia cause it was so tearful and oh so beautiful.BARVO BARVO BARVO NIA

Author's Response: Thank you soo much for reviewing all the time. I'm soo grateful that you like this story and tell me so. I"m really glad you are enjoying this!

Reviewer: Cam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 12:00 pm Title: The ragged edges of truth

YES!!!!!!! I LOVE this chapter! I am so glad that Dawn finally told Buffy and Spike that they are her parents. Woohoo! I loved their reactions to being told that they were her parents also. I LOVE this story!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Reactions like yours give me a boost and motivation to keep going.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 11:43 am Title: The ragged edges of truth

This chapter was emotional without being overwrought. Spike and Buffy's reaction to the revelation rang true, and it solidified feelings they already held for Dawn. Buffy's petulant "She didn't get anything from me" was an amusing bit.

Author's Response: Oh, but can't you see her giving that exact reaction? Its just soo Buffy. Thanks for noticing that!

Reviewer: Steph Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 11:22 am Title: The ragged edges of truth

You want to know what I think eh? ...Well I really liked it I felt for Dawn I can understand why she thought everything was her fault. Spike's reaction was perfect...totally spike. And buffy was right on I wanted to cry at the end it was soo good! Want more!!

Author's Response: Always makes me happy when someone points out that the characterizations are right, because its one of the things I really work on to make as close to them as I can. Thanks!

Reviewer: Miski Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/10/2005 - 10:28 am Title: The ragged edges of truth

I loved this chapter. You conveyed so much emotion in this chapter. I am so glad that Spike and Buffy finally know that Dawn is their daughter. Very well written. It exceeded my expectations for the disclosure of this important piece of info. Thanks!!

Author's Response: Its always cool when I exceed someone's expectations. Thank you so much!

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